in the beginning scene with your mother, you cut some funny stuff out. And with the mother, to get that part funny, you need to go over the top with emotions. For example- when she says "your 580 years old, you think your gonna live forever?" she needs to be lecturing him, scolding him, like she is almost mad about it. Again when she talks about her friends having grandchildren, she is exasperated, and you should of had her wail it, like "Greey HAAIR! thats WHat!" then have her stomp off.
drama is crap on mics acing should be louder
vladcount 1 year ago
Oh man! This bring back memories.
We performed this play too (in Secondary school) I played Becky's father (The third girl's father in the last part).
Wububub 1 year ago
in the beginning scene with your mother, you cut some funny stuff out. And with the mother, to get that part funny, you need to go over the top with emotions. For example- when she says "your 580 years old, you think your gonna live forever?" she needs to be lecturing him, scolding him, like she is almost mad about it. Again when she talks about her friends having grandchildren, she is exasperated, and you should of had her wail it, like "Greey HAAIR! thats WHat!" then have her stomp off.
mearmybro 2 years ago
OH NO ... He Kissed a Woman! How dare you cheat on your boyfriend! lol
wpem 3 years ago
This was excellent and funny. Thanks for putting this up. PS Loved the Bela Lugosi accent LOL
rossperth 3 years ago
hahaa lol. poor guy just wants bluuuhd
auroraginga 3 years ago
jason your accent is badass :)
and this had me laughing :D can't wait to see the other two parts
xypowerpop 3 years ago
Glad you've enjoyed it, so far. :) Have you had a chance to check out the rest?
gadgetfreak84 3 years ago
but yeah, it's funny so far :)
tattyBmusique 3 years ago
:( i thought the accent was inconsistent... come on.. roll the R on giRl and so on... but when it was there it was FUNNY :)
i liked this!
..u remind me of someone i know and miss, kinda:(
tattyBmusique 3 years ago