i think when he stumbles, its kind of weird because the voice is going steady while he stumbles, and when someone stumbles their words usually come out a little different like a strain. if your using audio, try making him stumble at a time when he's not talking, or findind a part in his line where it could sound like he stumbles.
I'm not sure why the guy below me is so judgemental, because I think your animation is great! The lip-synching is really well done and on time, and the motions they make are exaggerated in a good way. Nice job!
@KeekeeKarin5 Relax, I know the RotitaYamaneko personally. And I actually encourage people to critique my work. She is just trying to help me improve. I've been looking at this animation for the past month and a pair of fresh eyes catch things I miss.
I know you were running out of time but parts I found uneasy were: "but in the end, time" needs work and I believe he moves too much at the last words. I like the ears down but maybe it could of been done sooner, like he remembers.. then says it.
Either way man, good job and good luck! Love the breathing motions!
@RotitaYamaneko There were so many places I wanted just a 8th second longer pause. But the audio track was what it was. It was a fun challenge, and I really did want to tweak this more.
i think when he stumbles, its kind of weird because the voice is going steady while he stumbles, and when someone stumbles their words usually come out a little different like a strain. if your using audio, try making him stumble at a time when he's not talking, or findind a part in his line where it could sound like he stumbles.
but its /really/ good. what software do you use?
Riverstorm108 3 months ago
The orange guy is like "WTF?" xD
Tyannalyn 1 year ago
@Tyannalyn Yup! you got it! :-D
Buddyb309 1 year ago
@Buddyb309 Lol XD
Tyannalyn 1 year ago
This is amazing. It looks like the work of a true proffesional.
TalentedOrangeTv 1 year ago
@TalentedOrangeTv lol not professional yet. Someday maybe.
Buddyb309 1 year ago
I'm not sure why the guy below me is so judgemental, because I think your animation is great! The lip-synching is really well done and on time, and the motions they make are exaggerated in a good way. Nice job!
KeekeeKarin5 1 year ago
@KeekeeKarin5 Relax, I know the RotitaYamaneko personally. And I actually encourage people to critique my work. She is just trying to help me improve. I've been looking at this animation for the past month and a pair of fresh eyes catch things I miss.
Buddyb309 1 year ago
I know you were running out of time but parts I found uneasy were: "but in the end, time" needs work and I believe he moves too much at the last words. I like the ears down but maybe it could of been done sooner, like he remembers.. then says it.
Either way man, good job and good luck! Love the breathing motions!
RotitaYamaneko 1 year ago
@RotitaYamaneko There were so many places I wanted just a 8th second longer pause. But the audio track was what it was. It was a fun challenge, and I really did want to tweak this more.
Buddyb309 1 year ago