Don't Funk Up Our Beats Contest IV - Mitch

[OfficialDeviousMike]

Bro, your lyrics are great. Very ill. Rhyme scheme wasnt that great. Flow is great. Just improve rhyme scheme and it be super ill. It was raw tho.

Good Job.

[ThaUnknownUniverse]

check my shit out i murdered that shit its the main video on my page n vote for me or ill just create 100 diff facebook pages n vote for myself lol

[CadoTvRipENT]

Good flow, Rhyme scheme was whack as fuck, Got a little to horrorcore for my taste, Decent voice, overall like 60/100, Good shit, but in my opinion verbal phantoms takin this shit. * Im not in the contest so dont think im shit talking * just giving my opinion.

[CadoTvRipENT]

@CadoTvRipENT Btw the rhyme scheme comment is based on the fact that you didnt use a single multi in this, they were all choke, broke, spoke, coke. Simple shit.

[NinjaSEB2014]

@RokkaBeat514 Honestly i'm not a huge fan of it but it's not bad, just not to my taste, trolls like @josdavis5309 are gonna be troll and he's probably gonna say the same thing to another rapper that's in the contest because he is a troll. Keep going man, good luck to ya.

[RokkaBeat514]

@NinjaSEB2014 haha thts true, thanks for checkin out the vid anyways.

[koalalauncher]

Not bad man. Always follow your heart, keep working on your craft, and never let anyone tell you you shouldn't live your dreams. Best of luck.

[RokkaBeat514]

@koalalauncher thank you :)

[josdavis5309]

you send me messages asking me of my opinion, well here, your dog shit. i hate rap, i can write down stuff on a piece of paper that rhymes or sounds good, and then talk, but then id feel like im not using my talents to the full extent. you want my opinions on how to sound better, or some shit like that send me metal, not this shit. stupid fuck.

[RokkaBeat514]

@josdavis5309 wow lol, i appologize, don't kill yourself over it man

[josdavis5309]

@RokkaBeat514 thanks

[TheAndrewlawlrence]

@josdavis5309 I love metal over rap, but your comment is just ignorant. I dare you to "write down stuff on a piece of paper" on Hopsin's level, or shit, even THIS guy's level. It would probably be even more nonsense and sound even shittier. Wouldn't be surprised if your angry ass is a horrible musician anyway.

[RokkaBeat514]

@TheAndrewlawlrence haha thanks for the support man.

[koalalauncher]

@josdavis5309 O_o u mad?

[josdavis5309]

@koalalauncher no i hate rap, and this song is terrible. you can think rap's good and the shit bla bla bla, i dont see where any talent is involved in rap, other than freestyling where your spittin rhymes off the top of your head. any one can write down some lyrics that rhyme and make sense, throw some auto tune on to your out-of-tune voice, and some how these assholes make millions, yea im a hater fuck rap

[3600omega]

keep it up dude,dont let anybody discourage you!

[bsloan377]

@Deztrukttt How the fuck is he suppose to get noticed? your a fuckin idiot man i hate shitty ppl like you. U should be exited to hear someone uve never heard before rather than hating on them for tryin to put there shit out there. Good shit Rokka keep it up

[RokkaBeat514]

@bsloan377 haha thank u man, n thanks for checkin out the vid.

[DEPARTUERS19]

nice....

[BigTymeDVINE]

Just some constructive criticism. Spend more time on the video. Maybe like 30 bucks for a flip on ebay and a cracked version of final cut or adobe premier. Presentation is a big deal.

[RokkaBeat514]

@BigTymeDVINE Alright thanks man i'll definately check those out.

[TheMicWeezy]

Nopt bad, at all. Check my entry if you don't mind.

[Deztrukttt]

considered you inboxed ppl this video to get views, shitty

[RokkaBeat514]

@Deztrukttt that's how promoting your shit works man, you put your shit out for people to see it...you can suck my d*** tho

[Deztrukttt]

@RokkaBeat514 i forgot to mention, it sucks to begin with, but you inboxed it to me, and im giving you my opinnion, so do the honors, suck your own dick

[WoozyWillis]

very skilled, lots of potentialll!

[ArsiniMusic]

mixing is kinda crappy and flow is a lil choppy. Vocals need work prob too. Decent overall i think.

[MrB8G]

much talent, so much more to come

[chaoscrosby]

demented sickness good verse

[fatmanjon23]

hopsin flow...pretty good some punchlines where off but overall was coo

[GetMurked423]

Good shit but i aint c this on facebook B!

[Wikidnizz]

pretty wicked man lol. yo vid dint show up on fb tho

[supertrunks25]

Good

[xMelloz]

yeeee mitch!!!! too hype!! keep it up buddy

[ChillaK2Kold]

iight!!!