no2negative put down of other peoples songs ... obviously a songwriter who only likes his own style ... a constructive criticism runs to more than two words
Took you 2 years to come up with this? Starting with the Chorus is a bad idea. You need to build up the momentum rather than going straight into the chorus. I would also slow down the beat. It sounds too much like a song you'd hear in a nursing home. The piano sounds too light. This is rugby not pony riding. It needs more gravitas. More edge. I don't know if you can salvage the song but as it stands it is not a fitting tribute. Ah now I know what it sounds like Joe Duffy's Fridays. That's it!
nice video...but 4 fuck sake get rid of that song
munsterrugby4life 2 years ago 2
fuckin crap
lovemunster 3 years ago
awful song
No2Racism 3 years ago
no2negative put down of other peoples songs ... obviously a songwriter who only likes his own style ... a constructive criticism runs to more than two words
dezywalls 3 years ago
I'm not trying to offer constructive criticism, the song is awful.
No2Racism 3 years ago
thanks ... glad you like it ... always good when the comments are more articulate than the original !!!!
dezywalls 3 years ago
Took you 2 years to come up with this? Starting with the Chorus is a bad idea. You need to build up the momentum rather than going straight into the chorus. I would also slow down the beat. It sounds too much like a song you'd hear in a nursing home. The piano sounds too light. This is rugby not pony riding. It needs more gravitas. More edge. I don't know if you can salvage the song but as it stands it is not a fitting tribute. Ah now I know what it sounds like Joe Duffy's Fridays. That's it!
killiandarcy42023 3 years ago
great video, terrible song
oopsder 4 years ago