Kyle, great film. Great concept, and you pulled it off very well. (You didn't credit yourself as editor...not sure if you forgot...) I think some of the cuts can be faster, and create a momentum near the end. I think it'd be great to see the two sides of his personality bleeding together. The music should get more intense, louder, suspenseful. Good choice for B&W, it helped the contrast between good/evil. Nice work - hope to see more soon.
Thanks very much. I am thinking of doing some more tinerking with the cuts, and I agree with the "Bleeding together" of the two personalities. I originally hadn't written in the little subliminal cuts, then I reshot and added in the "slitting throat" part to kinda show the "death" of that kyle. Thanks for the comments and suggestions.
Great stuff! I love this short!!
POZERVISION 2 years ago
I loved it. Great jobb ^^ 5star movie.
Hope you make more :D
DiemetriX 4 years ago
u get A+. i actually think it was best pozer project out of everyones.
-mike
mikey4d 4 years ago
dude that was awesome, good jorb.
putmetosleep87 4 years ago
Kyle, great film. Great concept, and you pulled it off very well. (You didn't credit yourself as editor...not sure if you forgot...) I think some of the cuts can be faster, and create a momentum near the end. I think it'd be great to see the two sides of his personality bleeding together. The music should get more intense, louder, suspenseful. Good choice for B&W, it helped the contrast between good/evil. Nice work - hope to see more soon.
patchard 4 years ago
Thanks very much. I am thinking of doing some more tinerking with the cuts, and I agree with the "Bleeding together" of the two personalities. I originally hadn't written in the little subliminal cuts, then I reshot and added in the "slitting throat" part to kinda show the "death" of that kyle. Thanks for the comments and suggestions.
TheKyleShow 4 years ago