[Maple Story Series] - Feather Wish : Chapter One

[SmashingTheNew]

nice story..check out my machinima dude

[xArisa03]

Lol I was gonna make a series that had to do with all the feather earrings too xD but I like your series better :P

[xJuZtiNz]

What's the musicbox played at the beginning? I really loved it! :D

[coolguy3000ful]

Why does everyone's name sounds like mine XD

[IsStuPid1]

Nice story! It reminds me of a video game I used to play.

[BlacZDragon]

oh and if u wanna send a reply back telling me off thats perfectly fine

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At BlacZDragon, I honestly don't care. I prefer your honest opinions. I didn't write this series, my friend did I went along with it and animate it.

[BlacZDragon]

man u cold use alittle work with the storyline, ur trying to unravle (srry bad speller) the story to fast and it makes it kinda confusing, im not saying ur bad its just you could use a little work

[WildStormzz]

HaHa Cant Wait For 100 more episodes :P

[DaamnItsMe]

What's the background music at the beginning?

[omgdoadoa2]

Reminds me of code gease for some reason

[ivy113511]

You should improve by not making all blury when they walk.

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At ivy113511, I already checked that off my list. I've been animating just not this series.

[kevinyang1312]

I really love maplestory stories like these but I don't know any good ones... Can anyone recommend?

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At kevinyang1312, ever heard of Hirari Genesis, Hybrid, Sovereign or Turtlebear Origins? o.o; There's plenty more out there. Good luck finding them. :> I found most of them.

[BlooDragonMoney17]

epicness

[SushiZXC]

Japanese translation, Yamino Hikari: dark light

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At SushiZXC, Haha... Good work? :>

[xIchigoMiku]

i think Chain's is cute :d

[WeirdnessAwsomeness]

i still feel bad about that poor guy with purple hair :( awsome series though:)

[WeirdnessAwsomeness]

chuckles peaCOCKS XD

[Sharingan576]

Krad is dark spelt backwards and Thgil Is light spelled backwards

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At Sharingan576, I know, in the end everyone will realize it anyways so it doesn't matter. MHManiac1527 already figured this out so yeah. Good job though? :>

[emilya321cprocks]

Epic beginning!!! I would love to see more from this! 

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At emilya321cprocks, I'm glad that you liked it so far. :> I'll start working on ep.3 once I return from my vacation.

[StarAngel963]

your character are so cute ~ :D it is very creactive! :D

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At StarAngel963, Why thank you. :>

[iiLoveVanilla]

its quite hard to tell who is saying what at the end part, there is no differentiating of the texts at the fighting part, maybe a change of colour for text for different people might be good and that the quality is kind of blur. The fight scene should be longer. Story is quite cool though.

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At iiLoveVanilla, about the ending part, I know it's hard to tell who's saying who. >.> I already fixed some of my mistakes on chapter 2 but there's more...

[MHManiac1527]

Nice family names light=thgil dark=krad

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At MHManiac1527, Did you have find solving them? :D They are not family names but a royal title-ish that states that they're from this/that kingdom.

[MHManiac1527]

@TheInnerProductions Just saying that its cool X3

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : fun instead of "find" wrong word... Typos... -.-"

[iKaameraChan]

Awesome series!! <3

By the way, please tell me you got that speech bubble from BannedStory 4, itself

I've been looking for that TT_TT

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At iKaameraChan , The speech bubbles are from BannedStory 4, if you're still trying to find it, I can send you it or you can search it up at BS4. Skill is called "Seal". o.o;

[iKaameraChan]

@TheInnerProductions Oh my God, I feel like a dang moron...

Thank you :) I'll look for it myself. Thanks for your help.

Are you still going to continue this? :)

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At iKaameraChan, You're welcome. And yes, I'm still going to continue this, I'm about to release Chapter Two sometime today.

[iKaameraChan]

@TheInnerProductions Yay! :)

[SoulHunter425]

good

[CandieCane100]

JOEEEEEEE

[TheInnerProductions]

@CandieCane100 Alex: What about me? :(

[CandieCane100]

@TheInnerProductions You're just a purple dinosaur. Sorta like Barnie, except less creepy and more pro. :)

[IAmSpamable]

Really good work JV, again, i wanna put emphasis on grammar and the way you write your sentences. I saw some mistakes slip, and also some stuff that could have been formulated better. One thing, i think the whole scenary is a taaad too closed up, seeing too many pixels can get annoying, so make it from many plans if you can.

One last thing, you should change the font depending on who talks and if its a flashback or wtv.

Real good job overall JV, keep up the good work!

[IceColdGoggles]

@IAmSpamable I agree on too many pixels (^_^)

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At Spam, you should become the writer instead of me so I can somewhat focus on the animation! If you wanted to. >.>

[IAmSpamable]

@TheInnerProductions I wouldn't mind at all JV :D

[kenhatesjun]

This is awesome for the first minute I was totally hooked Keep up on the episodes I'm bored a lot

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At kenhatesjun, glad to hear that you actually liked it. Thanks for your support. :D

[DevilAngel773436]

The only thing I've noticed is that the plot's moving a tad too fast.

But it's really interesting and nice!~ :D Good luck on working on the next part.

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At DevilAngel773436, thanks for your concerns. I'll try to slow it down a bit next time.

[Karin5461]

that guy is creepy with the eyes >_<

[TheInnerProductions]

Joe : At TheSealedTruth93, I kinda agree on the speech bubbles, it was quite big in my opinion. o.o;