Writing Fiction & Poetry : How to Write a Romantic Love Poem

[lawshorizon]

Excellent!

[357nogard]

i wish this guy was my creative writing teacher instead of the one i have now

[matthewafrancis]

thx Santa :D really helped :)

[EVHizGOD]

holy shit mr sanders from kfc writes poems lol

[loltotallyrolled25]

@EVHizGOD sanders is bald

[awonderland123]

what if i want to write a love poem but im not inlove at all ?

please someone reply

[hamandcheesus]

@awonderland123 Give up. It's going to be completely fake if you don't feel it. You'll just end up writing something not worth reading, with no feeling or true emotion. Stick to something less, I don't know, limited.

[BigLittlePlanet]

I love you.

[Pongo0625]

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[Creeveyable]

KFC... finger lickin' good...

[notsofunnyperson123]

@Creeveyable thats what she said.

[OrganicCrack]

i'm so lost. i can write but i want to get some of my poems published....

[mihiribrayan]

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[minecraftgirll]

Tahnks santa((: helped lots

[TheChemicalgirl2000]

Thanks for sharing:)

[rfvietnamrose]

Thanks for sharing, Sir. Have a wonderful day all!

[reneperez50]

Respect well said to.

[skribbles33]

As a novice poet, how would you rate my poem? Search, "The World Beholds A Mutual Eye",

[RJCkyStudios]

this still didnt help me =(

[netcharm]

You saved my day. God bless!

[TTjyk]

thank you it's really helped :)

[Scorinitron]

hehe mario moustache totally distracted me

[ShaunMicheals4271]

dildoman3000 ur a bit.........well u know wat i mean ur a bit gay so shut ur motherfukin downlow lips and go have fun wiv some random hobo!!!

[PeeshPeeshTichma]

I think he's very informative :)

[youbetterbelievehah]

Ok Santa, well, what I want is...

[saswata98]

there is nothing funny in it bitch

[screamorox12345]

sorry, i couldnt space it out more nd put the other sentence thingys below eachother, not enough space

[chalkbox12]

very nice poem

[northpark0]

its nice but its kind of simple..you should go back and make the words more complexed that shoot out the readers eye or the listener..I just sounds to much roses are red violets are blue type poem

[dildoman3000]

u suck balls nigga u sound like a faggot ass fruitcake i wish i knew u and was ryt next to u when i heard the poem so i culd spit in ur face and smack the shit out of u bitch ass nigga

[MrNikcccc]

@dildoman3000 ???

[inuyashadabomb]

1st poem

Are love worth more than gold and diamonds....

your touch worth more than life it self....

your beauty is everything but your life is more.......

2nd poem

when i see you my heart stops......

when i feel you....time stops.....

when i kiss you....my breath is gone...

when you die......life stops...

please tell me if they good Dx

[Shadestar3]

The ellipses are unnecessary and distracting. If you're gonna use ellipses, don't put more than 3, and don't use them so often.

As for the poems...cliche. I've heard similar like them already. "When I/When you" very common repetitive structure.

Better luck next time.

[JugeZaLawYaHaZa]

Reaching far, reaching for, I only touched winter.

This means anything but mostly one thing, a person can reach so far for another and your work gets nothing in return but you'll fall into the abyss of pain, coldness, tears of hate, and sometimes the person grabs the edge and climes back up, and becomes the most deadly thing to the person who broke it. Did you get that? cause yours is very normal compared to allot of other poetry, it doesn't have that standing out reach.

But you can find that.

[JugeZaLawYaHaZa]

Sorry this is for

inuyashadabomb

[northpark0]

thats beautiful

[JugeZaLawYaHaZa]

Why do you think so?

[estoboy29]

delusional... life never stops since there is no death everything alive, time doesnt exist only moments

[imgucciyadigg]

i really needed this

[Aelle2000]

I had no problem understanding it. Notice how Shakespeare expands on a "Summer's day." He takes a more metaphorical approach. Instead of describing all the things that happen on a summer's day, he takes the theme of summer and adds imagery to it.

[michellelovesyou95]

not trying to be mean or anything, but i didnt understand a word you said..

[black97white]

this is really good.

[davidbreitkopf]

Is a gimmick also the Truth?

[DaDonDodda08]

santa claus?? lol

[QofLife69]

@DaDonDodda08 '

2 mustachey

[prs889]

@DaDonDodda08 hahaheheahahhahaaa...lmao...

[bestar69]

You should try giving a example of your own.

That way we could under stand what you meen