Cool try! I followed the story well, although I agree with the need for more work on the dialogue. The guy with the mask could've sounded a bit more sinister. Good acting. Hope to see the rest soon.
the dialogue seems to forced. not bad...work on the audio too. instead of having the sister talk in the other room and hearing it just as that..get her recorded and put it in too. just make her louder some way
dont just look at the black and white as an alternative because color looked like it sucked. it was perfect with the mood.
Cool try! I followed the story well, although I agree with the need for more work on the dialogue. The guy with the mask could've sounded a bit more sinister. Good acting. Hope to see the rest soon.
tomasartz 4 years ago
I cant wait to get my GL2 and film my first feature. Everything else is on tape pretty much and no way to get it onto the comp. sucks.
and whos parents buy them houses n shit? lucky...
CrowDog5369 4 years ago
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the dialogue seems to forced. not bad...work on the audio too. instead of having the sister talk in the other room and hearing it just as that..get her recorded and put it in too. just make her louder some way
dont just look at the black and white as an alternative because color looked like it sucked. it was perfect with the mood.
CrowDog5369 4 years ago
Reminds a little bit of Saw. Dialouge could use some work but other than that, not bad.
bavarianwerks 4 years ago
Hey, So far a pretty good film, the only thing that I would say needs to be worked on is the dialogue. Cant wait to see the rest.
maxmiggo 4 years ago