I like the choreo and i think you have good improv, but there were a few technical things like your jumps and feet and i didn't feel your passion. Show yourself through your dancing. :)
Wait you're self taught? Wow that's incredible! Congratulations on the scholarship. I've been dancing since I was two and your grace rivals some of the girls I've been dancing with since I was little :) You have a very natural talent. Try working on your flexibility a bit more and it will help with straightening your knees and make those leaps a lot easier. Keep it up.
Ok for being self taught. You have a lot of grace and potential, but you need to work a lot on your leaps and technique. Also you need to show more emotion in your face. I know its hard when your concentrating but emotion makes a dance 10 times better. Happy dancing! :)
This is absolutely amazing! You're so talented. You have such passion for this & coming from someone who's been dancing since I was 7, passion is what everyone's missing. This is beautiful, keep dancing(:
@chopsticksmdx3 Thanks so much for that! :) It really mean's a lot to hear some positive feedback. I know myself that my technique isn't great due to being self- taught but I'm glad that my true passion for dance is being seen. Hopefully i'll be able to put some new stuff up soon!
your pretty good for being self taught!! since you dont have time to take class to better your technique u should look up some videos on youtue.. haha thats how i learned to perfect my foutettes. ive been dancing for 16 years and im still learning lol good luck, u definately have the heart to go far.
its good but my only suggestion would be that you should take a class to teach you technique... u are self taught and u have the grace and everything u just need the tehnique like with you hands and how to hold your arms and especially your leaps but your feet pointing is perfect.... ive been dancing since i was 3 and i love every minute of it... ive made it past the first and second round of sytycd but never could quite make it to the top but i think u have a lot of potential
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm trying to get to technique classes, but it's hard with such a busy lifestyle. It's really encouraging :) Thank you so much once again!
I love what you've choreographed so far! I like your use of the floor, but don't stay there for too long, you can only do so much on the floor, and we only have so long to make our mark on judges.
Glad to know I'm not the only one who began self taught!! ;) Great job! You lots of natural talent. I do suggest beginning some classes though, because raw talent can only take you so far. I'm in my first year of classes right now and I've already learned so much!! Hope I helped!! Keep dancing :)
This could be a really good dance if you just applied some simple technique to it! :) You said you've never taken a class before? Start taking classes at a school, make sure you ask about technique and it isn't a competition based school. You'll find the pirouettes, arabesques, plies, everything, will just look neater and easier. You already have some natural ability so keep dancing it looks good :)
hello, im 12 and i have been dancing since i was 3 and a half. I have always wanted to do lyrical or modern, and i started this year, and im doing a show and im supposed to make a dance for, and i need help! Any advice?
ive been dancing for the last 3 years! but ive never danced with a studio & never attended a class! so every thing you just seen ive taught myself! :)
i've been thinking of doing dance next year. i was just wanting to prep myself. cause i'm so unathletic. i have like no tolerance or flexablity. Hah, but i'm working on it!
Hello i am 13 and former ballet/modern dancer.Your a wonderful dancer if you look up martha graham you can look at some of her old videos.I see your interested in modern dance so i suggest her. You can learn alot in this form of dance it is controlled yet free.I hope you can go far with your dream. Follow your heart, no matter what anybody says or does. good luck :D
I love your choreography, and love the song too it's one of my favs to do comtemporary to! You should do some choreography to Dancing by Elise; i think you'd get really creative with it. Well done on getting the scholarship xoxo
i luv it!!!!! just work onn those summersaults!
IRockLikePebbles57 1 month ago
Your feet are beautiful
xchiaroscura 1 month ago
I like the choreo and i think you have good improv, but there were a few technical things like your jumps and feet and i didn't feel your passion. Show yourself through your dancing. :)
lovedancexx1 5 months ago
wow u are amazing can u do a dance to the song boston by agustina
meaghand55 10 months ago
@meaghand55 Thank you! I'll see what I can do about making that a dance to 'Boston' and Upload it for you! :)
bellarina04 10 months ago
Wait you're self taught? Wow that's incredible! Congratulations on the scholarship. I've been dancing since I was two and your grace rivals some of the girls I've been dancing with since I was little :) You have a very natural talent. Try working on your flexibility a bit more and it will help with straightening your knees and make those leaps a lot easier. Keep it up.
DancingDiva1991 11 months ago
@DancingDiva1991 Thank you very much for the support :)
bellarina04 11 months ago
2:29 <3
IvoreexEve 1 year ago
Ok for being self taught. You have a lot of grace and potential, but you need to work a lot on your leaps and technique. Also you need to show more emotion in your face. I know its hard when your concentrating but emotion makes a dance 10 times better. Happy dancing! :)
love0music0dance 1 year ago
This is absolutely amazing! You're so talented. You have such passion for this & coming from someone who's been dancing since I was 7, passion is what everyone's missing. This is beautiful, keep dancing(:
chopsticksmdx3 1 year ago
@chopsticksmdx3 Thanks so much for that! :) It really mean's a lot to hear some positive feedback. I know myself that my technique isn't great due to being self- taught but I'm glad that my true passion for dance is being seen. Hopefully i'll be able to put some new stuff up soon!
bellarina04 1 year ago
your pretty good for being self taught!! since you dont have time to take class to better your technique u should look up some videos on youtue.. haha thats how i learned to perfect my foutettes. ive been dancing for 16 years and im still learning lol good luck, u definately have the heart to go far.
teenageralv2225 1 year ago
its good but my only suggestion would be that you should take a class to teach you technique... u are self taught and u have the grace and everything u just need the tehnique like with you hands and how to hold your arms and especially your leaps but your feet pointing is perfect.... ive been dancing since i was 3 and i love every minute of it... ive made it past the first and second round of sytycd but never could quite make it to the top but i think u have a lot of potential
elmogurl102 1 year ago 2
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm trying to get to technique classes, but it's hard with such a busy lifestyle. It's really encouraging :) Thank you so much once again!
bellarina04 1 year ago
I love what you've choreographed so far! I like your use of the floor, but don't stay there for too long, you can only do so much on the floor, and we only have so long to make our mark on judges.
Glad to know I'm not the only one who began self taught!! ;) Great job! You lots of natural talent. I do suggest beginning some classes though, because raw talent can only take you so far. I'm in my first year of classes right now and I've already learned so much!! Hope I helped!! Keep dancing :)
shanirideshorsesss 1 year ago
when did you start?
rachelwynn 1 year ago
when did you start?
rachelwynn 1 year ago
you need to control your movements - they seem TO crazy. calm down. but besides that you were good :)
RPBFF97 1 year ago
If you've only been self taught, then I think this is really good :)
Sophiex222 1 year ago
This could be a really good dance if you just applied some simple technique to it! :) You said you've never taken a class before? Start taking classes at a school, make sure you ask about technique and it isn't a competition based school. You'll find the pirouettes, arabesques, plies, everything, will just look neater and easier. You already have some natural ability so keep dancing it looks good :)
MelanieJFisher 1 year ago
hello, im 12 and i have been dancing since i was 3 and a half. I have always wanted to do lyrical or modern, and i started this year, and im doing a show and im supposed to make a dance for, and i need help! Any advice?
TheWeaselfans 2 years ago
i really like that posse/ plie you did at "Busy streets" i'm totally stealing it. hope ya don't mind!!!
pudis4life 2 years ago
that's no problem! it would be my pleasure! :)
bellarina04 2 years ago
how long have you been dancing?
OhMyAlyona 2 years ago
ive been dancing for the last 3 years! but ive never danced with a studio & never attended a class! so every thing you just seen ive taught myself! :)
bellarina04 2 years ago
oh wow! well this is really good!
i've been thinking of doing dance next year. i was just wanting to prep myself. cause i'm so unathletic. i have like no tolerance or flexablity. Hah, but i'm working on it!
OhMyAlyona 2 years ago
Hello i am 13 and former ballet/modern dancer.Your a wonderful dancer if you look up martha graham you can look at some of her old videos.I see your interested in modern dance so i suggest her. You can learn alot in this form of dance it is controlled yet free.I hope you can go far with your dream. Follow your heart, no matter what anybody says or does. good luck :D
gabrams9999 2 years ago
I love your choreography, and love the song too it's one of my favs to do comtemporary to! You should do some choreography to Dancing by Elise; i think you'd get really creative with it. Well done on getting the scholarship xoxo
princesstini90 2 years ago
this is reallyyyyyy good i love your extensions can you look at my dance video and give me some advice
scardoso1994 2 years ago