Good melody and stucture.Lose the American accent.Needs more guitar.Lose the strings that are dueling with the piano.Just use a very reverby,sparse piano sound.Strings sound cheap.The drumming needs to be more in the style of the U2 song 'Where the Streets have no name'.Also wear your mother's blouse while performing it.Also ride a unicycle and pretend to read from an invisible diary.Maybe you should 'gay it up' a bit.A pretend lisp will eliminate the American accent.
smegma42... stick your 'advice' up your arse! This tune rocks as it is.
petecole 11 months ago
@petecole
I stuck it right up there.I imagined it was your cock.
I like his more recent music very much
smegma42 9 months ago
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smegma42 3 years ago
Good melody and stucture.Lose the American accent.Needs more guitar.Lose the strings that are dueling with the piano.Just use a very reverby,sparse piano sound.Strings sound cheap.The drumming needs to be more in the style of the U2 song 'Where the Streets have no name'.Also wear your mother's blouse while performing it.Also ride a unicycle and pretend to read from an invisible diary.Maybe you should 'gay it up' a bit.A pretend lisp will eliminate the American accent.
smegma42 3 years ago