If you're after critique, my main comment would have to be simple editing choices. The lack of consistency in aspect ratio is a bit distracting (though I assume unavoidable since you only had one take). Additionally, a bit of work in aftereffects or some other editing program could have really pushed the contrast between black and white and the color shots with the fire.
Otherwise, very nice for a first attempt at filmography; I think you pulled it off quite well!
Mack more videos Harriet, I really admire you and the style that you use I have two long dreads and you where my inspiration, I would really like if you would make a video on decorating just two dreads please
it might be nice to experiment with not having the backing music so strong, so you can hear the crackling of the fire, otherwise it takes away a layer which could be quite affective unless your aiming to take out layers of senses to allow audiences to insert their own visualisations. im a theatre student so i know the pain of layering meaning and all that jazz, so just thought i would suggest it but im sure you've already thought of all that
i dont know why but i just love that song...
angel54020 3 days ago
If you're after critique, my main comment would have to be simple editing choices. The lack of consistency in aspect ratio is a bit distracting (though I assume unavoidable since you only had one take). Additionally, a bit of work in aftereffects or some other editing program could have really pushed the contrast between black and white and the color shots with the fire.
Otherwise, very nice for a first attempt at filmography; I think you pulled it off quite well!
bonjourpantoufle 1 week ago
nice work :D love ur art works :D
SuicideSpelly 3 weeks ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Those are some huge ass knitting needle stick things 0__0
PsychosocialSam 1 month ago
Great video! Very creative!
jgotts2 1 month ago
such fun music!
SpoonsForks 1 month ago in playlist More videos from xxzxczx
Well done Harriet.Nice dadaistic work.. you have a potential.
And right choice of music.For me Edith Piaf was one of the best chanson singer ..two thumbs up.
(excuse my.Im bad in English :)
DaOriginall2 1 month ago 2
i love this.
RachLiefde 1 month ago
Great Reënactment of the II world war.
updrahcir 1 month ago
Interesting...I like the music too.
CrayonsNWafflecones 1 month ago
I don't get it either... Fascinating though.
MuchLoveVanityChaos 1 month ago
dont get it but cool! lol
24heybabe 1 month ago
Mack more videos Harriet, I really admire you and the style that you use I have two long dreads and you where my inspiration, I would really like if you would make a video on decorating just two dreads please
animalcossingPR 1 month ago
so inspiring...
noy676 1 month ago
You neeed to start making videos more ofteen I Miss yu Girl ! (:
daisycoolkid15 1 month ago
and this is why fine art is a waste of time....
Amandah86 1 month ago
Look on the bright side, at least she didn't burn a Nook or iPad.
cranberrysocks 1 month ago
I'm generally against burning books....but this is art so.....I guess it's ok =P Very nicely done! Hope you get a good grade =)
lotusblue86 1 month ago
Edith Piaf goes so well with it! Weird piece of art but I've enjoyed it:)
mayathebee2626 1 month ago
People are pretentious twats about burning books huh! The world will NOT run out of books in your life time, do not fret people!
Very interesting :)
lotusheart01 1 month ago
it might be nice to experiment with not having the backing music so strong, so you can hear the crackling of the fire, otherwise it takes away a layer which could be quite affective unless your aiming to take out layers of senses to allow audiences to insert their own visualisations. im a theatre student so i know the pain of layering meaning and all that jazz, so just thought i would suggest it but im sure you've already thought of all that
barefootpixie1 1 month ago
Very cool and artistic... it made me feel something inside. All of your videos take me to another place!
KimiKat24 1 month ago
I get it! when you wind your watch say a prayer for me.....
9secondrule 1 month ago
the clips of the lighter flaring are sweet, super strong sound.
tsetse777 1 month ago
I have seen tears in these books' eyes. Q-Q
daylighterka 1 month ago 3
burning books? instead of donating...
Oxidized181 1 month ago
Hmm, I liked it. Interesting. All I could think the whole time though was how I couldn't ever do that. I have an aversion to defacing books.
eleventhousandfour 1 month ago
nicee vid edittingg:)
Gratefuldreadd 1 month ago
Yay I guessed Edith Piaf before looking. :-D
Cool vid!
thesoothingsurf 1 month ago
Haha :) Very Creative! :) I liked this!
RepellingThroughLife 1 month ago
i didn't know what on earth was going on but i enjoyed this so much i watched it 3 more times and couldn't stop smiling
louiseycheesey101 1 month ago
This is too artsy for me
I'm confused now
mattzcoolathanu 1 month ago
I like it :]
if you don't mid me asking, what are you majoring in? just curious.
ChirpPuffMeow 1 month ago
this is a very clever idea :) great job
chemicalromance1998 1 month ago
so i'm confused, wat was this about! not hating ur creativity but i don't really know wat this is all about!! can u tell me please!
xJessicaJewelx 1 month ago
@xJessicaJewelx oh never mind i read her description i know now!! sorry
xJessicaJewelx 1 month ago
Those knitting needles are amazing :-)
calpurnia1706 1 month ago 2
And that's why I chose science... I don't get what did you do there? :P
chetes15 1 month ago 2
nice music choice
adicted2watching 1 month ago
can you make a tutorial video on how you knitted that net thing? I wanna make one :) - Great video btw <3
NorthernElumination 1 month ago 2
"Säuberung"...
zyniker88 1 month ago
kewl :)
augellca 1 month ago
thats an awesome video
thebluemonkee 1 month ago
WHY WOULD U BURN BOOKS?????????????AND IF SO USE A TWILIGHT BOOK OR SOMETHING STUPID SERIOUSLY
stayathomedad666420 1 month ago 17
@stayathomedad666420 you expect me to pay money for twilight?
xxzxczx 1 month ago 129
@stayathomedad666420 ur rude. y don't u just be happy tht she is making videos!
xJessicaJewelx 1 month ago
AWW:D
pamplegranet 1 month ago
This is ADORABLE! i absolutely love it. Great job Harriet :) More please?
brookluvxoxo 1 month ago
Love the music, it really sets the tone to the art
Shayeangel 1 month ago
yay
andrewliguori 1 month ago
awesome job! The music is really cool, and unique :)
okp431 1 month ago