Sunday RHYMIN' Commentary - RAP ♪ INVINCIBLE

[CRAZYRITCHIE001]

you inspired me my hole life

i will never forget u

[eagle20121]

thanks man you have inspired my to become a rapper and i am starting to love it so thanks

[MaRioMan1255]

dude i fucking love your channel <3

[lazomarco]

why do you cover you reload button?and what consle do you play on?

[blackopsbeast799]

nice song it is beastttttttttttttttttttt

[thechalmersboy]

in the new year ima be chillin with friends listenin to music preferably by you

i be tellin people that iniquitys the bomb they say no im yeah so go do your mom

screw them if they doughbt you because i know your good spit the lyrics like its easy

but its not you gotta be good for people to like you because the shit people say doesnt matter

you keep trying because one day youll get to the top and that is what i gotta say

[Shadysfan1995]

The thing i took for granted was my best friend he signed up from the army and our time together could end its been a great few tears imagianing him gone brings me to tears i dont know how to say goodbye so ill think ill lie by saying everythings going to be all right when in reality im in pain i dont know what to say

[supershadowr]

a should rap to get some stuff off my mind because i got some stuff going on and it might make me feel better

[MYNxFeaRed]

I feel the exact same way as you man ... my music just is the only thing that really makes sense ya know

[XxVASKENxX]

@con3ctionboi yea the 3rd post is but the other part is mine XD

[sspano95]

its werid everyone around me thinks i dont care or give a fuck about them but every day im constantly watching there back never forgetting them

[natechristopher12312]

i have a few times and i haved better i like beaing a good person and your rhymins are sick,i wish that you whould do a comback to zombies becus almost everyone likes zombies more than survivle,do a keep it going song to zombies i will see you next week/tomaro

[natechristopher12312]

@natechristopher12312 o yea i forgot to ask you to keep up the good work i am a true fan peace

[ShamanTheHedgehog]

i wish more popular people on youtube would respond to fans' comments like you :)

[supershadowr]

@ShamanTheHedgehog you mean like machinima? idk if TheSyndicateProject does (i should probably thank him for bringing me to iniquity

[XxVASKENxX]

It's Kenny sippin' Henny, rhymes slicker than teflon,

At Patriot High, I'm the whiter Zac Efron

And when I meet a shorty, you know, we're goin' backwards,

Pullin' more tail than my man, John Edwards.

Lumpy, chunky, booger-eatin' chump be,

Actin' outta place like Hootie singin' country!

Leema girl alone an' gitcha own tenderoni!

C'mon, who are we kiddin'? Ya used to bein' lonely!

[conn3ctionboi]

@XxVASKENxX Isn't this Kanye West

[XxVASKENxX]

It will get better i know who loves me,

so ill keep trying and trying to get them to like me.

So for now i give you a peace,

My buddy iniquity @Imortaltechnyqs has the best beats

[XxVASKENxX]

Im trying to grow up n trying to get liked, Not to be rejected like a minnesota turnpike. Tryin and tryin just to be mature, The more they say i feel so insecure. Outdated downrated, My mind is constipated. Hated by girls despised by guys. Sometimes i wonder why to keep going, When i know inside love is growing. I know inside i am a great person, But the shows on the road it comes down like a curtain. So many times ive been rejected, If love was a drug i would have injected. It will get better

[dead1yassian]

i took my ex for granted

i know im only a teen

but damn it felt like a dream

even though i know she will never see

but truly im am so sorry

and thanks to you derek

i can finally see

that eventually im be happy

[0KiRi021]

I see some Minnesota GT's in the game, you from the midwest? Keep up the good work Iniq :)

[JigglyWigglyPuffs]

I Take Some Stuff For Granted Like my grandmother passed Away Just Other Day The Only Thing That Makes Me Happy Is My Hobby Im a Bit Slobby But Its Rap I Still Think Im Crap Could u Please Reply Give Me Feedback It Would Make My Day In Every Way But all im left to say Derek u The Man And That is All i can Rhyme For Now So Untel Im Out

[foxxykill]

your everything i thought you would look like but white?

[shurfey]

keep going Derek , even though times are hard

[PlainWhiteC]

Sorry to say it but if someone annoys me then it makes me feel better when when I beat them down, I'm not a violent guy but if someone calls me ONE name or gives me pain I lash out can you give me suggestions of a more decent way of calming down, I know this doesn't rhyme but please make a vid telling me a more dignified way btw dont call me plainwhitec I forget thats my username call me "Craig" thx I could do with some help

[MrIPodTouchU]

Man if I could change the way that treated I my bro, I would treat like a mother fucking god ya know.

But his gone now,burried six feet under, man o man I only wish that he were sober.

I never try to think about how much I miss him, because after what he did man I'm showing restraint not to diss him.

Although his gone for almost a year now, I regret the day that I ever said ciao.

[SlowerDoughnut1]

all i have taken for granted, was the people around me, and now i feel obligated, to fill them with glee. and i will change, just by taking the time, to go, for you guys, the range, to make those last rhymes. but i would feel elated, to work on a rap with you derek, i will have gotten the raps stated, and although it's not generic, my skills will grow, it will be long awaited by me and the viewers to get a view, and that's from me to you.

[MIKELiscrazy]

You know what, i was wrong last time, seeing your face wasnt normal at first but now im used to it! i think its a good addition!

[dragonstealer2]

I cant rap but one thing I constantly take for granted is life and friends. I'm always glad when my friends tells me that they are there for me-it puts off the thoughts of suicide for a day or two.

[Promikez]

man i cant rap and yea its a fact but damn it i love your raps they are awesome i do commentarys too but struggle for the views i aim for the top with every vid that i put up and hope for the best that it goes well with everyone else :)

[wiggles1579]

Yo, you wanna know, anything for granted? Well I used to be hated, My life, thats all i ever did, Now my girlfriend has changed my ways, And i just wanna sit here and rap for days, She supported me, gave me my power, Now i just cant waist another hour, iNiQUiTY, I have just one tip for you, When you find you girl hold on to her for ever, You raps are amazing but with her, they will be even better, Peace

[image2fite]

Yo, the question is if i have taken anything for granted

This girl i know, love her to bits, made my heart enchanted

She Didn't know alot about me, about my raps and flows

Hold onto that someone people, because once you clutch her, it slows

down time, and time itself is precious, never a second miss

next time you see your partner, give him/her a kiss

yeah, trust me homies, after that, youll feel bliss

yeah, yours Truly, Infamous

[xTr1pl3Thr34tx]

do you have a ps3?

[BboyTK11]

hey i freestyle sometime n u wanted play n rap

[Jbach88]

just tht im alive

i had i 19 year old cousin thts dead

she was shot by a crazy dick

and just knowin im around the same age

well is just wrong

now why would some1 do tht

i dont care how messed your up

cause thts just fucked up

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@Jbach88 sorry about your cousin man.

[L1LCL4NR3SP4WN]

Hey man I've been watching your videos a long time, and your really good it's worth my time, and I spend my time wisely, seriously man you inspire me, the thing I take for granted is music, a lot of people are making it, and I'd just like to say a bit, music is my inspiration, trust me no hesitation, so let's toast a celebration, to each and every nation.

If your reading this I just wanna say thanks for giving up a moment of your time to read this. I'd like to be an awesome YouTuber/Rapper jus

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@L1LCL4NR3SP4WN nice!

[complextyz]

sometimes i take life for granet thinking my life is shity many times but i always cant wait for saturdays to here your sunday rhymin commentary peace

[GunsAndDaffodils09]

Yo I think somethin nobody suggested is that we take our life for granted

We wouldn't be here if it wernt for YO MAMA

Life is good granted a lot of of drama

I take my PS3

Ahah fuck xbox 360

[termonator12]

ai yo i've taken my friends for granted and my family, i know its insantity . but i try to keep my head straight all the time and prepare to take take the leap of faith take take the leap of fait and yo iniquity you rock man thanks for the music ur the reason why i love music and make it , and listen to it just thanks fo showing me the way

[pyrotech99]

Those people who names I don`t even know

The people I do who helped change my flow

The ones I ignore the most, who know the most

Who saw me come from the bottom to where I can boast

I try and wake up to see, that in front of me

Things changing so fast you think I did a first degree.

Now I see what I missed infront of me

To late now; I`m filled with jealousy

[TheMmmskittlez]

hells yess awesome rap

[gtfobuddy21]

mah new fav commentater <----fkup spellin

[XxProWatcherXx]

U may be white but in my mind your black

[DeCockNicolas]

every week i think , this is the best sunday rhymin' comm ever , and then next week you surprise me again .. :p

[spedeworth6]

I take things for granted every day,

like the friends ive got to my name.

all my family are bhinde me in every thing i do

but i feel like its a video game

doin crazy shit

and some how thats gota change

[YTBerserk]

One thing i took for granted was my grandma

She always asked about my shows she thought i was a rising star

then on christmas eve she was diagnosed with cancer

i started to realize what i had with her

she was a soldier i thought she would recover

couldn't even tell she was sick i told her

she made it to my aunties 50th and my brothers 18th birthday

i got home from school, my dad sat me down and i heard him say

"this morning your nan past away"

R.I.P Nan, i will always remember and love you!

[tommyjammy]

@IMortaLTechNyQs soo i look at my music on my ipod and its full of your raps and your rhymin commentary and like 3 other songs keep up the amazing work :D

[YTN3rd]

Love your work mate. Is always good to get home from a sucky day and just open up youtube to find one of your videos. Turns a night of stress and heartbreak into... i dont know... a good place.

Keep it up!

[TheSuperpsycho666]

gaming and having a loving family and friends is what makes me feel invinsible as well as watching comentators do there greatest and at there full potential thanks man u opened my eyes derek i take so many things for granted thanks and now i know my mistakes in life

[EPICBULLETSPRAY]

How come u got color blind assist

[thebigD7100]

gaming makes me feel INVINCIBLE

[CRITIKALxJARI]

do you read this one hmmm muhahahahaha

[lexcoupe82]

this isn't in respaunce to your question but to something you said earlier on in the video. i have also found a passion of mine. its also commentaries, i upload on average two videos a day, and i have been pretty consistant on my channel for over a year now. however i get a little discuraged sometimes because my videos don't get alot of views and i have over 450 videos uploaded. don't get me wrong my subs are very suportive and i am greatful for the ones i have, but sometimes it gets me down

[Puddock3000]

Amazing work as always Ya VAMPIRE ;)

[NMAN700]

I am10 I love 2 rap but I cant do it in front of people wats ur advi cce

[HorizonBrosGaming]

Keep raping I love it keep it

[jakowitz14]

This is a great series

[AssaultRifle1422]

I know you've probably heard this a lot but all of your words that you use to express your feelings are again inspiring keep the rap vids coming!

[AssaultRifle1422]

I know you've probably heard this a lot but all of your words that you use to express your feeling keep the rap vids coming!

[theguy9872]

I really love your rapping what mic. Do u use

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@theguy9872 blue snowball =]

[KorbonKnight]

SPONSOR!!!! <3

[slyfrog3100]

I have no skill in rapping but have idea yes or no

[slyfrog3100]

I like the facecam

[xxLSXxx]

This is a show now? AWESOME!

[tylerr2009]

Man you are THE coolest guy I have ever met and I LOVE all of your work and you have even got me liking rap lol thanks man for all the great videos and songs man

[ViktorReznov101]

I take everything for granted where do i even begin/ maybe the food and the love or the shelter i live in/ my parents love me that makes me glad/ but also it makes me feel for others that are downright sad/ all im trying to say is that im very peaceful/ im happy and loved and hope the same for you, for reawul

[darkhero78]

i don't normally ryhme, but i thought that i should use some of my time

i think that i need to change my way, and make me and my friends have happier days,

i thank you for helping me see, thanks for inspiring me iniquity

[TheExirt]

would u let a subscriber use one of your songs in a montage or something?

[GorillaTwat]

It seems the more time ya spend thinkin, the alarm clocks on its way to ringing,

It's time to wake up, pick yourself up and grow the fuck up. We're basking in the glory, bitching about the positives, when others got no houses,

We need to smart'n up, clean our acts up, and cheer each other up,

After all without each other, our sanity would diminish and we would be finished. - First Rap.

[Tim007lamb]

Baby Lucy t she is o so pritty

when I asked her on a date I took a arrow to the knee

I realised what I did, shit was so stupid

When you ask her on a date you got be fly like Cupid

Realise what you've got realise what you'll never get and some shit dawg just belong in our heads

I took her for granted 3 years tryna get her back all I want is a pat on the back

and if it's not taking libertys....

I wouldn't mind hearing your forgiven Timothy.

[ImBoYo420]

Yeah I've takin people for granted, and the feelings I've tried to keep em padded ,down in the back of my mind ,I don't take vision for granted though I don't wanna go blind ,all them 5 senses are gifts to feel what reality has to offer ,don't take shit for granted cause one day it could all be gone

[Lewwyable]

i don't normally comment so here goes :')

i took my ex girlfriend for granted :/.

we was together 2years,

i didnt think she loved me because she was adding guys

and then i found out she was working on something for me :/

but before that i didnt know and i got angry

i took her for granted because after we broke up, i missed her and she was so sweet to me

now shes doing that with another guy

Ohwell life goes on ay :')

Peace x

[dankri974]

I used to take to take my family for granted, use to ignor them whenever they ranted, now I listen, pay them respect, and I know that that makes their joy erect. I use to be more pretencious, use to act really stupendous, then I took a step back, realizied I was being whack, since then, I cleaned up my act, you can doubt that shit, but trust its a fact

[Kjarroflakes]

I'm not going to rap because I don't want you to lose subs but keep the work up man. Glad you're enjoying your music, because I definately am :D

[legoguy8777]

bro your not a regular guy your an awesome guy

[andrew1040828]

A hp-pvr

[andrew1040828]

Jus wanted to say ur beast man I support you ur gonna go big(: can I ask something though? Ha well were can I get thi

[CameronH455]

Is that all you do is RYME!!!! AHAHHAHHAHAHAHAAHAH!!! (from the stream)

[bhnjhvbnn]

Awesome!

[Sourmanb]

SUB3D!

[Dirj15]

i used to take my friends for granted/ forget 'em, my life was slanted/a way that I didn't like and i knew that it need changin/ but i'm still trying my effort and focus im rearrangin/ its a difficult battle between school ,life, friends and gaming/ and commentating but i know that I can do it/ ill just work harder and push through cause i just like to move it move it

[TuilFan]

Beast

[beastman20009]

I have to say ur a beast both rapping and ur gameplay and witch the best to u and I hope i can play with u on mw3

[BigTurd4L]

you were supposed to play on ps3 today..what happened? :(

[me22346]

I ain't a rhymer, i'm a driver, of my potential to be a batter man. but i gotta be honest cause i'm a true fan. I've took for granted those thing in life that we as humans consider rights those every day actions, thought, and sights that help me make it through the day so i have to say, i go out of my way. to try and remember to stop and smell the roses otherwise i lose a piece of myself that i call me. Me22346 AKA hoagy2424

[outsidemapen]

i take sound for granted it is a power it can take you away from a bad day and make a good day better with it nothing is impossible if i ever fell mad i just put on my head phones and put on eminem and every thing i was mad about is just gone for that few minutes.

so that is what i take for granted i hope you think of sound in a new way now i know i do

[XxZeRoAmMoxX]

what i took for granted was my ex girlfriend i did not treat her the way she deserves and if i could change that i would cause man do i want to say sorry

[EpicxSharpShuder]

In all honesty The thing i take for granted is me I will live and then die Will I even get to say goodbye? So lately I've wanted to live life greatly I hope this gets people to realize That everyone has a demise So enjoy it while you can Forget about a plan Have fun Until your done!

[lolLiLMAO111]

And for the verse I jizzed b4 it was over

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@lolLiLMAO111 lmao

[NuckuhTV]

Not to get too deep but I have 3 total kids, all different baby moms. I took my first 2 for granted and regret it but at the same time it made me be the best father I could have ever imagined for my 3rd. I grow and learn everyday and try to apply it to life the best way I know how. I currently keep in contact with my first two a lot better than when I was immature for sure. Just gotta right my wrongs the best way I can and hope they all know I love them. Good shit D.

JNuc-

[lolLiLMAO111]

Sinumatic clan tag noob rotflmao

[MadTechzzTutorials]

aww man im really good at rappin i was going to start doing the same thing as you but you already took the idea. :(

[51HUFFMAN]

Sorry Derek that I can't rhyme this but,

basically I took my girlfriend for granted, everything was cool

but then one little slip up and she said "baby we thru"

as I watched her walk away a felt a little pain

then I thought "wait no now I'm back in the game!'

but then you see her with another guy

and she can see it in your eyes you want her back

but she says "no baby your had your chance"

as you walk away

you think why'd I ever let her get away?

[TheDeathOfAnEra]

Honestly.... Listening to this alone made me happy. Shits been up and down like a yo-yo for me as of late, and this video was something i could relate too. =) Keep it up man

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@TheDeathOfAnEra I appreciate that comment dude, thanks.

[whitekid21st]

every day i am thing of sothin to do and ya i am a big guy for my age and i hurt people even tho i don't mean to i hope you know the feelin i get inside me when that happens because i hurt me to every time i dont reolize that im the bully and people are staing away from me but i say wait im not going to hurt you and then they run... away.... i know there are some of you out there that get the feelin to so plz thumbs this up if you r feelin the same ...pain ")

[11mman]

love your live streams

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@11mman thanks man =]

[Awemed]

28th!

[MrBeasty805]

i like this MP7 FTW

[bigriv30]

you're great!

[xxanthonyxx14]

I've taken my happiness for granted

Thinking that the world was all against me

But in the end people really showed that they did love me,

And that's all I need my life

and you ask how I changed as a person,well that simple

I wake up with a smile on my face,that no one can ever change

I'm glad who've I become, glad of what I've done

Because in the end no one will ever change who I am inside.

[wak4863]

Good shit bro.

[seahawk97838]

Love these!

[MrFAILBLOG102]

hmm something that i took for granted is having two loving parents/ that love me the same even tho their separate/ i thought i was on top of the world with no haters/ smokin dope, harassing kids/ then my father died/ and that was it my life changes in a flash/ using things my i was thought by my dad/ i changed into a better person with his class/ i never realized that i had life good but felt like ass/ i had two lovin parents, a mom and a dad/ so i changed to help others so their not as sad

[TheRYNO661]

Good stuff bro :)

[SuperHotFoxYes]

"I tend to procrastinate alot" Ironic- Uploads this 30mins before Monday.

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@SuperHotFoxYes LOL right!

[xXxFlipthegrounDxXx]

Now on this day you ask me this question and my answer is simple and is surely a decent message. All the bitches, or women to be respectful, and all of the moments that always seem to get dull. Then there's my family, mi familia since your puerto, As you can see i gotta work on me but that right there's my outro.

[c00lboi73]

94th preson to watch it

[naruto6265]

This shit is fucking awsome

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@naruto6265 lol glad you enjoyed

[kakashi101ful]

i used to take money fr grant it i used it lke a jar of honey and now ive lost my bunney

[daman25100]

I know this isnt rapping but i think everybody takes youtube commentaters for granted because nobody knows how much time u guys put into it.......................THANK YOU

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@daman25100 appreciate that man

[TwoGirlsOneGame]

this was amazing!

- Diggity19

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@TwoGirlsOneGame <3

[ThatOrdinaryKj]

awesome

[Foric09]

:) love it

[rabbidies]

This is awsome

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

Thanks for all the love guys, that sound my phone makes when you like my videos is awesome! =] So answer this in a rhyme and maybe I'll pick you in two weeks! Have you ever taken anything or anyone for granted? How would you change your ways? Or how have you changed?

[prismflash]

@IMortaLTechNyQs a song that inspires me to wake up in the morning Lupe Fiasco - the show goes on listen to it whenever you have the chance. And also i told you already, but i'm buying your songs not because i only want to support your channel, but also i love your music man.

[DeadlyNinjaStar27]

@IMortaLTechNyQs you deserve the world

[SleeplessSpy884]

hey man you are an awesome guy! I love your songs dude

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@SleeplessSpy884 thanks bro

[GrooveSoft]

Is that minnesota burns?!?!? I LOVE HIM AND YOU Iniquity

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@GrooveSoft lol ty

[junkerfunker]

i'll never be first :(

[dtuyt]

How are you iniquity? =]

[IMortaLTechNyQs]

@dtuyt im great!

[dtuyt]

@IMortaLTechNyQs That's always good to hear. XD

[DropDeadxChrisXx]

Dope as hell as always. Love the progression of these. Keep it up man. iFl0

[TheSonofCOD69]

sup

[JJSchneider55]

Nice 

[PS3GAMER4LIFE88]

First!!!

[PS3GAMER4LIFE88]

First!!!