I like the sword, it's funny...unexpected (and more politiaclly correct than a gun right)? Love the detectives voice...and the subtle sarcasm throughout!! And the giant gold chain!
Narrating and acting is really good. music fits, but camera work, editing and stunts need improvement. I would love to watch it then... not hatin, just counstructive criticism. Too bad I dont live in USA, I would help you out with it. but still.. 72 hours.. thats impressive..
Although I dont particularly like fight movies I liked your work. I didnt like the end though, it had a twist but with no purpose. GREAT camera work. Did you do ADR ?
@MrCrgl Thanks.. no ADR on this one. We we're also limited to 5 minutes which is why the ending was cut down. There was more to it but it was too long.
@OneWifeThreeKids # Situation: Within the first minute of the movie, each film must find a bag with something important in it (and it must be relevant to the rest of the film)
# Line of Dialogue: "Should I know what that means?"
This is dope!
JordanRh1 2 months ago
that was really good! liked :)
mrsillyclips 4 months ago
I liked it but the ending was quite abrupt in my opinion. Maybe a shot of her walking away would work.
StogerStudios 9 months ago
@StogerStudios Yeah. it was abrupt due to the 5 min time limit. We didn't even have time for credits :(
JordanRh1 2 months ago
sounds like a frank miller monolouge
finsoto 10 months ago
I like the sword, it's funny...unexpected (and more politiaclly correct than a gun right)? Love the detectives voice...and the subtle sarcasm throughout!! And the giant gold chain!
beitikvah 10 months ago
Narrating and acting is really good. music fits, but camera work, editing and stunts need improvement. I would love to watch it then... not hatin, just counstructive criticism. Too bad I dont live in USA, I would help you out with it. but still.. 72 hours.. thats impressive..
mizzin 1 year ago
This is a pretty sick video!
Lostin0Powers 1 year ago
Although I dont particularly like fight movies I liked your work. I didnt like the end though, it had a twist but with no purpose. GREAT camera work. Did you do ADR ?
MrCrgl 1 year ago
@MrCrgl Thanks.. no ADR on this one. We we're also limited to 5 minutes which is why the ending was cut down. There was more to it but it was too long.
JordanRh1 1 year ago
AYE thats was tight
itachiashq 1 year ago
WOW, very impressive! This was so well done, it is hard to believe you only had 3 days. Bravo to the music indeed!
logansrunt 1 year ago
nice job. strong emotion in the music.
crewsvideo 1 year ago
i dont get why a detective would carry a sword though?
joereece86 1 year ago
@joereece86 Standard Protocol. All detectives carry swords in-case of epic brawls in parking lots.
CJRhone 1 year ago
Awesome! Great work. It is amazing that this was completely pulled off in 72 hours! Better acting then I see in some TV shows with big budgets.
Go greener!
blandERstudios 1 year ago
I like the twist at the end...what props and what lines did you have to use?
OneWifeThreeKids 1 year ago
@OneWifeThreeKids # Situation: Within the first minute of the movie, each film must find a bag with something important in it (and it must be relevant to the rest of the film)
# Line of Dialogue: "Should I know what that means?"
# Prop: A map
# Action: Breaking
JordanRh1 1 year ago
Great came out better then I thought
YoungBoiCity 1 year ago
bravo!
stalkwellington 1 year ago
Go head D'armon & Tiara - & everyone who worked on this good job FAM
aliciakeysfanmzcher 1 year ago