This is a pretty bad bomb dude... Oh well, try to get act outs in your stuff, it's way too short. You get less jokes, but that means more laughs because you squeeze laughs out of fewer jokes and you don't have to memorize as much because they could be similar or closely related topics. This was horrible though, you got too wordy with your jokes, no premises, no act outs, and my final suggestion is to not talk about yourself, the truth is no one cares, talk about things others can relate to.
This is a pretty bad bomb dude... Oh well, try to get act outs in your stuff, it's way too short. You get less jokes, but that means more laughs because you squeeze laughs out of fewer jokes and you don't have to memorize as much because they could be similar or closely related topics. This was horrible though, you got too wordy with your jokes, no premises, no act outs, and my final suggestion is to not talk about yourself, the truth is no one cares, talk about things others can relate to.
canyoueatme24 4 months ago
good energy yo :D
EmilyVendetta 5 months ago