You have a nice timing when you rap, but your lyrics were kinda weak..Just a word of advice....write before you rap, you not a really good at freestyle
Y'all need to get together y'all got it y'all a keybroad play a drummer a rapper y'all do it get together dang I will buy all of y'all CDs if y'all do it
hrm, that was pretty cool. but have to say, what made the video had to be the girl mouthing the words WTF when the dude put the rug on his head... oh and the guy on the floor that looked totally wasted was pretty funny too.
sounds a lot like wierd al ... ahahah... its good but just because how white he is with no flow just sounds like yankovich tryin to chop at someone over jenkees.
@Acelera89 so retarded that you felt the need to look it up and hear the song,and then scroll through the side bar to hear it in rap form some more. Yep you get a gold star of FAIL
@Olskoolbeats rap game and best is a dumb enough comment on its own, but you had to throw eminem in there. Your name is Olskoolbeats? If the lamb chops play along lady was still alive she would pimp smack you upside the head with her sock puppet for such a retarded comment.
all those wannabe black guysss aka fathansolooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! yeah oh yeah oh oh oh oh yeah ima prick oh oh oh yeah and i ruind this song and aa-a-a-a-a-a-and put R-rr-r-r--rr-onald j-j-j-j-enkees in shaammeeeee cause im a wannabe paakkkiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
Dude seriously I'm not going to argue with you if you dont understand the meaning of metal like i dont understand rap I prefer metal you prefer hip-hop good for you each of his mind
Don't listen to any haters, that was sick shit dude.
Obviously you probably don't want to change THIS particular rap's lyrics, so when you work on your next songs, keep speed control in mind. You know what i mean?
You can rap fucking awesome fast, but dont be afraid to slow down a little bit more. you did do it a couple times and even threw in some fast triplet syllables, so obviously you know what you're doing.
Better than my boy who thinks he's gonna make it by the way.
Rofl if you don't listen to "SHIT" then why are you here in the first place. You shouldn't criticize others when you can't do anything better in this style of music.
Dude redo this with you going a bit better to the tune. Make sure you can get somewhere , where you can focus, you can make this shit work. This was pretty fucking good.
Reupload if you can, would definately love this with the music on higher volume and that someone screaming how much he/she? loves throwing fire and the comments mid video.
And its better than good now that I listened to it a few more times.
Dumb kid yelling in the beginning just about made me want to close it.. your rap is pretty good man, consider re-recording just the audio and posting it for a better sound quality. Keep it up man, that was pretty good. :)
Cool dude you did really well. But you need to do another one with out the morons around you. Keep the good job. Five stars from me. Just dont listen to heaters they are just gallous and trying to bring you down thats all. I said your awesome and you can do rap as hell thought.
Woa Nice
Robarch89 1 month ago
ahhhhh yeeeeeeee
Maximum40 2 months ago
Get a mic and record this shit, would love to hear it in a higher quality.
Isosyth 4 months ago
Not too bad dude!
Allovertheplace84 5 months ago
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SHUT UP YOU STUPID BITCH NOBODY WANTS TO HEAR YOUR ANNOYING ASS VOICE
askloglog 5 months ago
WOMAN SHUT THE FUCK UP, bro was good
xliqzz 6 months ago 3
@xliqzz yeah... dude was good.. but what the heck is up w the hand bein thrown up in the air constantly... looks retarded
SheabugsMommy 6 months ago
lmao, all these fuckers are high as shit. Made the dude rapping look stupid.
padard 7 months ago
Nice !
TheDutchevil1 7 months ago
this would be a lot better if everyone wasnt high off their ass lol
kellogz456 8 months ago 4
Badass dude. Like MC Frontalot
fashank22 8 months ago
Badass dude
fashank22 8 months ago
all these white suburban kids with their hip hop
xIUBUNTUIx 9 months ago
damn niggas wearing a white man mask
1xOMAx1 10 months ago
0:36 that girl is pretty
eagleshadow1234 10 months ago
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eagleshadow1234 10 months ago
this is why you don't let them out of the kitchen
megamanangel 11 months ago 3
it was writtin but its nice hah
djdwreck21 11 months ago
@djdwreck21 Of course it's written dude. Who said it's a freestyle?
xAntonNaslundx 8 months ago
Pot heads...
MrTheJdog 11 months ago
Props
ThierLeader 11 months ago
great rap, but the girl should be shot.
aftereffects 1 year ago 2
dude that was pretty gay
Chuckj1977 1 year ago
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Please just STOP !!
1995UltraZZ28 1 year ago
This is so good!
MrWereTurtles 1 year ago
You have a nice timing when you rap, but your lyrics were kinda weak..Just a word of advice....write before you rap, you not a really good at freestyle
KrisseyLeoCRAZY 1 year ago
YOU RUINED IT
SoldierFrontJunky 1 year ago
Lol from connecticut? Only steers n queers come from there lol
Brooklyn1530 1 year ago
@Brooklyn1530 thats texas
mixer171 11 months ago
u aint going with the beat....
digerpaji 1 year ago
sounds very good....really..gr8 :)
dasarus 1 year ago
bet your ass u got laid that night with some of those girls.fucking amazing.
ToliniDan 1 year ago
got the makings but seriously... get an experienced camera crew and make a music video... that'd be cooler
SoulChooserx 1 year ago
Yankees needs to lay off the Oxy's
skylerdeckard 1 year ago
gta san andreas haha noman this really nice
ASPorgineel 1 year ago
i dont think this was really meant to be rapped to
Georgeqaws 1 year ago
sucks
rendros88 1 year ago
do you use sound cloud?
clinthaught 1 year ago
I started watching thinking it was going to be a trainwreck, but damn that was impressive!
wadehjb 1 year ago 4
you know your way around words. this is impressive dude. especially on such a fast beat
flamshiz 1 year ago
That was good! You should make a clearer version.
SulfonicXeno 1 year ago
wow dude you really good but hell yeah the biach need to shut her trap oh and one more thing tell her she is a uglu bitch!
jeszersz 1 year ago
After swing !
irreashable 1 year ago
Not bad. I like it.
Pmr358 1 year ago
i hate that these people are allowed to listen to this lol
netskot 1 year ago
yea 100% the bird needs to shut her trap, your not half bad mate, i quite enjoyed it :) and im definatelly not a hip hop fan
rayvr 1 year ago
the guys voice kind of sounds like the lead singer for bloodhound gang.
pnggraves 1 year ago 2
Lol, it looks fucking awkward in that room
HerrHore 1 year ago
white guy rap FAIL
ibjacob123 1 year ago
@ibjacob123 Double-standard Fail. The guy's good. Hop off.
lwierd 1 year ago
do u have any idea how fucking retarded u are??
phqinhipp 1 year ago
nice idea
xXTeRiYakiBOYXx 1 year ago
gay
astralninja1 1 year ago
@astralninja1 agreed, lyrics just kill it HARD.
FlamingFury5 1 year ago
too much enunciation. aka. too white
Persaguard20 1 year ago
Y'all need to get together y'all got it y'all a keybroad play a drummer a rapper y'all do it get together dang I will buy all of y'all CDs if y'all do it
akilgo100 1 year ago
hrm, that was pretty cool. but have to say, what made the video had to be the girl mouthing the words WTF when the dude put the rug on his head... oh and the guy on the floor that looked totally wasted was pretty funny too.
SolidNewman 1 year ago
I LOVE YOUUUUUU
lilmisssnshine 1 year ago
His vocal delivery wasn't right, but his lyrics were rather clever.
Not worthy of the Jenkins. No sir.
maskedshirtlessman 1 year ago
i love when she points the camera at everyones reaction and that one girl is like "wtf!?" lmfao
SecondVisionMusic 1 year ago
is ronald jenkees dead? =(
lieutenantcheez 1 year ago
sounds a lot like wierd al ... ahahah... its good but just because how white he is with no flow just sounds like yankovich tryin to chop at someone over jenkees.
CTRTrichome 1 year ago
right on bro not bad keep it up, tell ur boy in the philesh T to get some sleep lol
ivan420s 1 year ago
dude...too many GTA posters.
axv375 1 year ago
This is actually pretty good.
xentrox 1 year ago
great
gianma29 1 year ago
He sounds like Niga Higa....
EddieTh3Ead 1 year ago
hahahaha the verse is sort of straight
but this dude is way too white
hes got no flow
deerdanceemokid 1 year ago
where do you live in the 203
bonafide9036 1 year ago
wat song he singing?
Stevester118 1 year ago
No shit i'm in 203 too. Right on B-nap
NooneEatsCandyCorn 1 year ago
@Greave12 Lamb of god the Passing. No Lyrics, just music. Check it out. Also, the bands other songs are pretty decent.
Rekilots 1 year ago
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fuckin fags jammin to a retards song.
Acelera89 1 year ago
@Acelera89 so retarded that you felt the need to look it up and hear the song,and then scroll through the side bar to hear it in rap form some more. Yep you get a gold star of FAIL
Zenex666 1 year ago
hahahaahahaha.... wow... were you high?
steveXblandon 1 year ago
GTA San andreas poster xD RESPECT MAN =D
fru2zzy 1 year ago
@fru2zzy theres loads of em :L
FiinchiiStryder 1 year ago
WHITE GUYS DONT RAP
AWeoWeo808 1 year ago
@AWeoWeo808 Linkin Park does
Enricovir99 1 year ago
@AWeoWeo808 Eminem does and he's the best lyricist in the entire rap game.
Olskoolbeats 1 year ago 3
@Olskoolbeats rap game and best is a dumb enough comment on its own, but you had to throw eminem in there. Your name is Olskoolbeats? If the lamb chops play along lady was still alive she would pimp smack you upside the head with her sock puppet for such a retarded comment.
Zenex666 1 year ago
@Olskoolbeats Lupe Fiasco is a lot better than Em.
GogglesVK 1 year ago
@GogglesVK I wouldn't say "a lot" better, but Lupe is definitely good.
Olskoolbeats 1 year ago
Rofl
Hobbnobbs 1 year ago
all those wannabe black guysss aka fathansolooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! yeah oh yeah oh oh oh oh yeah ima prick oh oh oh yeah and i ruind this song and aa-a-a-a-a-a-and put R-rr-r-r--rr-onald j-j-j-j-enkees in shaammeeeee cause im a wannabe paakkkiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
TheMightyLewwy 1 year ago
@TheMightyLewwy You try to hard, you realize you only made yourself look like a fool?
Zenex666 1 year ago
awesome! just tell that bitch to STFU next time..
p.s. Lyrics?
XXLILxxJOKERXX 1 year ago
LOL you look like KingDaddyDmac
imuberuberleet1161 1 year ago
nice,nigga!
fgh4ikj 1 year ago
Can I hear homeboy throwing fire without the dumb bitch?
eiblust 1 year ago 2
white
EggoMuffin 1 year ago
nice!
Great song with a great rap!
gavmcguinness8024 1 year ago
Did u do dat in one breath?
FunnyMovieMoments 1 year ago
somebody slap the bitch tie her up untill this kid is done
XplatinmsnipaX 2 years ago 12
next time tell the chick to stfu
tingles03 2 years ago 105
@tingles03 lol he talks way too white, needs to get some ghetto ness to it.
Filychzsteak76 1 year ago
Dude seriously I'm not going to argue with you if you dont understand the meaning of metal like i dont understand rap I prefer metal you prefer hip-hop good for you each of his mind
blind392 2 years ago
Metal is more about the melodi not about the lyrics, rap its all about lyrics
blind392 2 years ago
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Don't listen to any haters, that was sick shit dude.
Obviously you probably don't want to change THIS particular rap's lyrics, so when you work on your next songs, keep speed control in mind. You know what i mean?
You can rap fucking awesome fast, but dont be afraid to slow down a little bit more. you did do it a couple times and even threw in some fast triplet syllables, so obviously you know what you're doing.
Better than my boy who thinks he's gonna make it by the way.
MrMarth 2 years ago
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MrMarth 2 years ago
the bitch holding the camera is retarted son
Satchmochris 2 years ago 36
@Satchmochris
hahaha.. nice
DntBrnDPig 1 year ago
very good rapping, but the bitch is a retard
789456meme 2 years ago 2
some of you seem high!
easternpower 2 years ago
this was great except for the whole rapping part...
KirbyOnCronic 2 years ago
lol 0:39 somebody has a hangover
ub3r1337pwn4g3 2 years ago
outasight should do this.
Zexion72559 2 years ago
akk wana be rappers .. -.- street boys
blind392 2 years ago
Dude lets see you do better -.-
yosinz 2 years ago
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sorry i dont listen to SHIT(rap)im a metalhead
blind392 2 years ago
Rofl if you don't listen to "SHIT" then why are you here in the first place. You shouldn't criticize others when you can't do anything better in this style of music.
yosinz 2 years ago
hahahah nice try dude but not that good good try though
devinvincent89 2 years ago
re do it with better sound and no talking
Zenex666 2 years ago
Erg. Sorry, not my kind of thing. Nonstop words = boring after awhile.
wolfwood221 2 years ago 2
nice
McFoxdude 2 years ago
tell the bitch to shut up
ali191 2 years ago
that bitch should stfu and let the guy rap
Darkzombiez 2 years ago 3
That was awesome, man!
You should redo the thing, but with better video quality and stuff.
Totally awesome, you fit it right in!
TenkanVlog 2 years ago 3
fuck that was cool
boombadajam88 2 years ago
FUCK! that was awesome! didnt expect that =)
TheSmalenGuy 2 years ago
YOU A GANGSTA ASS NAGA
ishady12 2 years ago
Thats Fucking Awesome Dude :D
Rezzerect 2 years ago
That was great! I just hope Ronald heard it!
ChrisHansen1114 2 years ago
Would be better if you tried stay more in pace with the song. other then that not bad
Callabris 2 years ago
Dude redo this with you going a bit better to the tune. Make sure you can get somewhere , where you can focus, you can make this shit work. This was pretty fucking good.
bremstone 2 years ago
nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mitzmitz64 2 years ago
Hahha! nobody in the room gives a shit
MikeTerela 2 years ago
booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MrHawk757 2 years ago
U could b the next eminem
youngamofo 2 years ago
That was nice dude
youngamofo 2 years ago
really good
continue your hobby ; p
action4717 2 years ago
It's not a bad attempt really, it's quite good.
TheRealVordox 2 years ago
They are definatly chopped
kechhugair6 2 years ago
Oh and the chick with the blue shirt is hawt. ^ Thanks for making this. =D
Kanakiisseli 2 years ago
Reupload if you can, would definately love this with the music on higher volume and that someone screaming how much he/she? loves throwing fire and the comments mid video.
And its better than good now that I listened to it a few more times.
Kanakiisseli 2 years ago
Good job dude, this is good. :)
Kanakiisseli 2 years ago
People saying he murdered it lol
ronald said himself that he wanted to put rap music on all of his tunes but he didn't have the voice nor talent.
Lindellz0r 2 years ago 5
Hey guys, the song passed away on 06 February 2009, thumbs up this if your coming to the funeral tomorrow =P
hsrulz03 2 years ago 21
@hsrulz03 legends never die
chuj00 1 year ago
good
phiber85 2 years ago
everyone looks high. keep trying next time huh
Chief1Apache 2 years ago
Dude I'm not a big fan of rap but you did awesome! And you actually look good rapping. I like it!
KritikalError 2 years ago
@kakahieu12 rape? wtf?
koolpeter 2 years ago
pretty sure...they're all high. maybe not really high. but i think just a bit.
Walkeriskoolierthanu 2 years ago 2
Why did he kill it? Some one tell me this. :'(
ptrojan0842 2 years ago 3
Haha, it looks like nobody gives a shit. You need to re-upload this for better quality, this is very good. You're pretty talented.
IRideDaLollercoaster 2 years ago
You MURDERERD IT !!!
lol
tzero66 2 years ago 3
nice man ! :)
TakenWasTaken 2 years ago
awesome dude! that was really freakin good.
sasymuzik 2 years ago
wow... you did a really good job. You have to reupload!! you got talent!
r0ckit2thesk 2 years ago
Wow I don't even like rap that much, but that was good. Definitely should re-upload it with your rap overlayed over the song.
chowfan3 2 years ago
i wish the other people would shut the fuck up, but the rap is A-MAZ-ING
TheRecreatedR67 2 years ago
he he theres a gta san andreas poster in the backroung
glucy76 2 years ago
re-record and re-up please!
adored1988 2 years ago
they are sooooo stooooneddd hahahahaa
spidaarMAN 2 years ago
this is so great!
btw the girl at 0:34 was like ""wtf?" haha
pl4typuses 2 years ago
nice spit holla at me for some free beats
DjFreshmatic 2 years ago
0:42 buddy has his Hatervision on LOCK!! wtf?! ahahahahhahaha so funny the people in the room. nice spit too.
HeyPoi 2 years ago
Dumb kid yelling in the beginning just about made me want to close it.. your rap is pretty good man, consider re-recording just the audio and posting it for a better sound quality. Keep it up man, that was pretty good. :)
ChathamFr0 2 years ago
that was dope
NOSFERATUalu 2 years ago
dude this is awesome!
GunSmoke347 2 years ago
pretty good, re-uploade it, with a better microfoon, and ask you friend next time not to talk when he is recording=\
djmaxproo 2 years ago
not bad at all he was pretty good. props to you.
Ness3142 2 years ago
HAHA you all look so baked xD
bassatic 2 years ago
Dude, you did an AWESOME job on that freestyle! Well played...well played indeed.
JuicyJJ3 2 years ago
CoOl MaN
XD
5*
MrMKWRacer 2 years ago
not to shabby boss. pretty good if that was written down b4. even better if that was off the dome.
juicebox91 2 years ago
thought this was guuna be shit ..... but yu actually killed that track.... i thought u would of fuckd it up ...nope... good job man
kevinlyonsfougere 2 years ago
Cool dude you did really well. But you need to do another one with out the morons around you. Keep the good job. Five stars from me. Just dont listen to heaters they are just gallous and trying to bring you down thats all. I said your awesome and you can do rap as hell thought.
cobrasfire03 2 years ago
theyre falling asleep on you man lmao jk that was badass.. you just need to throw some dirty on it some soul and it would be legit.
thenewyardbirds 2 years ago
Well, certainly sounds scripted, but its still pretty tight. Jenkees new album is out! DL-ing that shit soon as I get home!
pallymeat 2 years ago
that was pretty good actually :P
pejpo 2 years ago
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Whitey Raps Inc.! Haha L-A-M-E...
Jourdain215 2 years ago
love it
more videos plz !
OoYannikgoty0utubeoO 2 years ago
thanks everyone, i appreciate the views and comments
fathansolo 2 years ago
mad good for a freestyle, white boy or not, things are'a changin.
athfcarl 2 years ago