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  • Whats this song called?

  • nooo it breaks my heart when joe and sheryll aren't together!!!

  • TIME TO GET BACK WITH JOE!!!!!kevin and Sam are meanys...they belong togother...buy joe and sheryll are innocent and they should b 2gether

  • AHHHHHHH oh my jonas!!! She said Joe ohhhh myyy ahhhhhhhh. sorry you guys already know that but oh my jonas oh my jonas oh my jonas

  • Wed never work out sorry. Lol fav part

  • l sense trouble brewing up in the future

    lol

    i'm pshic

  • Hey, please check out my Jonas Brothers stries. I would really apreciate it if you read and commented. And if you like them you can subscribe.

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  • ouch.

    i have a feeling that cute jasons gonna cum back O_O

  • yes!

  • OMG!!! AHHH!! SO UNEXPECTED!!!!

  • namee drop.

    ruh-roh.

    lmao.

    im like so into your stories. xD

  • AHHH! YES! she said joe! lol! :D sigh. loooove it haha.

  • :0 Love triangle!:0

  • yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­a she said joe

    yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­a

  • yay!!!! she does love him still!!!! kevin and her dont match joe and she match better he should be with sam kevin I mean should be with sam

  • biggg drama!

    rule number1- dont date an ex's sibling

    rule number2- dont date a bffs sibling

    rule number3- dont say i love you___ (insert ex's name here)

  • Kevin let out a chuckle before he kissed her. When he pulled back he looked her straight in the eyes]

    KEVIN: I love you Sheryll.

    SHERYLL: I love you Joe.

    KEVIN: Joe?

    [Sheryll only realized her mistake after she saw the expression on Kevin's face]

    whoaa. SOOOOO did not se that one coming!! hmmm i see drama aroundd the corner! haha.

  • yaya she said JOE!!! =]].

    i HOPPEE this jason guy doesnt come in btwn nick and sarah they are tooo perfect =] <3

  • KEVIN: I love you Sheryll.

    SHERYLL: I love you Joe.

    KEVIN: Joe?

    OMG I COMPELETELY DID NOT EXPECT THAT!!!!!!!!! that is such a great twist.

  • wow. Sheryll is torn between two guys. yikes!

  • [Kevin let out a chuckle before he kissed her. When he pulled back he looked her straight in the eyes]

    KEVIN: I love you Sheryll.

    SHERYLL: I love you Joe.

    KEVIN: Joe?

    [Sheryll only realized her mistake after she saw the expression on Kevin's face]

    OMJ i totally didn't expect that!!!!

  • dude. yay. I knew she loved joe! joe and sheryll all the way! im secretly happy that joe and sam wont work! :)

  • omg i can not belive she said joe but she much better off with him anhywayyyy

  • oo he got tolddd loll

  • i knew sheryll really did love joe yay lol

  • I feel bad 4 Sam

    I changed my mind Joe+Sheryll and Kevin+Sam that would be better

  • whoa! go sheryll!!!

  • Holy crap!!!! Major diss for ole Kevy!! Hahaha!

    I loved it though, of course!

    I mean I still think it should be Joe and Sheryll!!

  • AHH!!! YES!!!!!!

  • ahhh joe and sam didn't work out...i feel secretly happy for that o.o

    eek, kevin. that's so rude of sheryll

  • wow i didn't see that coming. its like kevin just got slapped in the face. OUCH!

  • omg so funny!

    KEVIN: I love you Sheryll.

    SHERYLL: I love you Joe.

    KEVIN: Joe?

    [Sheryll only realized her mistake after she saw the expression on Kevin's face

  • what's the name of the song??

  • oh snap!

  • OHHHHHHHHHHHH SNAPPPP!!!!

    Joe?

    Mhhm. Joe.

    I love your storybook-Nick-Dude, too. I think it's amazing when a guy's protective. Maybe not OVERPROTECTIVE, but Nick's version was nice.

    He appologized, didn't he?

    :D

  • joe and sheryll together please

  • woow now it's really late here, i just can't believe that i read 50 today! haha, im so happy for kevin and sheryll, i need to go to bed now but i can tell you that tomorrow i'll read the next one

    this is sooo cool!

  • Omg here we go again!

  • omjj! i love the end!!

  • They do look...kinda...not really...alike...But thats not why! I'm SMART!!!!!!!

  • that was very unexpected...weird...but it was prolly out of habit!!!!

  • nick and sarah better stay together!!

  • LMAO!!!

    KEVIN: I love you Sheryll.

    SHERYLL: I love you Joe.

    KEVIN: Joe?

  • OMG!!

  • OMG!!

  • OMG!!!!! joe and sheryll have to get back together now.

  • joe

  • oh crap!!!!

    she said JOE!!!

    uh oh

    not good

    and what gonna happen with nick and sarah after the jason thing???

    dun dun dun!!

  • this unvierse is COMPLETELY CRAZY.

  • dun dun dun....oops on sheryll's part

  • I want Joe and Sheryll together!

  • KEVIN: I love you Sheryll.

    SHERYLL: I love you Joe.

    KEVIN: Joe?

    [Sheryll only realized her mistake after she saw the expression on Kevin's face]

    Dun Dun Dun!!!!!! This is just like a soap opera and i'm lovng every minute!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next one (which will be happening in like 10 seconds)

  • YESS!

    Joe 1 Kevin 0 ;)

  • OMJ!! Now I gotta go keep reading! I'm almost there, I've finally gotten caught up this far!! I love it! <3

  • OMJ she said "JOE" instead of "Kevin" this is not gonna end well!!! MAKE MORE PRETTY PLZ!!!

  • OMFG WAT HAPPENS NXT POST UP SOON

  • oh wow hes mad and joe is gonna be happy

  • literally i need you to post one soon, cause.... well i just need it hahahahaha so plz plz post it

  • OMJ! she said i love you joe to Kevin!!!

    EEEEKK!

    PLZ PUT UP ANOTHER ONE!

    B4 I DIE! haha

    im like...addicted to this story!!!

    I WANNA SEE WHAT KEVIN SAYS!!!

    im srry Kevin...and Joe....

    but im happy tht Nicks happy! =]

    SO YEHA PLZ PUT UP ANOTHER ONEE!!

  • ahhhhhhhhhhh ADD ANOTHER BEFORE I DIE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT KEVIN DOES

  • YESSS im so happy she still likes joe =]]] im gonna go eat a can of whipped cream im so happy

  • lol. Your comment made me laugh!

  • please hurry and put the next one on because the first time i read this i had to leave my grandpa's house so i didn't have the internet and i was going psycho cause i was so addicted to this story and i feel so bad for joe please put him back with sherryl they are like meant to be

  • i looooovee it!!

    can't wait for the next one!!!

    =D

  • please please write the next one (MAKE SURE JOE AND SHERLL GET BACK TOGETHER AND KEVIN FINDS SOMEONE ELSE!!)

  • EEEEEEEEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • cant wait for next chapter i love the part where kevins says i love you sheryll and sheryll say love you joe

  • Omg! Omg! AH! I need a new story

    please tell me what happens!

  • ooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!! she didnt!!!!!!! oh annd i feel really bad for joe! i mean hes sooo sad and he doesnt know who to go too! Sheryll just made a mistake cause she's used to saying i love you joe, and saying joe i dot love kevin. she actually barely uses the words kevin and love in a sentance, without saying dont in between! im so sorry for kevin i mean that must hurt sooo bad buyt being kevin i think maybe he'll let it slide! the name game hurts sooo bad, most ppl get helle angry

  • YIKESSS, i hope she still loves Joe..

    Her and Joe.. are just ment to BEEE.

    And i hope nothing gets between Sarah and Nick.. because they went to friken ITALY by THEMSELVES.. i know this is a story.. but who in their right minds would let a 15 year old go on ITALY wiht a GIRL. LMAO!

    HURRY post the next oneeeee.

  • oh snap

  • OMG I LUV IT!

  • UGH!!!

    Well, Ive finally caught up!

    But now Im used to there being more. :(

    Hurry!

  • omj when is the next one??????

  • plz plz plz dont let this jason guy get in between sarah and nicks relationship! they're the only ones who didnt break up yet! they're my fav couple in this series and they need to stay 2getha!!!!!

  • Love this chapter. What's gonna happen next?? Post the next one ASAP.

  • omg not expected i wonder how kevin feels hurrry with next 1 plz

  • ooooo ya joe and sheryll i mean if u look at joe it like WHOA sexiness and if u look at kevin hes just cute i gess

  • whoa sexiness haha finally someone can put it into decent words :-D

  • snap on the last lines!

  • please don't let this jason guy get sarah and nick messed up they're like the only couple that isn't screwed up yet.

  • i cant wait any longer i need to know what happens!!

  • these stories are getting more and more intense!! i luv luv luv the ending!!!!!!! keep going and post the next one!!!!!

  • omj!!! lovedd ittt

  • omg amazing !!!! ur story is my favorite jonas brothers fanfic i tell alll my frends about it !!! post more soooon !!! i have to know what kevin is going to say !!

  • please post the next one tonight! there getting more and more intense!!! please post the next one!!! <333333

  • please post the next one tonight! there getting more and more intense!!! please post the next one!!! <333333

  • please post the next one tonight! there getting more and more intense!!! please post the next one!!! <333333

  • omg, hurry and make moreee! this story cannotttt wait. haha :] BTW, Joe is waaaay hotter than Kevin, like..eww. Haha. But I like Kevin, but not like I like Nick and Joe. Make her and Joe inseperable. :)

  • ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    yayyyy!! lol!! SHE LOOVEES JOOEEE!..

    lol I know that now Joe s really gonna move on when she still loves him!!

    GOD I LOVE UR SERIESS!! :D

  • I love you Joe that just proves that Joe and Sheryll are ment to be (thinking) now I sound like cupid

  • HAAHAH WOW. ouch..

    "i love you joe."

    eeee.

    put joe and sheryll back together dude. -_-'

  • aw, i feel bad for Kevin now

    I like him and Sheryll together :-/

    great stories though! they're amazing <3

  • omfg, she said joe!!!!! plz write more!!!!

  • NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! sheryll how cud u:(

  • omj!! more!! i cnt believe it!!

  • I have to know what happens. Post the next one SOON PLEASE!!

  • oh, nice one sheryll,

    she loves joe 2

  • okay. can't wait until sixtynine. but, now that kevin and sheryll are together, i'm thinking that her and joe should get back together. i know what i said, i just am very confused. i don't know who sheryll should be with anymore. but, i'm leaning towards joe.

    <33.

    amazing.

    sixtynine, soon!

  • dramma!!!!!!!!!!11

  • YEAH im kinda happy cus i like her and joe better together please make another!

  • omj omj omj i wanna know what kevin says!!! please post the next one tonight!!!! or NOW!! please!!!!

  • add another one hurry hurry please

  • add another one hurry hurry please

  • OH SNAP! SHE SAID JOE!

  • omj! plzzzzz post i cant wait any longer!

  • OMH MY EFFIN JONAS!!!! sheryll be in troubleee!!!! hurry with the nextt!! i have to know what kevin says!!!!

  • omfg!!!! she just said Joe...omg omg omg hurry!

  • omg joe lol

    psot the next one please

    can u post it today at like 5 if u get enough comments

  • ups :D by mistake i posted two xDD cos i cliked twice XD ok my english is really bad cos im tierd :( i had no sleep this night :(

  • omg!!!!! she really does love Joe1 :))) cos like two episodes back at the dance you said she was the one in sam place soo i kinda knew that she loved joe and i think she kinda loves kevin to :P thats what i think :DD i dont know im just a huge fan of this xD i think sheryll and joe gonna come back :) and i think probably kevin and sam get back together :DDD i have no idea so ok im jsut gonna stop xD :)

  • omg!!!!! she really does love Joe1 :))) cos like two episodes back at the dance you said she was the one in sam place soo i kinda knew that she loved joe and i think she kinda loves kevin to :P thats what i think :DD i dont know im just a huge fan of this xD i think sheryll and joe gonna come back :) and i think probably kevin and sam get back together :DDD i have no idea so ok im jsut gonna stop xD :)

  • omj ... drama is about to happen ....

    lol

    thats really good

  • Oh my gosh!! My jaw just dropped! Please put the next one up ASAP!! I NEED IT! These are so good!

    And please don't make Jason ruin things! I love Nick and Sarah!

  • this was a really good ending.

    please add the other episode today! i cant wait!

  • YES!!! i want joe and sheryll together!!!! and i feel bad 4 joe!!!

  • OH-MY-GOD PLEASE HURRY!!

  • OH-MY-GOD PLEASE HURRY!!

  • OH-MY-GOD PLEASE HURRY!!

  • omg! i forgot she was with kevin until kevin was like "JOE?"

  • omg! i forgot she was with kevin until kevin was like "JOE?"

  • omg intensee! i didnt expec that..whens the next one?

  • DRAMA!!!!

    Whens the next??

  • OH MY GODDDDDDD AHH ADD THE NEXT ONE!

  • this is so goooood!

  • Sheryll, make up your mind! D:

  • omggg

    i cant wait to read where this is going

    Dxx

    you need to put the nxt one yp soonn!

    and i really love joe and sheryll together :P

  • omggg

    i cant wait to read where this is going

    Dxx

    you need to put the nxt one yp soonn!

    and i really love joe and sheryll together :P

  • Wow!  I all of a sudden saw she said that. Oh my God! Please post another today! I need to know what happens!

  • OMJ. CAn't Wait for the next chapter! This is getting so dramaISH! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA! Love it!

  • OMG!

    this is getting good. :)

  • OMG!

    this is getting good. :)

  • WOW! i deffently didn't expect that! This is gonna lead to some drama! plz post the next one soon! plz plz plz plz plz plz!!!!!!

  • uh sheryll? you were talking to kevin, not joe. lol. i cant wait for 69! hurry!

  • OOOOOOOOOOO MYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOODDDDDDD!!!!

    unexpected!

  • omg great ending!!! i neeed more!!!

  • THIS IS SO GOOD

  • =] great ending!!

    i hope joe and sheryll get back 2gether!!

    wats the song? i like it

  • my eyes were so wide open when i read that sherryl said i love you JOE!!!!!

  • omg! me too!!!

    haha. HIGH FIVE!

  • oh yeah!!!

  • oh yeah!!!

  • OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! the last lines were JAW DROPPING..MOUTH COVERING TO STOP THE SCREAM!!!! oh god..~heidi

  • AHHHHHHH! omj my jaw dropped as soon as i read wat sheryll said  and it stayed open for like 15 seconds haha omj plz plz plz plz post! ill die if u dont!!!!!!

  • more ASAP!!! Please post the next one real soon

  • srry for posting it severl times lol i didn't kno it posted the first time lol

  • whhhhhhhhhoaaaaaaaa what the that was un expected

  • OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!! WAT!!! MY JAW DROPED! lol i just screamed outloud and i couldn't even pull myself together to read the last two lines OMG!!!! this means she just can't keep her mind off f joe will they again get bac together?!!! i see some drama happening PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ POST the next one ASAP latest tomorrow PLZ i am freakin out i need to kno wats goin to happen OMG!!!! i can't stop saying that lol LOVE the STORIES!!!! ur really good thanx so much for starting them OMG!!!! lol

  • OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!! WAT!!! MY JAW DROPED! lol i just screamed outloud and i couldn't even pull myself together to read the last two lines OMG!!!! this means she just can't keep her mind off f joe will they again get bac together?!!! i see some drama happening PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ POST the next one ASAP latest tomorrow PLZ i am freakin out i need to kno wats goin to happen OMG!!!! i can't stop saying that lol LOVE the STORIES!!!! ur really good thanx so much for starting them OMG!!!! lol

  • aaaaaaahh this is sooooo good! post the next one soon! =]

  • ahh sheryll

    great ending now i need the next one

  • OOOOOOH MY GOD!

    that's gonna be a short relationship (kev&sheryll)

    wow, you should write soap operas! lol

  • oh em gee.. can't wait!! i wanna no what happens!!

  • omj! I love you joe..! wow harsh!

  • just kidding i wasnt haha byt that was amazingg please write more i neeeeeeed to know what happens!

  • AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I NEED THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!! poor kevin!!

  • wow!this is getting good!! is the next chapter coming out today?

  • YAY! Drama with Nick and Sarah! Thank you =]

  • WOOOOOOOOOOO FIRST COMMENT!

    YOUR AMAZINGGGG!!!

    i love your storieesss

  • wow! please hurry! its killing me waiting to find out what happens!

  • That was very good! I love reading these stories- when i read them i feel like my day is complete! lol keep on writing!

  • Omj! the ending is great! I was like =O, SHE LOVES JOE!!! Awesome story!

  • OMJ great!!! i luved it!! is jason gonna come back and ruin things??? i hope not but i guess its about time there was drama with nick and sarsh!! lol! make the next one soon!! there really good!

  • AHHH! AMAZING CHAPTER LOVELY!

  • she said JOE!!!!!!!!!1111omj!!!!111

  • Dun dun dun! I cant believe she said Joe insted of Kevin.

  • OMG!

    AMAZINGGGG!

    can't wait for sixtynine.

    keep writinggg!

    i <3 these stories.

  • that was wicked goood.

    hahahaha, i feel special i was the first to comment. and watch it!

    HOORAY!

    i <3 these stories so much.

    can't wait until sixtynine!

    AND KEEP GOING! AFTER SIXTYNINE!

  • That was amazing but i really hope kevin and sheryll stay together they really are perfect and in love. please post again soon

  • oooooooh somebodys in troubleeeee! haha nicely done

  • OH MY GOSH!

    THIS IS INTENSE!

    dude, i read that last part and my mouth dropped

    omg

  • OMJ!! I Loved the ending. "I love you...Joe!" Great chapter!

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