Longing - original piano composition

[spazosquirrel]

woah thats too pretty (:

[ScorpiusMusic]

Wonderful, I really loved it!

[millimusical]

very beautiful song. my favourite composition ive seen on youtube for some time.

keep it up

[Magicbeansx]

very talented ;D

[rattyboydave]

Not great hook... Perhaps too much repetition. Try making your piece too abstract. And try not to use the infamous 1st, minor 6th, 4th, 5th chord progression :P people tend to be bored by it because its probably the most generic chord progression there is.

Other than that, i thought the melody of it was outstanding... but try to make it more complex. not the melody itself, it needs to be simple. but try using a wider range of styles to bring the melody out, instead of just using single notes

[RobCatterton]

lovely and gentle -- much appreciated!

[coolkitty154]

you have a beautiful tune, but you need to work on the "details" as I call it. You repeat quite a lot in the song.

but other than that, I really loved your song! It was one of the best I've heard in a while... :D

[Faithinmeiseasy]

ooh beautiful!!I want to have the notes:)

[Resirance]

You are amazing :) This piece sounds like it really came from your heart, keep up the wonderful work ^^

[GinasGotDrama]

a magnificant piece, you are soooo talented....your are my idol

[smcam3]

thanks...how flattering!

[frododoingo987]

@GinasGotDrama

4 chords and he`s your idol? you must be an idiot

[SphincterBoyJenkins]

great song.

[guyof07]

This is an amazing piece. Keep up the good work!

[tiportosdu76]

c'est tres calme, j'adore!

[daniquevh]

simple & beautiful, great!

[JucHugi]

Beautiful! Simply beautiful.

[coolcatnumber2]

I dont think you wrote all of this, the main melody, I have heard before, copyright

[ezflow505]

that is sooo beautiful, I know why you called it longing, you conveyed that word very well!!

[gwithadream]

The next Yanni. Great job!

[composer14]

a well thought out piece.

[davidchentheman]

Its very predicable... maj... minor... maj(lower)... repeats over and over and voer again... nice asian pop style but people will get board. Although the melody is unique... its too random... no trade mark... Over all I'll give it a ok for effort.. but you'll get their

[guyof07]

You are right about the predictability, but some of Mozart's most famous pieces are predictable. Beethoven is a different story, however both are fantastic composers. Also, for the record, there's a "t" in "predictable", it's "bored" not "board", and "there" not "their".

[DamienTaubman]

Make sheet music and sell it!

[junnuj34]

not bad. it's a good piece. keep it up!