): my mouse slid and hit one star when i was trying to hit 5 im so sorry im gonna rate it on my 2nd channel 5 stars! please dont call me a 2 faced bitch for saying i love it but by mistake rating it 1 star!
ugh.... I like the idea.. but could you PLEASE make a sweet Niley MINUS the wierd stuff?? But I like the idea of Niley, cuz selena is an awesome person in real life, and when people make other Nileys they make sel play as a Bad person, or if they make a nelena, Mileys the bad girl... I like it minus that kind of drama... but other drama is cool. once again. Id just like to say, your a good writer, but can u make an appropriate one for your fans like me?? thanks..
Ok CAn u plz tellme did joe saw demis face i mean da 1st tym dey met did he saw her in shades too if tht happen \s it will b so awesome like a love in first sight!
I wonder what Selena did. Its kinda sad that their relationship breaks. They seem to be together for awhile and that makes it even harder. But its a Jemi story so they'll find their peace somehow. :P
i loved ur writing in this one!!! i think both styles are awesome! and the idea too. And a title suggestion... maybe ''One Touch That Leads To Fallling'' no thats to long and stupid :P but Psychic DDL is a great title,
PleAsee pleasee make the works bigger and a different color their the same as the pictures! I can't even read and I live ur sories but I can't even comprehend them but it was AMAzING!
dear DANA! why is the title temporary?! i actually like it. hmmm.. if you change it, i'll find you in your sleep, like the threat you always send towards me. that's right!! the tables are turned now XD
write the way you feel!! i don't care if it's in jibberish, i'll probably love it, because it's you :)
What the hell did Selena do? Ugh, there she goes breaking yet another heart. Lol. The movie was amazing. I think a could title would be: Through Closed Doors:: Cuz Demi is physic but no one really knows its hers so shes sorta hiding but she falls in love with Joe. Idk lol. Niley was soo cute! Can't wait till they get together!! Post soon! Ur talented! Looved it!
it's awesome for some reason the line "one spark starts a fire" kept coming into my head after Demi touched joe's hand. lol idk why. it's really good. keep it up. if u ever need ne help, message me :)
Its a little surprising usually Joe is the one who uses is sexual charm to "woo" someone. :) Its a nice change to see a Dedicated Joesph. Or is he? :D So Demi has powers huh?Cool! I WANT POWERS! Why god? Why?! x) SORRY sugar is getting to me! AW! Selena's seems SO nice. But, from Miley's response she's an evil SLUT! From the words of Miley of course. Not my own. COMMENT people or you'll be abducted at Night! By ALIENS! Long MEANINGFUL COMMENTS! xD x3
love it
RyanJoeDemiNickKevin 1 year ago
question why is miley calling her a slut??
CasiAngeles193 1 year ago
i loved it!!!!!
CasiAngeles193 1 year ago
omg how do u do it !!! got me sooo very interested:)
jfLoDemilovatofan 2 years ago
dayumm i havnt reayd yah stories in 4eva so im startin wit this series haha ... hey chk my dance vid out an comment an rate tell me wta u think:)
jfLoDemilovatofan 2 years ago
AMAZING
Dilibee6735 2 years ago
LMFAO Nick & Miley Just are TOO Funny.
This is seriously amazing. I love this story.
chickengoodt 2 years ago
OMMGGG
I LOVE IT
): my mouse slid and hit one star when i was trying to hit 5 im so sorry im gonna rate it on my 2nd channel 5 stars! please dont call me a 2 faced bitch for saying i love it but by mistake rating it 1 star!
smileymiley2309 2 years ago
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Aww you always make Selena a bitch ;( ugh I never see any jelena or nelena ;(
xxDemixSelxx 2 years ago
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NO! Jelena is so amazing together!
Btw,, why do you hate Selly so much?
You always make her a bitch!
And she's not! Milerz and Demz are!
lmao;; i love them though.<3
SellyG+JoeyJ=L.O.V.E♥
Jelena all the way!!
JonasCrazyOfficial 2 years ago
did selena cheat on joe? i think so
alex05096 2 years ago
Whats DDL stand 4?
SportzzChic101 2 years ago
im gonna guess Demetria Devonne Lovato but i could be wrong
dreamy619 2 years ago
Lol I think so too :|
Cymbline200 2 years ago
omg hahah yor funny ..u got it right though
jfLoDemilovatofan 2 years ago
@jfLoDemilovatofan how am i funny? lol
dreamy619 2 years ago
Are you joking?
It's Demetria Devonne Lovato!
thedolphin96 2 years ago
they just r too funny haha .. i got it right away
jfLoDemilovatofan 2 years ago
@thedolphin96 uhh yeah we all know her full name no need to say it again! =D
pinkguitargal10 1 year ago
ugh.... I like the idea.. but could you PLEASE make a sweet Niley MINUS the wierd stuff?? But I like the idea of Niley, cuz selena is an awesome person in real life, and when people make other Nileys they make sel play as a Bad person, or if they make a nelena, Mileys the bad girl... I like it minus that kind of drama... but other drama is cool. once again. Id just like to say, your a good writer, but can u make an appropriate one for your fans like me?? thanks..
teendiabetic 2 years ago
This never came up in my subscription box!
I just noticed it when I went to your channel "/
JonasDemiSelena657 2 years ago
AWESOME: loved every single bit. hehe. funny and brilliant as usual. lvoed the writing! :D
shatteredYou 2 years ago
amazing.
alltimesickestkidx 2 years ago
that was amazinggg :)
nick is freaking hilarious
hes always one of my favorite characters in your stories :D
kleahxoxo 2 years ago
HAHA LMFAO NICK!!!
"Well, I know an opening I'd like to enter"
Absolutely fucking amazing.
oneinamillionkl 2 years ago
love it its obvious selena cheated on him
xxloleverxaxx 2 years ago
wow cant wait for the next one!!! =]
KoolGaal 2 years ago
PS : The movie gonna be awesome !! (as always anyway :P)
demifan981 2 years ago
I wonder what selena did but something telling me that she wasn't looking for a bathroom, am I right ? ;)
demifan981 2 years ago
This was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
I love the nick parts haha xD
PauletteNicoleFG 2 years ago
its awesome. i really like the idea, to make her a psycho. :)
DineLade 2 years ago
I like this idea for a story :))
it's different so far yay!
Hmmm what about "premonitions"
for the title?
and you can write however you want. change the style whenever u want. i will always support you :D
Scalloz 2 years ago
It`s great:d but whats gotten into Miley with the "making Selena a slut" thing?=D
deenymada 2 years ago
wow i love the idea :)
nick is hilarious :D
cant wait to read more
SarahAlwaysKnows10 2 years ago
This is sooo awesomeee! I love every series you makee! I bet selena is cheating on joe..
bunnyboo1423 2 years ago
hey, thanks =D you're a slut =)
TribeSpirit 2 years ago
lmao! I love Nick!
Love the Niley parts, so funny.
And Selena is cheating on Joe, aww poor Joey =/
CatchMeNowx3 2 years ago
OMG that was amazing!!!
I LOVE THE NILEY PARTS :D :D
and selenas cheating on him? :O
Who would do that too Joe Jonas? :L
cant wait for more :) x
iatcheson 2 years ago
Ok CAn u plz tellme did joe saw demis face i mean da 1st tym dey met did he saw her in shades too if tht happen \s it will b so awesome like a love in first sight!
sara177k 2 years ago
I LOVED IT(: An awesome name would be: Behind Closed Doors - I thought of that when I thought of what selena might of done(:
TaylorMay220 2 years ago
i LOVED it, i think you should keep the name-not only because i can't think of anything but also because its so unique.
=D
ohhh....what did selena DO!?
i mean, i'm not complaning, i love jemi not jelena but stlll....i'm nosey.
more please.
=D
xxmelodiezacloverxx 2 years ago
aww the Niley parts are so funny xD
I wonder what Selena did. Its kinda sad that their relationship breaks. They seem to be together for awhile and that makes it even harder. But its a Jemi story so they'll find their peace somehow. :P
loved it.♥
paponeeri 2 years ago
116 already! Looks like have to post part 2, lol. xD I seriously LOVED it. Original. Awesome.
Yvaia 2 years ago
Woah! How can Selena cheat on Joe?! Such a bitch! o_O
And I actually love the name, it's unique and not a cliche! You should keep it!
Nick is kinda my favorite character in this right now, even though he's a weirdo ;) :D
hexenkind 2 years ago
i love it! amaazing!
Nicks such a perve and I love how Joes not a jerk in a story for once.
Leahbabes307 2 years ago
every boy is a perve deep inside and many of them show they are.. If you think Nick is a perve in the story... so then meet my class
BTWILUJB 2 years ago
Hah.
Same with my class.
Leahbabes307 2 years ago
lol! I believe every single person on planet earth is a perve deep down inside, even if they say they're not. Both girls & boys :P
TribeSpirit 2 years ago
OMG <33333333333 IT
BTWILUJB 2 years ago
i loved ur writing in this one!!! i think both styles are awesome! and the idea too. And a title suggestion... maybe ''One Touch That Leads To Fallling'' no thats to long and stupid :P but Psychic DDL is a great title,
Jemi4thewin 2 years ago
omj!!!!amazing [lz let be some Nelena in this movie))))))
yanochkavi 2 years ago
hello. (:
that was awesome as usual. I think this is a great plot. and i cant wait for the next episode. For a title idea; Touch My Future.
but your title is nice. (: it's catchy. ;)
lisandra97 2 years ago
I LOVE THIS!!! i like the tittle! but if you want to change put something like supernatural or something like that but phsychic ddl is good!
i love this new movie
zacefronmaniaka 2 years ago
good it was awesome cant wait for more!
sara177k 2 years ago
wow that was aweseome :)
nileyhater 2 years ago
you edit your picturesw beautifully <3 i cant wait to read more (:
iluvjb4ever123 2 years ago
OMG! I'm literally freaking out! I can't believe you commented on my story! This is such an honor!
And thank you :D
TribeSpirit 2 years ago
not you too! D: lol, everyone says that to me.. ;P haha, you're welcome :D
iluvjb4ever123 2 years ago
lol! That is because you are a one hell of a write, so having you to read anyone's story is an honor =)
TribeSpirit 2 years ago
i like it. alot :) can't wait for the next part.
sellybear7 2 years ago
I love the title.
DONTCHA CHANGE IT.xD
&& slutt? oh uuh. thats not
good. i wonder what happend
AND IM PRETTY DARN SURE
THAT U SHOULD LISTEN TO
DEMI, JOE. (: hehehe ps-
i love it when nick is like this
a miley doesnt even give himm
the time of the day. xD
dimmthaatspotlight 2 years ago
I'm intrigued to why Miley is the one name calling. I wanna know what Selena did to Miley, seeing as they're supposedly friends. Poor Joe, though.
kyokunluver 2 years ago
Haha, i loved niley's relationship in this. :P
And I cant believe selena. :l
Cant wait for more though.
This looks awesome. :)
xAshleyxAmyx 2 years ago
I loved it. i really honestly do, i just don't get the story line much.
articapple 2 years ago
This is sooo freakin amazing!! :D i like the title too :)
xxxTakeABreathxxx 2 years ago
AAAAHHH! That was awesome :))
Hahaha :)
I miss your stories :D
Good thing you post a new one already.
But please, can you post more of this and OJ:T.
please.
Hahaha xDD
zxXJemiAddictXxz 2 years ago
So Selena's cheating. Shame shame shame (anybody used to play that game?). Not really a Niley fan but i like their relationship in this.
PorkYouPineBlues 2 years ago
:O
LOVE THiS!!! and i think Psychic DDl is good [:
JBfanXL0veThemX95 2 years ago
i like niley in this one! : D
whatr did sel do to be called a slut by miley though? i'm curious lol
i like how demi's a psychic
flippin awesome hahaha
hope the next part comes out!!
only 15 more to go!
dmdbx3 2 years ago
i like this.Alot.
lolannie 2 years ago
please continue it was amazing!
ritzandriggle 2 years ago
PleAsee pleasee make the works bigger and a different color their the same as the pictures! I can't even read and I live ur sories but I can't even comprehend them but it was AMAzING!
blondesalsao2x 2 years ago
Awesome!!! :)
Love it!
mjonas1910 2 years ago
OMG I LOVE THE NILEY IN THIS LOL! <3
i cant wait for the next one:|
twilight4life130 2 years ago
dear DANA! why is the title temporary?! i actually like it. hmmm.. if you change it, i'll find you in your sleep, like the threat you always send towards me. that's right!! the tables are turned now XD
write the way you feel!! i don't care if it's in jibberish, i'll probably love it, because it's you :)
PS i love it :)
it's really cute. i neeeeeeed more!!
xoXxXkittyXxXox 2 years ago
wait, i dont get the end. :O
EllExOriginalxMusic 2 years ago
this is great :)
can't wait for the next one
DarlaJonas 2 years ago
Psychic DDL is right ;)
Hmm... I wonder who the girl could be that he falls head over heels for...?
Hehe
Post soon!
xxPinkMuffinsxx 2 years ago
addicted already with just the first chapter :)
RingTheRose 2 years ago
i loved it can't wait for more!!! Can't really think of a title for right now, but if I do get an idea i'll comment again.
acirestar 2 years ago
ohhhh shiiit what did little miss lena do
xxwendyb3dhab3stxx 2 years ago
I really like this sorta feel. its like, new. And unique. Please keep going. Your insight's are real good! :D
0JemiForever0 2 years ago
this is really good
i like the plot
how do u come up with these things?
ddlandselgomezfan 2 years ago
What the hell did Selena do? Ugh, there she goes breaking yet another heart. Lol. The movie was amazing. I think a could title would be: Through Closed Doors:: Cuz Demi is physic but no one really knows its hers so shes sorta hiding but she falls in love with Joe. Idk lol. Niley was soo cute! Can't wait till they get together!! Post soon! Ur talented! Looved it!
TheNileyGirl 2 years ago
keep going...(: and keep it. it's psychic demetria devonne lovato. and the storyline's good, but a BIT obvious(:
appleecrumblyy 2 years ago
i loved it! <3
im addicted already!
MrsJosephJonas4ever1 2 years ago
zomg. this is amazing. yet again u amaze me! :D I hawrt the title :)
Cymbline200 2 years ago
wow really good! but who is nick's girlfriend? L-O-V-E The story and plot it is so orginal.
sofbalcrazy05 2 years ago
ouch i think selena is cheatingg. that butt
FastpitchIsLife1 2 years ago
SO good XD
And I love your writing in this ( and in others )
veronicaz101 2 years ago
Believe in fortune tellers!!!
nileyforeveralways72 2 years ago
loved it..i love the story line :D
lucycullenabc 2 years ago
OOO; i like this moviee (:
i think the title is pretty good. o;
mizzfionaa 2 years ago
how about "just one touch"
eh i know its terrible
love it already!!!
EllenXlemon 2 years ago
this is really interesting and different.
i like it! :)
Xilovejb00X 2 years ago
this is different i like it!
NataliaG08 2 years ago
it's awesome for some reason the line "one spark starts a fire" kept coming into my head after Demi touched joe's hand. lol idk why. it's really good. keep it up. if u ever need ne help, message me :)
PlayMyMusicJoBros 2 years ago
Oh My gosh! No idea for the title... Buuut I like your neeew writing style! :] First Eppie was great! :DD <3 5/5
MissTeamJemi 2 years ago
I like the titled. GREAT : O
ilubjessemc 2 years ago
amazinggg its so weird im used to it being the other way around nd stuff haha ill get over it it looks really really good
Catsrockm 2 years ago
this is such an amazing idea(:
how about [what a turnaround?]
iMileySelenaDemi 2 years ago
YOU GO MILEY.
HAZAH.
haha.
... sorry..
i had a moment..
:D
and how about... 'the touch of future'
xD?
since ya know, she touches people (NOT LIKE THAT :) and she can tell their futures just like that ;D?
DoYouHeartWaffles 2 years ago
Loveeeee it. <3
Jelizabeth4E 2 years ago
Damn! Miley's mood did a 3 fucking 60! xD
Its a little surprising usually Joe is the one who uses is sexual charm to "woo" someone. :) Its a nice change to see a Dedicated Joesph. Or is he? :D So Demi has powers huh?Cool! I WANT POWERS! Why god? Why?! x) SORRY sugar is getting to me! AW! Selena's seems SO nice. But, from Miley's response she's an evil SLUT! From the words of Miley of course. Not my own. COMMENT people or you'll be abducted at Night! By ALIENS! Long MEANINGFUL COMMENTS! xD x3
NileyUniverse 2 years ago
Demi's good. Haha. I wonder if she's gonna see Joe coming into her future.
worldofchancesxx 2 years ago
this is amazing already, can't wait for more:) i think the title you have is fine =)
kitkatkirsty 2 years ago
that waz awesome.........
ashadaily1996 2 years ago
awsome i wish u had 100 comments already u only have 19 inculding mine!haha can't wait!
jobrocraz92 2 years ago
I love whatever writing you like to do. You are amazing. I guess the betrayal that Demi mentioned is Selena. That little crackhead.
kimyattalissette 2 years ago
that was amazing!
next epi. :D
TheRockstardom 2 years ago
This is amazing :)
JemixNelenaxStories 2 years ago
woho interesting :)
DorsyJB 2 years ago
I think Selena is cheating on Joe
I bet Demi's the girl Joe's gonna fall in love with
WWWXXXZZZ81 2 years ago
nahhh really lol jk
sailorstargaby 2 years ago
Did I said something too obvious? lol
WWWXXXZZZ81 2 years ago
well yes duh its a jemi movie =)
sailorstargaby 2 years ago
I was just giving my opinion
WWWXXXZZZ81 2 years ago
lol and i was jk i didnt mean it as an insult so dont be mad or anything
sailorstargaby 2 years ago
ok
honestly you seemed a little bit rude in your last reply but it's fine
WWWXXXZZZ81 2 years ago
loved it loved it loved it
it was WOW cant wait for the next one
bbkeyme 2 years ago
That was really good :)
LOVED IT!
littlesis2000 2 years ago
oh nick, hes insane
xoxmrsnickjonas1 2 years ago
(gasp) Is that crackhead cheating on my Joseph?
jobrodemisemiselena 2 years ago
that was amazing ;D
i love the storyline completely brilliant (;
NickJonasGurl99 2 years ago
awesome!!
nickjonasisminexx 2 years ago
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Okay. I had to get that out.
THat was my excitement when I saw this on my subscription list!
LOve this story!
I love when you come out with new stories!
jobrodemisemiselena 2 years ago
Oh my god! That was awesome! I can't wait for the next one! :)
Teddytasha1 2 years ago
Loved it ! Amazing idea ! :P Cant wait for the next one
MissCharlotteX13 2 years ago
awesome!
ste1729 2 years ago
i loe this please kepp goin on wih this story
tubebabe29 2 years ago
I love Nick on this! and this is very good story!!!
xsansaax 2 years ago
OMG this was brilliant
amazing loved it
and let me guess for miley to be calling selena a slut is because she must be cheating on joe
cant wait for the next one :)
guanaca4ever 2 years ago
i love itttttttttttt!!
ElisaMelody 2 years ago
I like this writing style (:
And your idea for this story is amazinggg (:
I love it! xD
I can't wait for the next one ;)
And as for a title suggestion hmmmm,
Maybe.. Your my future?
Not so perfect Present? hahaha those were so lame! Umm, I can't think of a good one sorry hun :P But, I hope you think of one! (: haha
CrazzyFerYoux 2 years ago
amazinnnn!
ys2468 2 years ago
Loved it! And Pcychic DDL is an awesome title -I think that-. Can't wait for the next one!
Peace.Love&&Jemi.
- Addie
xTheVampireDiariesx 2 years ago
i like this aloooooot :) as long as its jemi and niley im loving it XD
disneystarsn1fan 2 years ago