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  • love it

  • question why is miley calling her a slut??

  • i loved it!!!!!

  • omg how do u do it !!! got me sooo very interested:)

  • dayumm i havnt reayd yah stories in 4eva so im startin wit this series haha ... hey chk my dance vid out an comment an rate tell me wta u think:)

  • AMAZING

  • LMFAO Nick & Miley Just are TOO Funny.

    This is seriously amazing. I love this story.

  • OMMGGG

    I LOVE IT

    ): my mouse slid and hit one star when i was trying to hit 5 im so sorry im gonna rate it on my 2nd channel 5 stars! please dont call me a 2 faced bitch for saying i love it but by mistake rating it 1 star!

  • did selena cheat on joe? i think so

  • Whats DDL stand 4?

  • im gonna guess Demetria Devonne Lovato but i could be wrong

  • Lol I think so too :|

  • omg hahah yor funny ..u got it right though

  • @jfLoDemilovatofan how am i funny? lol

  • Are you joking?

    It's Demetria Devonne Lovato!

  • they just r too funny haha .. i got it right away

  • @thedolphin96 uhh yeah we all know her full name no need to say it again! =D

  • ugh.... I like the idea.. but could you PLEASE make a sweet Niley MINUS the wierd stuff?? But I like the idea of Niley, cuz selena is an awesome person in real life, and when people make other Nileys they make sel play as a Bad person, or if they make a nelena, Mileys the bad girl... I like it minus that kind of drama... but other drama is cool. once again. Id just like to say, your a good writer, but can u make an appropriate one for your fans like me?? thanks..

  • This never came up in my subscription box!

    I just noticed it when I went to your channel "/

  • AWESOME: loved every single bit. hehe. funny and brilliant as usual. lvoed the writing! :D

  • amazing.

  • that was amazinggg :)

    nick is freaking hilarious

    hes always one of my favorite characters in your stories :D

  • HAHA LMFAO NICK!!!

    "Well, I know an opening I'd like to enter"

    Absolutely fucking amazing.

  • love it its obvious selena cheated on him

  • wow cant wait for the next one!!! =]

  • PS : The movie gonna be awesome !! (as always anyway :P)

  • I wonder what selena did but something telling me that she wasn't looking for a bathroom, am I right ? ;)

  • This was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

    I love the nick parts haha xD

  • its awesome. i really like the idea, to make her a psycho. :)

  • I like this idea for a story :))

    it's different so far yay!

    Hmmm what about "premonitions"

    for the title?

    and you can write however you want. change the style whenever u want. i will always support you :D

  • It`s great:d but whats gotten into Miley with the "making Selena a slut" thing?=D

  • wow i love the idea :)

    nick is hilarious :D

    cant wait to read more

  • This is sooo awesomeee! I love every series you makee! I bet selena is cheating on joe..

  • hey, thanks =D you're a slut =)

  • lmao! I love Nick!

    Love the Niley parts, so funny.

    And Selena is cheating on Joe, aww poor Joey =/

  • OMG that was amazing!!!

    I LOVE THE NILEY PARTS :D :D

    and selenas cheating on him? :O

    Who would do that too Joe Jonas? :L

    cant wait for more :) x

  • Ok CAn u plz tellme did joe saw demis face i mean da 1st tym dey met did he saw her in shades too if tht happen \s it will b so awesome like a love in first sight!

  • I LOVED IT(: An awesome name would be: Behind Closed Doors - I thought of that when I thought of what selena might of done(:

  • i LOVED it, i think you should keep the name-not only because i can't think of anything but also because its so unique.

    =D

    ohhh....what did selena DO!?

    i mean, i'm not complaning, i love jemi not jelena but stlll....i'm nosey.

    more please.

    =D

  • aww the Niley parts are so funny xD

    I wonder what Selena did. Its kinda sad that their relationship breaks. They seem to be together for awhile and that makes it even harder. But its a Jemi story so they'll find their peace somehow. :P

    loved it.♥

  • 116 already! Looks like have to post part 2, lol. xD I seriously LOVED it. Original. Awesome.

  • Woah! How can Selena cheat on Joe?! Such a bitch! o_O

    And I actually love the name, it's unique and not a cliche! You should keep it!

    Nick is kinda my favorite character in this right now, even though he's a weirdo ;) :D

  • i love it! amaazing!

    Nicks such a perve and I love how Joes not a jerk in a story for once.

  • every boy is a perve deep inside and many of them show they are.. If you think Nick is a perve in the story... so then meet my class

  • Hah.

    Same with my class.

  • lol! I believe every single person on planet earth is a perve deep down inside, even if they say they're not. Both girls & boys :P

  • OMG <33333333333 IT

  • i loved ur writing in this one!!! i think both styles are awesome! and the idea too. And a title suggestion... maybe ''One Touch That Leads To Fallling'' no thats to long and stupid :P but Psychic DDL is a great title,

  • omj!!!!amazing [lz let be some Nelena in this movie))))))

  • hello. (:

    that was awesome as usual. I think this is a great plot. and i cant wait for the next episode. For a title idea; Touch My Future.

    but your title is nice. (: it's catchy. ;)

  • I LOVE THIS!!! i like the tittle! but if you want to change put something like supernatural or something like that but phsychic ddl is good!

    i love this new movie

  • good it was awesome cant wait for more!

  • wow that was aweseome :)

  • you edit your picturesw beautifully <3 i cant wait to read more (:

  • OMG! I'm literally freaking out! I can't believe you commented on my story! This is such an honor!

    And thank you :D

  • not you too! D: lol, everyone says that to me.. ;P haha, you're welcome :D

  • lol! That is because you are a one hell of a write, so having you to read anyone's story is an honor =)

  • i like it. alot :) can't wait for the next part.

  • I love the title.

    DONTCHA CHANGE IT.xD

    && slutt? oh uuh. thats not

    good. i wonder what happend

    AND IM PRETTY DARN SURE

    THAT U SHOULD LISTEN TO

    DEMI, JOE. (: hehehe ps-

    i love it when nick is like this

    a miley doesnt even give himm

    the time of the day. xD

  • I'm intrigued to why Miley is the one name calling. I wanna know what Selena did to Miley, seeing as they're supposedly friends. Poor Joe, though.

  • Haha, i loved niley's relationship in this. :P

    And I cant believe selena. :l

    Cant wait for more though.

    This looks awesome. :)

  • I loved it. i really honestly do, i just don't get the story line much.

  • This is sooo freakin amazing!! :D i like the title too :)

  • AAAAHHH! That was awesome :))

    Hahaha :)

    I miss your stories :D

    Good thing you post a new one already.

    But please, can you post more of this and OJ:T.

    please.

    Hahaha xDD

  • So Selena's cheating. Shame shame shame (anybody used to play that game?). Not really a Niley fan but i like their relationship in this.

  • :O

    LOVE THiS!!! and i think Psychic DDl is good [:

  • i like niley in this one! : D

    whatr did sel do to be called a slut by miley though? i'm curious lol

    i like how demi's a psychic

    flippin awesome hahaha

    hope the next part comes out!!

    only 15 more to go!

  • i like this.Alot.

  • please continue it was amazing!

  • PleAsee pleasee make the works bigger and a different color their the same as the pictures! I can't even read and I live ur sories but I can't even comprehend them but it was AMAzING!

  • Awesome!!! :)

    Love it!

  • OMG I LOVE THE NILEY IN THIS LOL! <3

    i cant wait for the next one:|

  • dear DANA! why is the title temporary?! i actually like it. hmmm.. if you change it, i'll find you in your sleep, like the threat you always send towards me. that's right!! the tables are turned now XD

    write the way you feel!! i don't care if it's in jibberish, i'll probably love it, because it's you :)

    PS i love it :)

    it's really cute. i neeeeeeed more!!

  • wait, i dont get the end. :O

  • this is great :)

    can't wait for the next one

  • Psychic DDL is right ;)

    Hmm... I wonder who the girl could be that he falls head over heels for...?

    Hehe

    Post soon!

  • addicted already with just the first chapter :)

  • i loved it can't wait for more!!! Can't really think of a title for right now, but if I do get an idea i'll comment again.

  • ohhhh shiiit what did little miss lena do

  • I really like this sorta feel. its like, new. And unique. Please keep going. Your insight's are real good! :D

  • this is really good

    i like the plot

    how do u come up with these things?

  • What the hell did Selena do? Ugh, there she goes breaking yet another heart. Lol. The movie was amazing. I think a could title would be: Through Closed Doors:: Cuz Demi is physic but no one really knows its hers so shes sorta hiding but she falls in love with Joe. Idk lol. Niley was soo cute! Can't wait till they get together!! Post soon! Ur talented! Looved it!

  • keep going...(: and keep it. it's psychic demetria devonne lovato. and the storyline's good, but a BIT obvious(:

  • i loved it! <3

    im addicted already!

  • zomg. this is amazing. yet again u amaze me! :D I hawrt the title :)

  • wow really good! but who is nick's girlfriend? L-O-V-E The story and plot it is so orginal.

  • ouch i think selena is cheatingg. that butt

  • SO good XD

    And I love your writing in this ( and in others )

  • Believe in fortune tellers!!!

  • loved it..i love the story line :D

  • OOO; i like this moviee (:

    i think the title is pretty good. o;

  • how about "just one touch"

    eh i know its terrible

    love it already!!!

  • this is really interesting and different.

    i like it! :)

  • this is different i like it!

  • it's awesome for some reason the line "one spark starts a fire" kept coming into my head after Demi touched joe's hand. lol idk why. it's really good. keep it up. if u ever need ne help, message me :)

  • Oh My gosh! No idea for the title... Buuut I like your neeew writing style! :] First Eppie was great! :DD <3 5/5

  • I like the titled. GREAT : O

  • amazinggg its so weird im used to it being the other way around nd stuff haha ill get over it it looks really really good

  • this is such an amazing idea(:

    how about [what a turnaround?]

  • YOU GO MILEY.

    HAZAH.

    haha.

    ... sorry..

    i had a moment..

    :D

    and how about... 'the touch of future'

    xD?

    since ya know, she touches people (NOT LIKE THAT :) and she can tell their futures just like that ;D?

  • Loveeeee it. <3

  • Damn! Miley's mood did a 3 fucking 60! xD

    Its a little surprising usually Joe is the one who uses is sexual charm to "woo" someone. :) Its a nice change to see a Dedicated Joesph. Or is he? :D So Demi has powers huh?Cool! I WANT POWERS! Why god? Why?! x) SORRY sugar is getting to me! AW! Selena's seems SO nice. But, from Miley's response she's an evil SLUT! From the words of Miley of course. Not my own. COMMENT people or you'll be abducted at Night! By ALIENS! Long MEANINGFUL COMMENTS! xD x3

  • Demi's good. Haha. I wonder if she's gonna see Joe coming into her future.

  • this is amazing already, can't wait for more:) i think the title you have is fine =)

  • that waz awesome.........

  • awsome i wish u had 100 comments already u only have 19 inculding mine!haha can't wait!

  • I love whatever writing you like to do. You are amazing. I guess the betrayal that Demi mentioned is Selena. That little crackhead.

  • that was amazing!

    next epi. :D

  • This is amazing :)

  • woho interesting :)

  • I think Selena is cheating on Joe

    I bet Demi's the girl Joe's gonna fall in love with

  • nahhh really lol jk

  • Did I said something too obvious? lol

  • well yes duh its a jemi movie =)

  • I was just giving my opinion

  • lol and i was jk i didnt mean it as an insult so dont be mad or anything

  • ok

    honestly you seemed a little bit rude in your last reply but it's fine

  • loved it loved it loved it

    it was WOW cant wait for the next one

  • That was really good :)

    LOVED IT!

  • oh nick, hes insane

  • (gasp) Is that crackhead cheating on my Joseph?

  • that was amazing ;D

    i love the storyline completely brilliant (;

  • awesome!!

  • AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

    Okay. I had to get that out.

    THat was my excitement when I saw this on my subscription list!

    LOve this story!

    I love when you come out with new stories!

  • Oh my god! That was awesome! I can't wait for the next one! :)

  • Loved it ! Amazing idea ! :P Cant wait for the next one

  • awesome!

  • i loe this please kepp goin on wih this story

  • I love Nick on this! and this is very good story!!!

  • OMG this was brilliant

    amazing loved it

    and let me guess for miley to be calling selena a slut is because she must be cheating on joe

    cant wait for the next one :)

  • i love itttttttttttt!!

  • I like this writing style (:

    And your idea for this story is amazinggg (:

    I love it! xD

    I can't wait for the next one ;)

    And as for a title suggestion hmmmm,

    Maybe.. Your my future?

    Not so perfect Present? hahaha those were so lame! Umm, I can't think of a good one sorry hun :P But, I hope you think of one! (: haha

  • amazinnnn!

  • Loved it! And Pcychic DDL is an awesome title -I think that-. Can't wait for the next one!

    Peace.Love&&Jemi.

    - Addie

  • i like this aloooooot :) as long as its jemi and niley im loving it XD

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