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  • Awesome.....put it on practice........

  • HOLY SHIT DUDE--- MY MIND BLEW. THIS IS THE BEST THING IVE HEARD IN FOREVER. I ADORE THE HONESTY OF THIS DISSECTION... SIR--I SALUTE YOU.

  • misogynistic - having or showing a hatred and distrust of women.

    hypocrisy - a pretense of having a virtuous character, moral or religious beliefs or principles, etc., that one does not really possess.

  • where could i find the lyrics to this?!

  • despite the unrehearsed performance, this is flawless. this piece is flawless. your stuff always speaks to something way deep in my gut, it gives me chills. more people need to listen to how you see life.

  • one of my favorite poets and poems ever...wow

  • #BoomRoasted

  • who's that guy who keeps saying come on, and to the pussy reference, seriously?!

  • @bicuriousmidget Right? Killin me.

  • somebody missed the like button

  • "The bullet's eager and the chamber just waiting for the word, but as i'm about to pull the trigger, i see that my ego's a her .. i wasn't ready for it .. killin women ain't my thing .."

  • chills every time.

  • best piece of writing i've ever heard. the way he comes full circle about everything is just go poetic and beautiful.

  • amazing!!

  • make a video of this one like "breakup"

  • One of the best poems I've heard!

  • rafael casal- if words could kill this guy would be a ninja sniper

  • Lyrics to Ego: on.fb.m /nJ5Zli

  • Amazing!

  • The one thing I dislike about this is the fact he cut's it off before you get to hear the applause. I love hearing poets get props !!!

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  • @MrBenHype There's a video taken form a different perspective during that reading. I won't post a link, cuz I don't subscribe to that channel, but if you search his name and the title, you'll find it.

  • WOW you told a great story I saw everything and yet you kept your style ,kept it entertaining, and it all was very cohesive and full of style..AWESOME!!!

  • What's the first line he says?

  • im in looooovvveeeeee. his words. crazy. insane. sigh.

  • Cant seem weak in front of a women, their sex is our initiaiton into men, so it only makes sense that my ego stems from a women's expectation. BEST LINE EVER! So true...

  • Off da chain

  • Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow

  • ahhhhhhh wow

  • Oh my god.. i felt like i found something so special. I'm not sure if it's the same feeling when you find gold, a diamond or a million bucks cause I never seen one. This just felt like a treasure. I'm so glad I clicked on this. T.T

  • man this dude has inspired me to be a better poet if you actually listen to what he's sayin it'll change how you look at life

  • @LRMUSIC95 It sounds like deadency, but I this it's "dead and see..." Poetic liberties lend us the ability to recreate and metamorphasize linguistics to more accurately describe what we feel. Some days you just wanna break syntax and context and play the game of semantics or advanced wordplay...like sculpting or painting, it is intuitive. Saul Williams is another great being whose cadence and manipulation of words is tremendous.

  • I think this is his best yet

  • You absolutely, 100% amaze me. I love all of your works.

  • He went in at 2:52-2:58. Pure beast.

  • This one inspired me to write my next poem.

  • wow your work is just that good!!! I stopped writing but from this piece right here makes me want to pick up my pen and start molding my thoughts into word. Words that would, hopefully, inspire others the start writing too. So I thanks you! ^_^

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  • This should be in the textbooks- this is real

  • @hockeyfan2218 I agree. I'm spreading his words.

  • I guess it's true. Envy is my enemy. I've seen a lot of your work and don't know anything about you but what I can perceive through your words but if ever I have heard a person open up their soul through words alone it was just now. There are an excess of cliche terms that come to mind to describe what I just heard. Masterful comes to mind. I can't say enough but am capable of saying too much so I'll stop here.

  • One of my fav parts of this was between 2:10 - 3:00.... He went deep with that one and 3:25-4:00.. I love the whole thing tho but those parts stand out the most to me

  • This dude is a poetic genius!

  • sometimes i would be the first person to dislike a video just to piss off all the dick riders to see what they would say to make me laugh, but i just cant dislike this... i cant.

  • my favorite poem i've ever heard. 0 dislikes perfect.

  • MARRY ME!!! I want your lyrical babies!

  • BRILLANT!

    

  • Unfortunately the first time I heard a piece by you I didn't love it. Apparently it took me to hear more then one piece by you to understand the true and amazing artist you really are. This is one of my favorites by you and will never forget this. Thank you Thank you Thank you for everything you do..You are more than an inspiration you are a true role model and I look up to a writer like you. Thank you

  • Speaks for alot of people. Your a true artist

  • Everytime I hear one of his poem, all I can think is damn , how does he think of this ?

  • look at this, no dislikes, do you know why? because the truth is something that no one can deny. one love for this man right here.

  • ohmygod based god!! Far too much #SelfAnalyticalSwag!! lol

  • my friend just put me up on this and all i have to say is: amazing. words spoken with the fierceness on a double-sided sword. just amazing.

  • hella rad

  • @rafaelcasal i love this poem and i wanna read a clean version of this to my class for an assignment so can you please put up the lyrics to this and i need it by tuesday the 3/15/11. thanks

  • Rafael Casal is pure inspiration!

  • We watched a video of Rafael Casal in my poetry class, & I was GLAD that I was like the only one who already knew who he was.! (: Besides my poetry teacher.

  • is their any way i can get an autograph from you i know its true more like fact when i say that your gonna make it and just an autograph on a napkin  will be enough . well hopefully you read this. keep doing what you do ypu inspire me.

  • Damn! It's the truth about people! Sometimes you just gotta swallow that pill called pride, deep inside we all want this feelin of bein right and perfect... But when looked at by others... The hunt begins... Much love to Rafael casals! Real talk.

  • simply beautiful and fantastic. i have to agree with the others, one of your best. keep 'em coming :) i'm a fan for life

  • Daaaaaamn. I don't even have words. I feel like I need to listen to this a dozen times to take it all in. Awesome, man. Truly.

  • A-maz-ing.. this is DEFINITELY a favorite..

    Please keep writing.. all of your stuff (including your songs) have me going "Wow.."

    Great job man!

  • i am officially obsessed with your writing.

    <3

  • my fave youtube def poet used to be gwatsky. you just killed him. thats was easily the sickest thing i have ever heard, hands down. i dont even know what to do with that, other than watch it about 50 more times of course. and i can already tell that even when i do, ill still be picking up new levels of meaning to your words to wonder at. you make me want to start writing again, and trust me if you knew my story youd know that was a big deal, at least to me. thank you for this, sincerely.

  • My very own hypocrisy...

  • wtf is this i cant believe this is the first time im hearing of this guy DAYYYYYYYYMMMMMMMMMM

    he is amazing with the imagery and the amazingness 1million thumbs up from me

  • Alright, I've finally decided. I'm going to work my ass off in my writing and create some crazy ass poems that stand a chance against yours. You are a Lyrical Mastermind and one day I'll be worthy enough of standing on the stage reciting my poem while you listen and think, "DAmn! How she came up with that sh..." Thanks for the much needed inspiration and fuel for my drive. Keep doing what your doing.

  • that was amazing!

  • ur insane!!

  • im such a fan....true talent

  • amazing!

  • Fire Brand.

    100% Unadulterated Truth.

  • This man is part of my inspiration to write

  • Incredible. I could see each person so vividly as he described them.

    Keep it up Rafael! You're helping a lot of people.

  • @poetrytolive ya i know it was like watchin a movie but with words

  • While all of your works hit me, I don't think any hit as hard as this one. Heavy.

  • that Snap-plause and moaning when you make a point is VERY annoying, it takes away from one of your best poems in my oppinion

  • @megamurg yeah it can be, but it's showing props, and on a piece like this it's earned.

  • @Badwolification

    I just wish they would wait till the end like some crowds do, but this piece is still amazing

  • I think my favorite thing about this Kid...is that he hasn't gotten caught up in his own hype. It's a hard thing to put yourself under the microscope and probe your faults the way he has here, and then share it with the world.....that's ballsy.

    It's hard NOT to respect a talent, but IMPOSSIBLE NOT to stand in awe of a gift...it's rare.

  • I think my favorite thing about this Kid...is that he hasn't gotten caught up in his own hype. It's a hard thing to put yourself under the microscope and probe your faults the way he has here, and then share it with the world.....that's ballsy.

    It's hard NOT to respect a talent, but IMPOSSIBLE NOT to stand in awe of a gift...it's rare.

  • this is literally, the best piece of art i've ever heard.

  • genius...

  • I'm always left speechless after I watch this. This and Monster.

    Are you cool with students performing your pieces at their schools?

  • wow so unexpected..so good.

  • Wow the man is a prince of poetry keep doing what you do

  • I will never get sick of your voice!

  • this is my favorite. your amazing...i write too but just for the fun of it sometimes they;re really good others are w,e bu udamn u just kill it everytime. i can;t stop listening to your stuff <3

  • your tufff! end of story

  • Breh, this is so fuck raw i just caught E. Coli. i just got back into writing after 2 years being stuck in a relationship and you've been a major inspiration. your style is legit, and your words astound me. this is one of the nuttiest things i've heard in a while. keep it up! and i dont know if it'll help, but as long as you remember the time that you got out your first truly legit rhyme and realized that you love it, i think youll be alright.

  • ur insane!

  • This guy has an amazing ability to manipulate word syntax and express himself. Dang im jealous, but in a good way. Big ups bro, I hate that the world dont give true poets the front stage.

  • Why can't poems like such be the ones we study in school?

    dope shit man

  • Brotha, your words have shattered the deepest parts of my middle brain and nuked my entire celebral cortex. May your artist soul forever explore the unknown.

  • this shits crazyyy

  • nothing short of amazing.. I'm definitely a rafael fan

  • Dat humble shit won' keep you safe when others ego are hunting you outside

  • Been following you for a couple of years now (I'm late to the game) but this one is truly my favorite, and that's saying something because before this I couldn't have picked a favorite if I wanted to. Thank you.

  • oh my gosh!you are BRILLIANT!been listening to you since i heard Barbue & Ken 101!!You are TRULYY the best and soooo DOPE!-xoxo

  • bro your words speak to me, im only 17 years old but listening to all of your stuff inspired me to starting writing myself. thanks man. respect

  • Bomb. Thats the perfect word to explain this poem. The whole battle with ones inner self is a talk for the ages as many people can barely get their point of view across on particular subjects and topics. Poetry is at its finest ")

  • You put into words what most people can't even scratch with their thoughts. I'm just trying to describe the complexity of this poem that I can't even put in words. It's like a poetic energy drink that sends a shiver through your nerves. With each and every stanza; you throw up a new curve. This modern day shakespeare, waits here, undiscovered.

  • man this gave me shivers! rly well written

  • that was perfect. excellently crafted and brilliantly executed. this man is a genius

  • Dude you blew up my mind,..how long have you been written=?

    How did you become this good?what was the training?to manifest your emotions into a piece of paper?Your are really really good dawg!

  • i just watched this shit like 7 times! fucking amazing!

  • does anyone know if he's gonna make an appearence on bnv 2010??? hes a fuckin b3ast!!

  • does anyone know if rafie is gonn make an appearance on 2010 BNV??

  • you are very talented. i never comment on youtube videos but you deserve that, and so much more! *copy pastes video to facebook!*

  • you my man are talented. you have a way with words. you are a beautiful composer. the work of yours that I've seen has been nothing short of amazing. Keep it up.

  • Love the awareness of the ego, but rejection of parts of the self doesn't lead to transformation. It is only with acceptance of all the darker parts of oneself does one move forward into the light.

    namaste <3

  • I'm striving to become an artist as well, been writin since I was young. I frequently watch and listen to all forms of lyrical poetry I can, for several years doing what I gota do to get better and become a man. And Rafael I must say this is the best poem I have ever heard, you inspire me to write as good as you do, where after presenting people can only gasp and grin. So I Thank you for your inspiration and upliftin love for music.

  • i've been addicted to your poetry since that HBO poem abortion.i spread the word daily

  • beasty. good to see you thinking about these issues of ego, image, and mysogyny. This poem is proof theres a lot more to you as a man than those 3- preserve that.

  • I would love it if you would come to atlanta!! I would definitely be there. I listen to... no experience your performances whenever I get an impulse to be cultured (or whenever I write). Words can't express your innate ability to express words. Simply amazing :)

  • in highschool my english teacher showed us a video of you performing poetry for def jam, i have yet to stop keeping up with you.

    you're simply amazing, you're real and that's rare nowadays.

    so thank you for reminding me that people do reach deep within themselves; cause i sometimes forget that people actually know how.

    you're gonna make it big. i'm sure of it... keep up the great work.

  • Ive got both your albums and seen all your Def Poetry performances - I love all your stuff - this is by far my favorite one! Genius bro. Thank you for inspiring me and making me think.

  • I soooo love this man lik,,Som ppl love wat he looks lik n wat he sounds lik i fell in love with his words,his mind n if only we meet his soul

  • This is by far the most brilliant piece I've heard you do. A.D.D. is beautiful, but this is a story... Man, I wanna write like this!

    I'm blogging this one, people have gotta see this.

  • Man oh man Rafael, I love how you really get into your pieces, this one is written really well man, great job. You put your heart and soul into this and as the listener, we can feel that. I really like that you also put so many emotions into your work and that your pitch changes with your delivery. That is the big difference between people who overly reversal their work.

    Keep up the superb work man! I'll be listening!!!

  • rafael this is by far my favorite poem to date. i always wondered how deep the ocean could get, and now i know. thank you so much for inspiring my life with this piece.

  • when i wana write a verse or freestyle on a beat i watch your vids..PURE INSPIRATION

  • Its unreal that this video only has 4,000 views. its should easily have 4 million. Rafael is brilliant; and thats no word to just throw around.

  • @fresh2def831 Thank you Fresh2def! Help spread the word!

  • @rafaelcasal man i watched all ur videos...this is by far the best one...and i have been introducing people to ur music and poetry...you r gonna spread like wild fire keep up ur brilliant work

  • @rafaelcasal YOU WENT IN!!!

  • @fresh2def831 straight up. this guy so amazing.

  • Man you cold no dick sucken intended but from one artist to another you gotr skills man

  • This was the most Beautifulest poem I've heard!!!.......Incredible <3

  • intense imagery

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  • So much brilliance in only five and a half minutes.

  • - uqh ; u make it look so easy ! like ; ya words flow like yu didnt even need to read it off paper ! i wish i could do ma poetry like tht .

    :)

    keep it up ; ur ma idol 4real .

  • this may very well be my favorite piece by you including your music. i dont inted to feed your ego but i wish i could write like you

  • @siroreo You totally can. It's just about discovering your process, and testing things out on audiences. Its a great way to learn how people respond to you. Thanks for the Love!

  • @rafaelcasal yeah i can see what you mean i do some writing just haven't been able to perform anything on stage ass of yet. do you plan on comming to sd anytime soon i would love to see you live

  • dats real as it gets...

  • man this is why i fucking love you some serious thank you so much hunny for just writing.

  • WOW! I wasn't mentally prepared for all the genius displayed here...Damn. I gotta make it to your next performance. I need to know when and where it will be!

  • You rock man, come to Ottawa and check out what we have going on here.

  • hella deep!!

  • this is so soulful.

  • your the fuckin best!

  • omg! ego was a woman. great stuff. love his poems they always make me think

  • "My very own hypocrisy"

    Brilliant.

  • @LadyMasKerade Yea That Was the bestttt Sentenceee !!

  • always opening a new thought a new way of pondering our own existance amazing stuff

  • this is the truth right here

  • 0 haters man absolutely zero nice!

  • this is art.

  • I'm so excited to hear a new poem from you! I love your music, but I've missed you slamming... This poem reminded me of your Misogyny song (which was my favorite) ... Thanks :)

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  • I really really REALLY REALLY REALLY, wish you would tell people they need to SHUT THE FUCK UP while you're reading. reaction and applause should come after a performance. LOL. It irked the shit out of me but other than that, I love that poetry. You're sick. That's a battle my mind has a lot.

  • What a great poem! YESSS

  • god damn

  • doesn't get much better than this.

  • Damn.. the hypocrisy line was so OHHH

  • amazing

  • Mos Def raw talent!

  • your imagination is mind-blowing, your words make me speechless. amazing job, once again!

  • amazing...

  • powerful

  • fucking brilliant!

  • dam dude.... legit as fuck.

  • If you're supposed to paint a picture with words, Rafael is basically Picasso.

  • @FirstStreetTV Damn...thank you