Hi Dan, it would help you to watch existing films to see how they shoot their space scenes.
The scene looks quite flat. Are the elements on individual layers? would be gd to create a parallax effect
Shaking of the camera does not make sense, unless you are trying to imply that you are seeing this scene from a spaceship, or that some force is causing the camera to move. When nothing appears after the camera shake, it does not meet that expectation, leaving the audience hanging and bewildered.
I like what I see in your work,the camera shake made me think something was about to happen but didn't,that's okay it's still a good job,keep them coming DAN
Nice! It would have been awesome to have the sun peek out some more, or even all the way out. You do have quite a bit of shaking, I'm not sure if you intended on it but it gives the effect of a "rumbling" sunrise! :P
The camera shake is a little much. Maybe tone it down, make it a little more subtle. And the sudden stop and fade is weird. Have it fade the camera shake and the clip. And maybe either turn down the opacity of the background or make it much smaller and have the stars and galaxy smaller. other than that, looking good
Pretty good, keep working on it! I would not let the camera shake if i would be you, in my oppinion the sun should represants a nice softly light, so no shaking. but effects are great, but one more detail thing, let the earth rotate, because than it looks more real. but great work!
The animation is okay, but what is with all the shaking? In space that shaking would never occur, it makes no sense. The part of the Earth near the bottom left doesn't get bright, you should fix your lighting. Other than that, it's okay.
Great job on this! The lighting is nice and the shaking was a nice touch. Keep on going with this. Once you get into it, your future works will be even more amazing! Good luck!
Hey man. Just received your message. I have been doing animation for a while. I guess you are a beginner. But for being a beginner this animation looks good. I like how you are using the flares. Anyway, what program did you use for the twitching. AE maybe?
I like the whole lense flare thing goin on for the sun effect.. I wouldn't have necessarily gone for the quake camera movement tho.. but it's pretty cool none the less :D
I like the background, it's beautiful and shows all the beautiful tings about space :3 The light and shading is good. Perhaps make it longer so you can see the sun. Get rid of the shaking at the end.
I think that the shake is cool. Maybe you could turn it into something. I don't know though, I would make it into something creepy, cause i'm creepy like that xD Good job.
That was a pretty good test for animation, and I see you have some great potential. Just keep working with it and see what you can do. I'm not a big fan of short clips like this, but it was a good test of skill...
I'm sorry but what was with the shake and there wasn't really a sunrise just a light. please don't get mad at me you gave me the option of giving my opinion
nice 1 ^_*
TheStupidbaby1 2 months ago
well done
aymanmoawed581970 2 months ago
Thats great man
alijoon0123 2 months ago
cool
ThunderBoy0750 2 months ago
das Wort Rock habe ich aber nicht geschrieben!
Harlekin1953 3 months ago
Eine animation war das aber nicht!..gruß..Harlekin!
Harlekin1953 3 months ago
sweet dude
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Can you tell me how to do the camera shake?
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Oo, I am making this motive in my animation! :)
jemkokosy 4 months ago
WHAT STOOPIDVID IS THAT
ajulessound 4 months ago
@ajulessound One that can obliviously spell better then you.
takemyheartdntbrkit 3 months ago
Cool!!
GTASEXTEAM 4 months ago
Dear Dan ,
I think creating a space scene in c4d will do the trick.
If u are interested maybe we can team up.
Regards ,
Klaas
Dragonstorm1980 4 months ago
Hi Dan, it would help you to watch existing films to see how they shoot their space scenes.
The scene looks quite flat. Are the elements on individual layers? would be gd to create a parallax effect
Shaking of the camera does not make sense, unless you are trying to imply that you are seeing this scene from a spaceship, or that some force is causing the camera to move. When nothing appears after the camera shake, it does not meet that expectation, leaving the audience hanging and bewildered.
psychedelicmind 4 months ago
Hey, do you think you could make a YLTGNetwork intro? I know it's a lot to ask but I want to see if it's possible.
YLTGNetwork 4 months ago
I like the effects, but I wouldn't have put a camera shake at all as it seems like a very slow and passive scene...
8meelin8 4 months ago
camera is shaking to much
mlndshrm08 4 months ago
muito bom!
americajogos 4 months ago
Cool that is way better from what I could've done :)
YLTGNetwork 4 months ago
cool
14warr 4 months ago
cool
noland29 4 months ago
Hi,
Adjust contrast/brightness to pop the sense of deep black space.
The camera shake left me wondering what had happened.
There should be some visual clue to why the camera or ship is shaking.
Try CC sphere and some earth texture maps. Andrew Kramer @ video copilot does some nice work, particularly with his earth zoom tutorial.
mycoolstoodley 4 months ago
I like what I see in your work,the camera shake made me think something was about to happen but didn't,that's okay it's still a good job,keep them coming DAN
scfi13 4 months ago
Pretty good man, just lay down on the camera shake, it's a little excessive
MonsterCupcakeInc 4 months ago
Buy the way, what's the program you are usign to do this NICE work?
Sparkleee7 4 months ago
Nice job! But as RK09700, I'm asking to myself why the camera is shaking!?!
Sparkleee7 4 months ago
The sunrays are spot on! but I think next time you should use reflection on the planet itself, good work dan!
Laionelart 4 months ago
Lol cool Bro! How'd you do this? :o
GearBloxStudios 4 months ago
that's a epic animation trying to animate to tought butteeh its hard to learn :P
e1r1i7k 4 months ago
Nice! It would have been awesome to have the sun peek out some more, or even all the way out. You do have quite a bit of shaking, I'm not sure if you intended on it but it gives the effect of a "rumbling" sunrise! :P
Zir0nix 5 months ago
Why does the camera shake? It needs a tad of work though.
RK090700 5 months ago
i can see my house of hear
firnov 5 months ago
this would be perfect with superman flying over it...Dope job dude
kimchistopmotions 5 months ago
Very cool! ^^
wolfartistanimater 5 months ago
Very awsome. Does that really happen when the sun rises? ^.^
LondonLeapardpool 5 months ago
nice
lilcutioner 5 months ago
very cool man!' after effects?
bendit88 5 months ago
Nice video. Am looking forward to seeing more.
housewiveslessons 5 months ago
which software you used to generate this ? ..... like it
iiersii 5 months ago
nice but quick...
iphonekidsgames007 5 months ago
i don't have crack optical flare
if I had it I can make more intro by after efeect
dotinhnghich123 5 months ago
If it's more than this it won't be this soft
forgame 5 months ago
great work dude! can u comment on my works?
taeefnajib 5 months ago
:D short but sweet.
zzebrapie 5 months ago
This is really nice.
UltraLlamaLord 5 months ago
The camera shake is a little much. Maybe tone it down, make it a little more subtle. And the sudden stop and fade is weird. Have it fade the camera shake and the clip. And maybe either turn down the opacity of the background or make it much smaller and have the stars and galaxy smaller. other than that, looking good
MrKevinGreer 5 months ago
looks nice
x010xLoLx010x 5 months ago
big short but nice; the shaking is cool^^
Weedlover555 5 months ago
cool ^^
TsukinoPrincess1993 5 months ago
how long did you take for this animation?^^ ( sorry my english is relly bad xD )
SpikeVanWillems 5 months ago
Awesomely epic.
SmokinBrickFilms 5 months ago
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Awesomely epic.
SmokinBrickFilms 5 months ago
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Awesomely epic.
SmokinBrickFilms 5 months ago
Awesomely epic.
SmokinBrickFilms 5 months ago
Awesomely epic.
SmokinBrickFilms 5 months ago
nice one :D
JandKGameplay 5 months ago
well as i dont use the software that you are using all i can comment on is the actual vid.
the stars are WAY out of preportion to the earth, the camera shake is to violent and too quick, and im not sure why there is sound....
vicrobinsontattoo 5 months ago
Really nice :D
MrNeca63 5 months ago
YOU SHOULD DO THE FULL SUN RISE
NO DOUBT THE ANIM IS GOOD
nikobellic8779 5 months ago
Cool! I think the graphics are amazing. How did you create this?
iXCALiberZ 5 months ago
kewl
bloodraidersXD 5 months ago
Pretty cool like the camera shake, but your not like a drawing animator lie i am !!!
gamerboyzps3 5 months ago
omg thats pretty cool.
jdp052208 5 months ago
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
CMCApictures 5 months ago
Nice ::3
TheSingingFelines 5 months ago
Pretty good, keep working on it! I would not let the camera shake if i would be you, in my oppinion the sun should represants a nice softly light, so no shaking. but effects are great, but one more detail thing, let the earth rotate, because than it looks more real. but great work!
SchlagdenKumpel 5 months ago
Wow!.................... Not much to say really!
TheSammy7586 5 months ago
Good start. Keep it up.
huppmam 5 months ago
Wow, that's really good! :D <3
funkeycat 5 months ago
not that good of an animation really.
could use a lot more work.
MounerKT 5 months ago
Cool! ^w^
agentmcmuffin2 5 months ago
The animation is okay, but what is with all the shaking? In space that shaking would never occur, it makes no sense. The part of the Earth near the bottom left doesn't get bright, you should fix your lighting. Other than that, it's okay.
AmpedNavy 5 months ago
Are you spamming random people or does your bot look for specific tags ?
Amoirealinge 5 months ago
Cool!!
JonesTheKidd 5 months ago
This is GREAT!!!
Scourge921 5 months ago
Looks great!
SonderEffektKommando 5 months ago
That is one awesome animation, to bad I don't have the mental capacity to take the same amount of time on my animations, as you did here. Great job.
TheShnizNite 5 months ago
You doing really great job and I also post this video to facebook too. thank you for upload!
theng722 5 months ago
Great job on this! The lighting is nice and the shaking was a nice touch. Keep on going with this. Once you get into it, your future works will be even more amazing! Good luck!
XMsXDarkxAngelX 5 months ago
that is so cool i actually jumped when it started shaking lol nice
PanAndTaco 5 months ago
Good job! If you want to improve it I suggest adding sound and motion blur when its shaking.
ModernCGI 5 months ago
that pretty cool
117sonicfan 5 months ago
Interesting...
magicdad10 5 months ago
gooood!)
but where is the sun and why is camera shaking?))
AzzySky 5 months ago
nice!!!!
HayabusaClan1996 5 months ago
good
MegaMirkat 5 months ago
cool
BreezeFlightSimX 5 months ago
Awesome!!! Thanks for sharing --> I love animation and space! Hope you make a similar one (or longer) soon.
NeuroscienceTV 5 months ago
cool
Sadet1991 5 months ago
Not to bad pretty good!
Enishu 5 months ago
Quite an awesome work :D
ProGamer1134 5 months ago
nice work! :)) Liked! :))
xGunship123x 5 months ago
This is cool! :)
Howaitodoggu 5 months ago
Hey man. Just received your message. I have been doing animation for a while. I guess you are a beginner. But for being a beginner this animation looks good. I like how you are using the flares. Anyway, what program did you use for the twitching. AE maybe?
misticdesigns 5 months ago
Good Job man! :)
MinecraftArt 5 months ago
That is really amazing! Great job.
heirdemoness 5 months ago
its pretty good but it should show more nof the sun (coming from an unexpiernenced animater lawl )
blueberry3569 5 months ago
cool dude.
MuseAutoBot 5 months ago
Thats cool
domayr 5 months ago
Cool u need to make it longer though :)
BOPSthatMINE 5 months ago
I like the whole lense flare thing goin on for the sun effect.. I wouldn't have necessarily gone for the quake camera movement tho.. but it's pretty cool none the less :D
babydestiny24 5 months ago
nice =) pice I would like to have as a background image
verusa2000 5 months ago
i think it's really CRAZY!!
but they're AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
pepijntje1998 5 months ago
Cool!
TheKcUTube 5 months ago
Thats great and dont stop making animation and thanks
Theprankster1236 5 months ago
It looks AWESOME!
Do a blue moon :3 It'll look pretty!
amzbebz 5 months ago
Looks very simple and stops in the middle. What program are you using?
Very nice background
Artovolpi 5 months ago
I like the background, it's beautiful and shows all the beautiful tings about space :3 The light and shading is good. Perhaps make it longer so you can see the sun. Get rid of the shaking at the end.
This video deserves thumbs up! :D
princeasle 8 months ago
didnt get it XD
Chielaa 8 months ago
BEAUTIFUL!
edudesigns 8 months ago
good, really
unjourou10autres 9 months ago
thats good for after effects
mugen214 9 months ago
chic
Jessmenz 9 months ago
it was like a nuke went off
SuperEpikCookie 9 months ago
Good work!
ProduccionesyaAR 10 months ago
It was good =] ... until it suddenly stopped shaking lol. That was just weird.
Pathogenetik 10 months ago
cool :)
GothicsChocolate 10 months ago
nice vid m8. cud be a bit longerthough :)
1997silentbutdeadly 10 months ago
:)
Tvditi 10 months ago
Good job. More sun please! :)
toddjordan 10 months ago
The effect was nicely done but the shaky thing just doesn't work. Everything except for that was awesome!
Eastexasdirector 10 months ago
i dont now what that sound was or if it came on the clip but its verry life like
andy28500 10 months ago
It would be better when the earth doesn't shake and something's moving on the earth... (Spaceship, UFO, Asteroid) But it's a good video.
JonyMovies 10 months ago
Cool, although I'm not sure about the "shaky" effect
goosounds 10 months ago
Super :)
IstocniEpicentaR 10 months ago
Wow good work!
samlerf 10 months ago
cool vid! it was a little short though. =)
TheCartoonistLife 10 months ago
Very nice. :3
SpiritShadowWolf15 10 months ago
Nice ! :D
freddiis00 10 months ago
nice
steveythreedee 10 months ago
could be longer... but other than that,... REALLY WELL MADE! 5/5
SuperSonic17110 10 months ago
eh show a little more of the sun and for next video have the sun crashing into earth now thats cool boom
SJMBproductions 10 months ago
that was cool!
BeaverEmpire 10 months ago
that was cool.but i think it was to much shaking
lilg742ster 10 months ago
Ooh... ahh...
9174cooldude 10 months ago
cool short movie, what kind of program do you use for this.
246seun 10 months ago
thank you. I will show this film to his disciples. on April 12, we watched a movie about space, Yuri Gagarin.
Vereck1 10 months ago
Nice and very pretty
1ChArMiNgAnGeL1 10 months ago
nicceee XD
Wildflipper 10 months ago
That was awesome!
abede21 10 months ago
nice picture whith whath do yu that?
fancatch1 10 months ago
Ok I didn't actually see the sun all I heard was rumbling but it was good! :)
justinbieberfan922 10 months ago
nice cool XD
Narutonumberonefan11 10 months ago
nice
reecieboii 10 months ago
OH MY GOD!O.O
DjAmuStar 10 months ago
good man you would see sun in my next video keep it up good work.
SuperAbhinavsingh 10 months ago
good man you would see sun in my next video
SuperAbhinavsingh 10 months ago
wow amagazing
stopmotionita 10 months ago
cool!
rubenrn1 10 months ago
Cool Animation :) !
xTweekXD 10 months ago
oh cool nice animation
Wolfuscus 10 months ago
well done!
natabndr 10 months ago
Nice.
Jcomix98 10 months ago
Good
mortriks 10 months ago
not bad, I just dont like the shake
irideproduction 10 months ago
Lol why you send me an email?
HackBrosApple 10 months ago
Pretty cool although I think the camera shake could be more subtle.
wonderllama37 10 months ago
Cool I like it.
markwho 10 months ago
cool effect, too bad it stops so fast
SebeusIniwum 10 months ago
nic3
Hoverbus9 10 months ago
whats after effects
imhomiejr 10 months ago
awesome
edoor122 10 months ago
that was cool! :)
TheCrazydaisy89 10 months ago
nice! maybe add some music?
4NatCat15 10 months ago
oo its the sunrise in space it was verry cool but i think if you made a sunrise over the sea it would be verry pretty!:)
theselenacyrus 10 months ago
that was not a sunrise was it?
theselenacyrus 10 months ago
Very good.
pfgun0 10 months ago
can you check out some of my c4d animations?
spazzimcgee23 10 months ago
*Insert MW2 refenrence here*
No I'm kidding, but what was the shake about?
FurryWrecker911 10 months ago
pretty sick :D
ElixirPotion 10 months ago
Awesome!!
BoeingAirbusGuy 10 months ago
I think that the shake is cool. Maybe you could turn it into something. I don't know though, I would make it into something creepy, cause i'm creepy like that xD Good job.
Waddles62949 10 months ago
nice
101Lightning 10 months ago
That was a pretty good test for animation, and I see you have some great potential. Just keep working with it and see what you can do. I'm not a big fan of short clips like this, but it was a good test of skill...
BlakeyBoy313 10 months ago
Not bad, especially has a very useful sound effects
Nanaahenkang 10 months ago
that was shake and zoom..?
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BLADE2789 10 months ago
Pretty...though the shaking made it seem as though an explosion were about to take place or something. xD
mktillg 10 months ago
I'm sorry but what was with the shake and there wasn't really a sunrise just a light. please don't get mad at me you gave me the option of giving my opinion
icrazyhpk 10 months ago