the first 14 seconds were still a little long, the kid's just looking around. If you cut the second 'look to the right and down' from the videod, perfecto! but that's just my opinion, short attention span. Sorry! But i gotta say, it was so cute! I loved this ending 10 times better. "ooh as tingly as it was 30 years ago....only better." major awwww-ness here.
the first 14 seconds were still a little long, the kid's just looking around. If you cut the second 'look to the right and down' from the videod, perfecto! but that's just my opinion, short attention span. Sorry! But i gotta say, it was so cute! I loved this ending 10 times better. "ooh as tingly as it was 30 years ago....only better." major awwww-ness here.
LiveLaughLove8489 1 year ago
this one is better i think! ;)
bell3341 1 year ago
This one is probably my favorite of the commercial contest entries. Great work!
apatheticbliss 3 years ago 2
The new ending is amazing! This is soooo good!!!
jfamily4life1991 3 years ago 2
I love this one. It's so cute! Great job!!
SamSammie09 3 years ago
Really like the new ending. Gives it new meaning. Perfect!
krazykidz1lol 3 years ago 2
Super cute - Fantastic!!!!
mymindopinion08 3 years ago 3