The Heart Is Deceitful Above All Things Fanfiction Video

[skinnymini14]

what is the name of this song?

[Inhalati]

sooooooooo goooood !!!

[DylanSprousSonicAnim]

OMG! this iz so good! u should make a part 2!

[walkalovayal]

Oh I read that!

It was good.

[fullhousefreak93]

nice video. I loved your story heart is deceitful above all things. BTW is there a sequel because I thought I read one months ago but I can't find it now

[MetalManiacD]

itss called sarah.

[Runny154]

Your story is good

[Runny154]

The heart is deceiful is just a movie right?

[mgirls]

It was also a book.

[iluvsprousebros4ever]

oh its like TSL of zack and cody but only comedy it makes me cry!!i understand!!i luv it!!=,(

[mgirls]

Also, if soaked in gasoline and lit ablaze, a small teenager like the twins would have suffolcated from the smoke, or atleastwould be perminantly scarred. He wouldnt be able to move, and his skin would fall off, leading to death by infection.

All in all, your story is flawed. Please try to be mature about this critique, it's for your own good as a writer.

[mgirls]

Also, how the hell would putting ointment on zack help cody? Twin telepathy doesntr work like that at all. Take a bio class, the nerves on cody's skin would have been sending the pain to his brain, zack's skin nerves would have not been sending the same message because nothing was hurting him

[mgirls]

. Also, if Carrie had been his birth mother, he never would have been put with sarah in the first place. She was eighteen years old (in the film she was 21) and she was unstable. They check people out before they send children to live with them. The story makes no sence at all.

[mgirls]

Also, jeremiah truely loved and wanted to be with sarah. Sarah also never tried to get him back, save for the time when she took him off the streets wail he was preaching, so both are horrable ooc. Please, get the facts streight before you write a fanfiction, It's annoying when people bend the world of the origional story so badly.

[mgirls]

Also, if the 15-year-old twins were 7 at the time of his birth, jeremiah only would have been 8. In the book, it clearly states toward the middle of the book that he would have been in grade 4. That would lead to him being about ten or nine at that point. By the end of the book, he is 15 years old. That means that to stay true to the fandom, he would have to be atleast the twin's age.

[mgirls]

(my critique starts here, and goes up the page)

You have a few facts wrong. First of all, Jeremiah wanted to be a girl. He wanted to dress as a girl. He also was never forced to drink or do drugs (although in the film and in the book the mother gives him beer, he is never forced to drink it, he does so by choice.)

[IchliebeYS]

Well, not bad. I can see that you put many work on this video. =)

[XprojectXskateX]

is this movie true?

[linklovezelda]

if you mean if its a real video then yeah. The heart is deceitful above all things is a real movie! a real good movie.

[rioplayer]

please would someone upload the film i cant get it anywhere and i really want to see it

[50footqueeny]

I adore that film "the heart is deceitful

above all things" and it makes no sens to me

that someone comes and make a video shit on it

with pictures of it AND pictures of actors in

the real life. really no sens but a search

of a little fame.. maybe I just don't get it,

don't know. fan art to me have to make at

least a little concept, a little SENS!!!!

[CrystalEyes22]

It's the trailer to a fanFICTION I wrote. And, the next time you want to criticize one of my videos, learn how to spell SENSE!

[gabriella1994swe]

whats the song called?

x

[CrystalEyes22]

It's Rooftops by Melissa McClelland.

[gabriella1994swe]

okey, thanks. :)

x

[iluvsprousebros4ever]

what is your profile???i will add u plz i want 2 see the whole story!!plz reply!

[gabriellaxo]

It seems real, but it's not

[mgirls]

not bad

[melashine]

this day in school i sing on this song and thinked about cole and dylan and i almost started to cry

[bigblakdawg]

Remember it's a "Fanfition" lmao

[Xxx0summer0xxX]

ok this video is mixed with "The heart is deceitful above all things" and suit life of zack and cody?

I dont get it?

[bartsimpsonrocksalot]

man their real names are dylan and sprouse not zack and cody

[CrystalEyes22]

I know that their real names are Dylan and Cole Sprouse! This is a FANFICTION video off of their TV show the Suite Life of ZACK and CODY!

[bigblakdawg]

Don't be rude, I knew that it was false I never posted it though, don't act like I'm a ficken idot!

>:(

[bigblakdawg]

This is false because their last names arn't Martin it's Sprouse

[bigblakdawg]

This is false right???

[CrystalEyes22]

Yeah, it's false. It's called a FAN-FICTION video. I think I know the difference between Sprouse and Martin.

[CrystalEyes22]

Yes, it's false. it's the trailer for a fanfiction i made.

[xBeccaxxxx]

Where Can I Buy The Film From In The UK (preferably England :D)

[flyygurl009]

his mom seemed preety fucked in the head

[ourbetteryears]

Just a little bit of advice: you should credit the people involved in the "The Heart Is Deceitful Above All Things" book/movie, as well as the people involved in The Suite Life of Zack and Cody. And JT Leroy, too, since you used his/her/whatever's last name. It's good that you gave yourself credit, but I doubt you're gonna sue yourself. The others? I don't know, man...

[yinyangxxwitch]

ummm... i hate to say it but im really confused. >.>. I sort of got it. I really like the song! ^_^

[CrystalEyes22]

That's all right, I did kind of make it confusing. If you read the story, hopefully you'll understand.

[pukelalala]

may i know whats the song int his video is really nice LOL~

[CrystalEyes22]

The song is Rooftop by Melissa McClelland.

[xoashleyxo10101]

this is coolio!

[XxCrazyPinoyxX]

this story is all wrong this movie is not a sequel to the suitelife of zack and cody omg but nice story its all made up omg-_-

[CrystalEyes22]

It's not a sequel! It's just the trailer to a fanfiction I made!

[carrott100]

amazin lovd it. love both the suite life and the heart and its really good how you interlinked them. well done.

[kittykaygogo]

I love it. is there a link for it?

[CrystalEyes22]

Yeah, the link is now in the video info.

[Nikkioys]

Hehe , Thats good.. You quoted the Film Well x]]

[MovieMaster41]

i thought the last name was McGwire not LeRoy.

[MovieMaster41]

i thought the last name was McGwire not LeRoy.

[CrystalEyes22]

Well, in my fanfic I put it as McGwire before I found out his last name was actually LeRoy. So her last name was LeRoy, then changed to McGwire when she married Butch. (At least that's how it goes in my story.)

[MovieMaster41]

I read your story. It rules.