You are really good but I've heard and have told this story before and it was much better. It feels like you aren't really into the story and it ends abruptly. Anyways I really am looking foward to more stories by you though.
Thanks Matt. It was an interesting take on a story in a parking lot of a bar- we actually made several versions. The people at the bar thought we we crazy. Perhaps that hurry translates to the story itself. More stories are coming!
Yes, it would be good if things always evened out. This quick story was told in front of a sports bar, so the team symbols change there all the time.
StorytellerDotNet 2 years ago
I hate bad luck, I wish real life was like your story, all even and stuff. btw whats that steelers helmet on the back?
mrkaliman2000 2 years ago
its all good luck too me
ChrisBennett18 3 years ago
I heard this story a long time ago, but forgot half of it, and always wished I had remembered it. Now I've got it. Thanks!
unexpectedkangaroo 4 years ago
You are really good but I've heard and have told this story before and it was much better. It feels like you aren't really into the story and it ends abruptly. Anyways I really am looking foward to more stories by you though.
-matt
Storyteller14 4 years ago
Thanks Matt. It was an interesting take on a story in a parking lot of a bar- we actually made several versions. The people at the bar thought we we crazy. Perhaps that hurry translates to the story itself. More stories are coming!
StorytellerDotNet 4 years ago
I really can't wait for more stories.
I do like your stories a lot. I hope I didn't come across negative.
Storyteller14 4 years ago
nah, you are okay....good comments are great..thanks for yours...
StorytellerDotNet 4 years ago