meh she's too soft... though... now that I think about it. I've pulled the "oh, yeah... but my cat. He needs to be fed." card. Didn't really know it was an excuse... lol
I liked this. Everything doesn't need to be dark and intense. I thought this captured an interesting, playful mood while allowing you to develop a quick interest in both characters.
The story seemed a little dull and boring. Also, how did the girl get to where she is at 4:35?
Answer: The old woman hid behind the yellow truck as you can see at 4:28 and the girl ran around. Just take another shot... normal people dont do that...dont be lazy and try to stream it all into one. It looks sloppy.
The shot with the feet wasnt well done. When he rounded the bus bench, he walked very awkwardly basically telling the viewer that he knows the exsitance of the camera filming him.
I agree with ezits666, this is just a pointless, pathetic movie that honestly makes me wonder why it's on this channel. It sucks big time. A total waste.
this is horrible compared to the other VFS productions. Horrible plot and horrible execution. You can hear wind against the mic on the camera in a shot.... Doesnt deserve to be here
I liked it, but: he looks in the wrong direction when saying that her bus has arrived, in the next shot the bus appears to have been a cargo van, and where the heck did she suddenly appear from at the end?
Still, I liked it. Great actress- very natural and believable.
acting was good.. especially the male... and kinda hot.. good eye candy... made me stick around til the end anyway!... I'd go for breakfast the morning after and let him wear his robe too - ANY TIME!
interestingly not so much about love or sex or relationship, but going from cat to breakfast, about safety and security, a sort of new biedermeier, where they stumble through tv-language. good thing maybe one does not know if cat and breakfast place do exist. i hope they don't.
These shorts are by the writing students at VFS. I don't think they focus much on production. Most of the writing students short films have pretty basic production if you compare them to the ones by students studying the production stream. I find these shorts more enjoyable though because you find that the writing and story is usually pretty well crafted.
meh she's too soft... though... now that I think about it. I've pulled the "oh, yeah... but my cat. He needs to be fed." card. Didn't really know it was an excuse... lol
tsunaamii 1 year ago
I liked this. Everything doesn't need to be dark and intense. I thought this captured an interesting, playful mood while allowing you to develop a quick interest in both characters.
Smedley60 2 years ago
The story seemed a little dull and boring. Also, how did the girl get to where she is at 4:35?
Answer: The old woman hid behind the yellow truck as you can see at 4:28 and the girl ran around. Just take another shot... normal people dont do that...dont be lazy and try to stream it all into one. It looks sloppy.
The shot with the feet wasnt well done. When he rounded the bus bench, he walked very awkwardly basically telling the viewer that he knows the exsitance of the camera filming him.
spewaysealat 2 years ago
who cares about feet walking for a minute?
kkcooly 2 years ago
its kinda cut ei liked it alot :O :)
tankjedimaster 2 years ago 2
din get it
createaccount87 2 years ago
his house is creepy... lol
paulmc8623 2 years ago
I agree with ezits666, this is just a pointless, pathetic movie that honestly makes me wonder why it's on this channel. It sucks big time. A total waste.
moviesnob09 2 years ago
this is horrible compared to the other VFS productions. Horrible plot and horrible execution. You can hear wind against the mic on the camera in a shot.... Doesnt deserve to be here
ezits666 2 years ago
totally agree
PengunaFilms 2 years ago
huh? where's the punchline? I like the music and dialogue though.
ktokyo 2 years ago 2
i luv this vid cuz theres like this natural akwardness kinda thing if u no wat i mean.... great!
ANGELkittyFILMS 2 years ago
yah i agree with yah. im use to the awkwardness so it portrays the situation perfectly.
steelstoner 2 years ago
and so on and on...
zaboravisa 2 years ago
i really really liked this one!
seems like the most natural VFS film i've watched in a while- i really liked the acting.
vanishingyouth 2 years ago
aaaah i love it
reminds me of my mornings after.... that turn out good
ceravis 2 years ago
I don't see the point in entering the old lady
Marshix 2 years ago
very cute :)
pseydopuppet 2 years ago
I liked it, but: he looks in the wrong direction when saying that her bus has arrived, in the next shot the bus appears to have been a cargo van, and where the heck did she suddenly appear from at the end?
Still, I liked it. Great actress- very natural and believable.
jordanthecat 2 years ago
he says he's bad at directions though, just defending him haha
milkaannddhoney 2 years ago
Both actors were great in this video no matter which way they might have been looking at any particular moment!
jordanthecat 2 years ago
the cargo van wasnt the bus, the bus had already been and gone, she just missed to bus to go to the guy
Bollockbasslines 2 years ago
I was just quibbling, really. It's a fine short film, isn't it?
jordanthecat 2 years ago
it really was, its nicely made
Bollockbasslines 2 years ago
like it ;)
mirxwinst 2 years ago
I was expecting a shoalin style fight with some random ninjas with that robe of his
mrjimmyos 2 years ago
I couldn't see the old lady crossing at 4:30 :/
Brilliant shot, great writing. Very cute and interesting.
northliam 2 years ago
an amazing short film
NthDegreeStudios 2 years ago 2
Very cute :). Good writing.
Only problem is that at 4:30 you can see the old lady walking across the street lol.
ZacharyReichenbach 2 years ago 2
At 3:10 I really wanted the old lady to have disappeared when the van went by. Would have been hilarious.
gusthelesswise 2 years ago 5
so cute!!!
ANGELkittyFILMS 2 years ago
Hahahaha. So awesome. Loved it.
jeryesdotca 2 years ago
awesome, great acting
FlyingMooseStudios 2 years ago
Very cute. Good rhythm. And, dude, your lead actor? He's really good.
pocky4040 2 years ago
agree 100%
kkkasha01 2 years ago
i loved it! it was awesome!! honestly, great video
UnlikelyDejaVu 2 years ago 2
you could hear his microphone rustling about when he messed around with his robe thing..
ChrisTheRockGod 2 years ago
That is somehow very similar to the way I met my current girlfriend lol.
GolceaVlad 2 years ago
acting was good.. especially the male... and kinda hot.. good eye candy... made me stick around til the end anyway!... I'd go for breakfast the morning after and let him wear his robe too - ANY TIME!
taddoo7 2 years ago
so cute!
great performance.
Where's the steady-cam? :-(
myheroxanderpander 2 years ago
this is vfs, I dont think they can afford one.
ridingisasport 2 years ago
the camera holding is really needing work on. it needs to be way steadier
TheBoomTube 2 years ago
the actors are beyond wonderful. the guy is awesome!
I loved it!
milkaannddhoney 2 years ago
so cute.
mhss0001 2 years ago
interestingly not so much about love or sex or relationship, but going from cat to breakfast, about safety and security, a sort of new biedermeier, where they stumble through tv-language. good thing maybe one does not know if cat and breakfast place do exist. i hope they don't.
xaver54 2 years ago
awsome but her earing were a bad costume choice, they rattled a little too much! But still awsome!
canadassweetie 2 years ago
Great job guys. Really good actors.
RubenDarioPP 2 years ago
dont touch the mic. the guy = awesome acting :D
Hewstad 2 years ago 2
have to say the production quality was poor, mostly the sound. but apart from that, the story was pretty cool.
puppyblood 2 years ago
These shorts are by the writing students at VFS. I don't think they focus much on production. Most of the writing students short films have pretty basic production if you compare them to the ones by students studying the production stream. I find these shorts more enjoyable though because you find that the writing and story is usually pretty well crafted.
popaddict 2 years ago
Hahah . :D Really great. :)
stfumarevel 2 years ago
um...where's the bus???
flute1234555 2 years ago
Great job, guys!
EFunkRock 2 years ago
loved the awkward,haha.
Chaostic 2 years ago 4
Most relationships start out that way. Awkward. I have a feeling they will get along very well. :)
JoeSomebody2 2 years ago 2
nice, sometimes the acting can be a bit cheesey but this one was perfect :)
Shastamamacinco 2 years ago 2
bravo!
PricelessFilms 2 years ago
a great film! i love how simple it is
NthDegreeStudios 2 years ago
lol cute. She's really pretty too.
pipperz 2 years ago
I really enjoy watching vancouver film school videos =) they are somwhow different and unique ^^ the students have got great ideas
AmyInc507 2 years ago
yes so awkward
aargreendaybillie 2 years ago
lol it was funny so much akward moments :P
olgcschools 2 years ago