It's Forgotten Today (Original Song)

[DefinitelyMaybe80]

I immediately thought Damien Rice grey room when the vid started, I like it though!!

[FeatherFloating]

Sweet Melancholy. Love is fragility.

[NattieStar]

Lost for words!

[BatesandBones]

AMAZING!!

[Austiin23]

your such an amazing singer

[cubaholicus]

completely love your stuff

keep those originals coming in:)

[fuggedupmess]

dude set this to piano

[jimski123]

I really really dig what you did with the vocals there at 2:05 amazing.....hope all is well.

[lucywhittaker0211]

thankyou for writing such a beautifull song that is dedicated to my mum she would be so proud of you, as am i. love u gabriella xxx

[frysmaktoff]

Love it! Makes me think of my hopeless lovelife.

Makes me a bit sad, which is good for you because this song really opens up your emotions.

[frysmaktoff]

Hmm, that last part in my last comment sounded a bit weird :P

I meant that this song is good because it sets my emotions on rolling. It "works" :P

[zzzzzzzzap]

If it can serve some purpose outside it's originality then I'm happy frysmaktoff. Hope things look up for you. All the best

[belendz]

thank you,just plucked up courage 2 listen,Kay would b so proud,crying again LOVE U X

[zzzzzzzzap]

:) Thanks

[LilliePuttin]

I hope you're protecting your music with copyright.

[zzzzzzzzap]

Of course, LilliePuttin :)

Thanks for stopping by. Peace

[dumbasstwo]

Perfect!!!!!

[zzzzzzzzap]

Thanks, dumbasstwo

[KrisShred]

Pretty tune!

[zzzzzzzzap]

Cheers again, Kris. Peace

[TheSkalla16Files]

sounds like grey room ..by damien rice

make sure to keep things Original ...makes an artist who they are.

[zzzzzzzzap]

Cheers TheSkalla16Files, I'll do me best. Peace

[PutzerLovesYou]

It does have a bit of a Damien Rice vibe but I don't think it sounds exactly like grey room. It's sad and pretty so of course it sounds like Damien Rice, haha.

[warcharte]

i'm goign to listen to all fo your sogns now

becasue they are increadible, i have a few fraidns who sing songs similer to this, but your seem to be very heartfelt, and just ...relaxing, the words sem to float through my mind :)

[zzzzzzzzap]

Cheers! Thanks a lot. Floating words are the best words. I'd love to describe this song as floaty warcharte. Peace

[Denzhy]

It's a great tune, I really like it.

The bridge could use more power though, then it's perfect to me.

[zzzzzzzzap]

Yeah, thanks for that Denzhy. I considered redoing this one but I'm going to wait till I record them all on an album. Thanks again

[pauldavidbeard]

You write timeless music zzzzzzap....

im gonna stop commenting and just watch now :P

[zzzzzzzzap]

Haha.. thanks a lot pauldavidbeard; I'm glad you enjoying my tunes. Peace

[GermGreen]

This song is my favourite. I love the 'rough-round-the-edges' quality...if it were more polished, it just wouldn't seem as heartfelt. This song is one of your best, I reckon.

[zzzzzzzzap]

Thanks a lot GermGreen.. yeah, I know what you're saying. It'd feel wrong to tamper with this one. It's a song very dear to my heart as it's about someone very dear to me. Thanks again

[mangadude9]

beautiful song, but the video could do with some fixing, like u could have u instead of in a room, on a deck with ur guitar during a sunset or sunrise or something.... just trying to help. and dont get me wrong, the song is amazing, but i just think your videos could help ur song with some extra images and stuff.

[zzzzzzzzap]

No no, I appreciate it totally. I realise that I could have spent a lot of time working out some interesting visuals but I'm not too adept at all that. Maybe on the next post? Peace

[BoredintheUK]

looking at all your vids, no face? interesting, leaves us all wondering-is that the plan.Another poetic triumph (from disaster if you have to experience it)ACE

[zzzzzzzzap]

I suppose it could appear that way but in truth it was simply cos I was .. and am .. too shy. Thanks a lot

[mangadude9]

u dont need to be shy. u got serious talent! and it doesnt have to be u. it could be someone else or something.... and if i had skills like u (at writting songs and such) i would probably be famous already! but im not that good, u are, dont worry about it. i hope u become really famous! (b ^_^)b

[zzzzzzzzap]

:D Thanks. I'm not sure about fame but just to make a living out of music would be a dream come true.. you never know.. fingers crossed. Peace

[justjenine]

When/where can mp3 files of your songs be downloaded/purchased? Time for that demo album!

[zzzzzzzzap]

Haha. . I'm in the process of arranging it. I'll put out a message to my subscribers/friends and on my channel when it's done. Thanks a lot. Peace

[dgam72]

this song is incredible. I am kinda going through a rough time right now and this really hit home. So much emotion! Thanks! truely fantastic.

[zzzzzzzzap]

That's a lovely thing to say. I hope everything sorts itself out. I'm sure it will. Peace

[xShadowlightx]

You Sir have made me cry while listening to this song and I thank you for that.

[zzzzzzzzap]

:( I'm not sure whether that's a good thing. I hope it is :) Peace

[Noradne]

you created a wonderful mood again. now I'm all depressed but i love it. your voice is one of the best i ever heard. Thanks for sharing your songs.

[zzzzzzzzap]

haha, "now I'm all depressed but I love it". thanks again noradne. it's a pleasure sharing my songs with you. glad you enjoyed!

[flissturbed]

I'm putting you back on that plateau you used to object to...tunning song x f

[zzzzzzzzap]

Haha, you're too kind..

[artgirlsreality]

Another brillant song. Boy have been where the lyrics talk about. *****!

[zzzzzzzzap]

You're certainly a prolific commenter on my videos, and it's appreciated! Glad you enjoyed. Peace

[kmaf08]

ZAP,

You have amazing gift for songwriting I mean of all the original songwriters on youtube you are by far my favorite...luv this song beautifully written song keep em coming

[zzzzzzzzap]

That's a really nice thing to say. I'm not sure I'm where I want to be musically yet but there's plenty of time. I hope you keep watching. All the best..

[kmaf08]

I guess thats what good musicians do: be so damn critical of themselves lol...I do have a suggestion for this song. You should make the lines: "Its the first thing on my mind, Cant kill this love inside, You're the first thing on my mind"...as ur chorus...simple and powerful...you should end the song with those lines as well...just a suggestion

[zzzzzzzzap]

That comment is well appreciated, and thanks for coming up with it. It's been a while since I played this one so I'll check it out again and see what I can do - I completely understand where you're coming from with this. Thanks again!

[683147]

very nice! smooth voice & melody w/lyrics from the heart - can't get much better than that.  Thanks for sharing

[zzzzzzzzap]

...And thanks for commenting. Glad you enjoyed it. Peace

[anaker00]

this is definitely a beautifully composed song

thanks for sharing

by the way,

it's a shitty martin (DCX1E)

[zzzzzzzzap]

Thanks muchly for the comments. Means a lot.. P.S. Wasn't under the impression Martin made shitty guitars :P

[anaker00]

ha! agreed. however, i just spent a stupid amount of money on another martin, so i guess it's only shitty by comparison! you're absolutely right, though

give us another soon

[zzzzzzzzap]

Thanks dude. I'll try my best. Thanks for the subscription :) Peace..

[FlyingHorseKnuckles]

I know you have a head because I can hear singing coming from it. Don't be afraid to show us your singing face. I know that I look like I'm passing kidney stones when I sing so don't be shy. About the song; It's great! I love the dark vibe and the steady rhythm guitar. This could get airplay. Please post your lyrics so we can follow along. Come listen to my originals when you can. Thanks, Jon

[zzzzzzzzap]

Yeah, I knew this headless thing'd come up at some point. I thought of attacking it in one of two ways - either .. I didn't want my sheer beauty to detract from the effect of the song or .. I have a face like a smacked arse. In truth, I'm just terrified of not being anonymous .. but maybe I'll surprise you.. Thanks for the comments, Jon

[jimski123]

man just listnin to this one again......lovin it.

[zzzzzzzzap]

Thanks dude. Next one I write -- it'll carry a Jimski dedication ;) When are you going to post some more vids?

[jimski123]

I work 12 hour nights and this has been my long week ...i just got off this morning..so i might try to post an original in the next few days

[jimski123]

Seriously man...hell of a job. Its not often you find folks on here whos originals keep you listning past like a minute and wells yours do...and ill listen to it again..good job.

[zzzzzzzzap]

Thanks dude - that means a lot, especially from someone as accomplished as yourself. Thanks for the comments!

[cmstic]

Ah kris, its like i've never heard your voice before this. where have you been?

[logana13]

again, i sucked at making out the lyrics, but that's just my crappy ear... Gorgeous vibe to this though - evryhing runs together so nicely, it's an awesome song dude!

[zzzzzzzzap]

Cheque's in the post, logana13 :) Thanks for subscribing; I'm all warm and fuzzy inside

[logana13]

oh wow, i've just noticed i'm only your 3rd! mwahaha, in months to come i can say i was a trendsetter! thanks to you too :)

[zzzzzzzzap]

Haha, a trendsetter -- like shellsuits and mullet hairdos; that's me!

[hartmanpeter]

I was thinking the same thing AndRyznar said about Damien Rice. Simple and elegant. Congrats!

[AndRyznar]

Alright man! Nice original song, beautiful, I would love to hear your voice more, this song has a good Damien Rice, Pete yorn feel to it.

[PiaChio]

yay! my request was fulfilled lol : ), this song is awesome man, nice :) hope to see more originals soon! : )