Very nice! Also, I don't know if YOU know that Gadunka is a BIONICLE sea creature. But nice! It kinda reminds me of the piano right in the beginning of 'Clopser to the Truth'. But that might just be me. Overall, 7/10!
k, that's alright, I was just saying. It's actually kinda catchy, and It's just as unique as 'True Feelings'(which, IMO, was your best composition. Anyways, good luck!)
I think you got a building block, a main chord... but melody isn't there. Perhaps if you sing it, it will count! Or else you will have to make a melody that runs it through ^^ Composition gets complex yet keeping the melody alive and reserve in the song by adding different texture in the chord. When done 2nd round melody, its time for BRIDGE, a Transition part where the tip of the passage deliver. "You Raise me up~~" thats a example of the main MAIN part. Then it repeat itself :D Confusing~
But again, I like how you keep it so simple ^^ If that is composition, I guess I should think less about it and just build from what I have :3 slowly... slowly... till I find a way to end it! XD My compositions are very VERY similar to yours right now, dispite the age difference haha. you are ahead of me in terms of age :)
ohhh yaaa i forgot about the bridge! when i have made a melody or intro and chorus i havent been able to make a bridge...but then again i dont think it really needed 1 :)
awesome =D
sagarverma024 2 years ago
COOL
XDhorsecrazyXD 2 years ago
Very nice! Also, I don't know if YOU know that Gadunka is a BIONICLE sea creature. But nice! It kinda reminds me of the piano right in the beginning of 'Clopser to the Truth'. But that might just be me. Overall, 7/10!
DoccieWho 2 years ago
k thanks! but ummm i didnt copy any part of the music from cryoshell its a pur composition .
thanks for veiwing though i got an award cuz of this video so thanks to all u guyz who viewed it! =D
rockfan10231 2 years ago
k, that's alright, I was just saying. It's actually kinda catchy, and It's just as unique as 'True Feelings'(which, IMO, was your best composition. Anyways, good luck!)
DoccieWho 2 years ago
Great vid dude nice melody
Jakoby789 2 years ago
thanks allot!
rockfan10231 2 years ago
^^ I wish composition can be as simple as this! Darn it! I should make a full composition! Thank you for motivate me to give composition a shot! :D
kenenth84 2 years ago
thanks and ur welcum!
good luck with composing :D
rockfan10231 2 years ago
man awesome composition!!!! holy shit you´re good, make another composition you´re more than great you´re awesome!!!
gadunka12 2 years ago
thankks allot Gadunka!
im surely gonna post more since you like it soo much =D
rockfan10231 2 years ago
I think you got a building block, a main chord... but melody isn't there. Perhaps if you sing it, it will count! Or else you will have to make a melody that runs it through ^^ Composition gets complex yet keeping the melody alive and reserve in the song by adding different texture in the chord. When done 2nd round melody, its time for BRIDGE, a Transition part where the tip of the passage deliver. "You Raise me up~~" thats a example of the main MAIN part. Then it repeat itself :D Confusing~
kenenth84 2 years ago
But again, I like how you keep it so simple ^^ If that is composition, I guess I should think less about it and just build from what I have :3 slowly... slowly... till I find a way to end it! XD My compositions are very VERY similar to yours right now, dispite the age difference haha. you are ahead of me in terms of age :)
kenenth84 2 years ago
ohhh yaaa i forgot about the bridge! when i have made a melody or intro and chorus i havent been able to make a bridge...but then again i dont think it really needed 1 :)
glad u like it and thanks!
rockfan10231 2 years ago