I realy injoyed iht 5 stars exept the guy that got his wallet stolen realy didnt work who carries a wallet wen ther running otja froma dhat is was coll5/5
the comments here is proof that most people know crap about film. this looks like something i made in 6th grade. me and my media tech friends made a trailer in high school and it won state back in '03 search 'Reserve 17 Trailer'
well compared to your trailer (which was pretty damn cool) and my first proper short film (search for HONESTLY a short film) the pick pocket does look like dog crap.
but consider this. prior to making the pick pocket i had no movie making experience at all. zero. none. it was just three guys that wanted to see if they could actually make a stupid little film. and we did. you gotta start somewhere right?
you're right you gotta start somewhere. there are some good books out there about film and directing. the best thing to do is run through the entire scene over and over and get as many different angles as possible. get the standard angles, then get creative. then later on when you edit it, you can choose which shots you want to use and when. when you add music, it will be a smoother transition from one song to the next.
i'm actually taking film classes right now. to see how far i've come since THE PICK POCKET check out my other short film called HONESTLY (search 'Honestly a short film' or look at my youtube channel).
yeah i watched it. its okay. still needs work. and im not even focusing on the acting (which in my opinion they should have acted more naturally). anyway, everyone's a critic and sorry to be over critical. i just get annoyed sometimes with these other ignorant comments. its not very constructive (im not saying my initial comment was). film does take a lot of experimenting and it doesnt always work the way you expect it.
I realy injoyed iht 5 stars exept the guy that got his wallet stolen realy didnt work who carries a wallet wen ther running otja froma dhat is was coll5/5
roitgaughan 2 years ago
youre really into running scenes
selfrightgeoussuicid 2 years ago
this should be in a movie
TheStupidblondies 2 years ago
5 stars!!
RunescapeGuy90210 2 years ago
"the pick pocket" damn.. that's a useless theme of the movie.. lol
but somehow it's entertaining.. like how u arrange the scene.. and the fight is not bad.. 4 stars too.. ^_^
bayulebih 3 years ago
hmmm...good storyline, good footy, good editing, nice job guys. 4 stars :D
lamaz1928 4 years ago
the action sceen wasn't that bad, i was not expecting it be hollywood quallity.
ThomasXp 4 years ago
the comments here is proof that most people know crap about film. this looks like something i made in 6th grade. me and my media tech friends made a trailer in high school and it won state back in '03 search 'Reserve 17 Trailer'
ajshepp 4 years ago
well compared to your trailer (which was pretty damn cool) and my first proper short film (search for HONESTLY a short film) the pick pocket does look like dog crap.
but consider this. prior to making the pick pocket i had no movie making experience at all. zero. none. it was just three guys that wanted to see if they could actually make a stupid little film. and we did. you gotta start somewhere right?
theaccidentalspy 4 years ago
you're right you gotta start somewhere. there are some good books out there about film and directing. the best thing to do is run through the entire scene over and over and get as many different angles as possible. get the standard angles, then get creative. then later on when you edit it, you can choose which shots you want to use and when. when you add music, it will be a smoother transition from one song to the next.
ajshepp 4 years ago
i'm actually taking film classes right now. to see how far i've come since THE PICK POCKET check out my other short film called HONESTLY (search 'Honestly a short film' or look at my youtube channel).
theaccidentalspy 4 years ago
yeah i watched it. its okay. still needs work. and im not even focusing on the acting (which in my opinion they should have acted more naturally). anyway, everyone's a critic and sorry to be over critical. i just get annoyed sometimes with these other ignorant comments. its not very constructive (im not saying my initial comment was). film does take a lot of experimenting and it doesnt always work the way you expect it.
ajshepp 4 years ago
oh yeah. lighting is everything
ajshepp 4 years ago
what is that song called?
jackscarlett22 4 years ago
should fast foward everything to make you look really fast
bumkiller64 4 years ago
kool video....ace music 2
illinthemind 4 years ago
very nice and good choice of song!!!
KurtMastaK 4 years ago
that was a good wone
ogfkid 4 years ago
wow this was really good,i admitt the actions sequences were a little off, but over all this was a really good film
cutlassjack12345 5 years ago
cool. well shot, well made, good action, fast runners
100percentdude 5 years ago
well done
OneEvilCorpsman 5 years ago
thats a bomb video.
Sizzledbacon944 5 years ago
Very well shot, im assuming it was a one camera shoot. The cuts look very good.
krypt3d 5 years ago