To be fair, I was relieved at this point to hear the story was untrue.
GermanConquistador08 6 months ago
a masterpiece
supersmartperson278 7 months ago
Jeasus Christ this is scarry!
333Dawncomet333 11 months ago
@333Dawncomet333
what does Jesus Christ have to do with it?
ogunitracy 7 months ago
this is the scariest story i have ever heard :)
ThEsItHlOrDd 1 year ago
AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
jayko945 1 year ago
Holy Moly, Andrew...... Thank God party Six is available!!!
cowgirlmoon 1 year ago
what did she intend on doing with you if she got a hold of you?
TheRealTaco87 2 years ago
...That was scary.
Lammy4ever7 2 years ago
Great IMAGINATION, but maybe the story started from a REAL event.
3martijns 2 years ago
wow
that was F...ing scary
zwayd 2 years ago
I'm plumb goose pimply scared
JudyGurl 2 years ago 2
MORE THAN YOU HAS GOOSE BUMPS
AbitaVets 2 years ago
hoooooooooly crap rofl
thend3162 2 years ago
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ok andy this much was predictable, let's get it over with ok?
Atoyota 2 years ago
SCAAAAAAARRRRY!
Eterna1Soldier 2 years ago 8
wow such an awesome story, Klaven rocks!
joeyviolent 2 years ago 6
HOLY SHITTTTT
DDDD:
you are such an amazing storyteller
its creepy
i have goosebumps DD:
rebebo95 2 years ago 2
I don't know anything about you as a writer... But this is one of the best horror tales I have ever heard.
kevinarmstrong1 2 years ago 3
Alot scarier than Dean Koontz.
NeverAloneForever 2 years ago 3
Lovin it !
RenegadeTimes 2 years ago 2
HOLY SHIT KLAVEN! you are awesome at storyteller!
FlightSimulatorXATC 2 years ago 2
HOLY CRAP!!!
jrc99us 2 years ago
oh my god.
JoeJC 2 years ago
This story is awesome. I'm going to Barnes and Noble today, hoping I can find something by you Andrew!
Chugalg 2 years ago
PJTV
- and he's written many books and movies.
haypenny 2 years ago
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!
samvxp 2 years ago
Wonderful. Dickens meets Poe meets, what? Redemption? Can't wait for the end!
aqelfaris 2 years ago 2
Great story Andrew thanks for posting.
Have a Merry Christmas and God bless!
hossh01 2 years ago
You are scaring the stuffing out of me Andrew, ARGH! Happy ending! I want a HAPPY ENDING NOW!
bubblemum 2 years ago
If this is some ploy to sell more books........It worked on me because I can definetly see how creative you are and if your books are like this I have to pick some up
BostonDFi 2 years ago 3
Your story is taking too long to tell. You have my attention but it's getting harder to wait.
koolmom21 2 years ago
Wow... You're a great story writer/teller!
HannahRenee23 2 years ago
wow very nice
trekfan92 2 years ago
wow, didn't expect any actual supernatural element in the story. still, going strong.
twominutepenalty 2 years ago
Awesome!1
Guitarrassdeamor 2 years ago
It's getting creepy...
marklross2 2 years ago
"Scary ghost stories and tales of the glories of Christmases long, long ago."
jnjnelson 2 years ago
To be fair, I was relieved at this point to hear the story was untrue.
GermanConquistador08 6 months ago
a masterpiece
supersmartperson278 7 months ago
Jeasus Christ this is scarry!
333Dawncomet333 11 months ago
@333Dawncomet333
what does Jesus Christ have to do with it?
ogunitracy 7 months ago
this is the scariest story i have ever heard :)
ThEsItHlOrDd 1 year ago
AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
jayko945 1 year ago
Holy Moly, Andrew...... Thank God party Six is available!!!
cowgirlmoon 1 year ago
what did she intend on doing with you if she got a hold of you?
TheRealTaco87 2 years ago
...That was scary.
Lammy4ever7 2 years ago
Great IMAGINATION, but maybe the story started from a REAL event.
3martijns 2 years ago
wow
that was F...ing scary
zwayd 2 years ago
I'm plumb goose pimply scared
JudyGurl 2 years ago 2
MORE THAN YOU HAS GOOSE BUMPS
AbitaVets 2 years ago
hoooooooooly crap rofl
thend3162 2 years ago
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ok andy this much was predictable, let's get it over with ok?
Atoyota 2 years ago
SCAAAAAAARRRRY!
Eterna1Soldier 2 years ago 8
wow such an awesome story, Klaven rocks!
joeyviolent 2 years ago 6
HOLY SHITTTTT
DDDD:
you are such an amazing storyteller
its creepy
i have goosebumps DD:
rebebo95 2 years ago 2
I don't know anything about you as a writer... But this is one of the best horror tales I have ever heard.
kevinarmstrong1 2 years ago 3
Alot scarier than Dean Koontz.
NeverAloneForever 2 years ago 3
Lovin it !
RenegadeTimes 2 years ago 2
HOLY SHIT KLAVEN! you are awesome at storyteller!
FlightSimulatorXATC 2 years ago 2
HOLY CRAP!!!
jrc99us 2 years ago
oh my god.
JoeJC 2 years ago
This story is awesome. I'm going to Barnes and Noble today, hoping I can find something by you Andrew!
Chugalg 2 years ago
PJTV
- and he's written many books and movies.
haypenny 2 years ago
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!
samvxp 2 years ago
Wonderful. Dickens meets Poe meets, what? Redemption? Can't wait for the end!
aqelfaris 2 years ago 2
Great story Andrew thanks for posting.
Have a Merry Christmas and God bless!
hossh01 2 years ago
You are scaring the stuffing out of me Andrew, ARGH! Happy ending! I want a HAPPY ENDING NOW!
bubblemum 2 years ago
If this is some ploy to sell more books........It worked on me because I can definetly see how creative you are and if your books are like this I have to pick some up
BostonDFi 2 years ago 3
Your story is taking too long to tell. You have my attention but it's getting harder to wait.
koolmom21 2 years ago
Wow... You're a great story writer/teller!
HannahRenee23 2 years ago
wow very nice
trekfan92 2 years ago
wow, didn't expect any actual supernatural element in the story. still, going strong.
twominutepenalty 2 years ago
Awesome!1
Guitarrassdeamor 2 years ago
It's getting creepy...
marklross2 2 years ago
"Scary ghost stories and tales of the glories of Christmases long, long ago."
jnjnelson 2 years ago