Good concept - it looks nice though some light levels are inconsistent. Use a tripod / steadicam as too much hand held looks amateurish unless you're blowing out the colour a la CSI. Sound levels also inconsistent with some noticeable distortion. The actors needed more direction as some of it felt a bit dead pan - a consequence of doing voiceovers. Nothing really happens in the first 60 secs to grab your audience and i felt the cuts a little too slow. A lot of potential though, keep going.
Thanks for that! This film was done on a budget of £50. The equipment was limited to a Canon XM1 and no Tripod. Although that doesn't explain the light levels. Really appreciate the comment!
so the director and writer is also the lead man, and the story makes him out to be this mysterious enigma.. ooh theres something about him!
self-serving rubbish!
culturebully3 1 month ago
Hi, hope i wasn't too critical! The shot setups and angles i really liked as with the idea. But just saying 'great' doesn't help you get better.
ThimbleFox 3 years ago
no i respect truth. Would love to hear you comments on the other films. :D
Viraleye 3 years ago
Good concept - it looks nice though some light levels are inconsistent. Use a tripod / steadicam as too much hand held looks amateurish unless you're blowing out the colour a la CSI. Sound levels also inconsistent with some noticeable distortion. The actors needed more direction as some of it felt a bit dead pan - a consequence of doing voiceovers. Nothing really happens in the first 60 secs to grab your audience and i felt the cuts a little too slow. A lot of potential though, keep going.
ThimbleFox 3 years ago
Thanks for that! This film was done on a budget of £50. The equipment was limited to a Canon XM1 and no Tripod. Although that doesn't explain the light levels. Really appreciate the comment!
Viraleye 3 years ago
GREAT A*
rawand9 3 years ago
Great work guys :) keep up the good work!
Vicky x
viksta69 3 years ago
Nice work man. leo
fantomplaya 3 years ago
Excellent Film!
shkar 3 years ago