Bro I gotta say. I usually hate wanna-bes but... Damn. That's all i can say. Is just Damn. My new favorite song. Hope one day you make it big. You never know. you might be the next Lil' wayne or snoop dogg. Never know
i dont understand why every wannabe rapper want to develope and try to be the best and make $, but u have talent , maybe i se u in 4 years on MTV keep it on and if u got ur millions give me a bit cash :D
@ReekyMarko Amen. If you like the song you don't have to say your age. If you don't like the song same thing. Nobody cares about your age bro. Just listen to the song and go with it
@RedChekRecordz like i aint tryin to put somebody down, rappin is fun shit, but even the best youtube rappers dont get too far. ur okay though, its just i dont enjoy internet rappers because people will always call it straight fire, and well its a good attempt by somebody whose just started rapping, theres still alotta work thats gotta be done, in all honesty to get ur name out in rap, u had to appear on the block with ur raps, thats how u get hype.
@RedChekRecordz im not tryin to hate, but its fruity looped to the max, its got no soul, i aint sayin u gotta pull out an mpc5000 and start doin some old school beats, but ur lackin the soul man, and im still not tellin u to go and bring out the jazz samples. im sayin its lackin soul. its one two one two, no substance naw mean? i listen to alotta hip hop btw and the beat is killin u.
song is straight, but i didnt like the last dude tht went up his flow was really choppy, and the hook doesnt really catch you, if u know wht i mean, but the overall track is nicely done
when u drink water. u can sip right??? which is takin in a little abit of water. well, same thing for when u smokin weed, u taking in a little bit of smoke. fuck ur stupid
Pretty good, I liked how you asked nicely for people to come view. When it hits the chorus at 1:00 you can notice a little tempo change or a lack of cohesiveness. Or 2:09. I hope your career works out.
next great star if u keep on trying and trying and trying. i would like to buy these songs and put them on my i pod if possible, since i really don't want to download these songs illegally for free and not give you credit/respect that you deserve.
take out the strings... its making this sound like a club beat... change the string and put in something different... flows okay.. put in a second voice then it be good!!!! turn bass up a little bit, vocal a little bit down... add a little effect on the hook.. sounds plain!!! update me on yo movement!!!
Good quality. In the chorus you should remove some noise, I think it's too busy now. Then it's also easier to recognize the melody which is important for a good song.
Was this recorded in a studio, if not.. how did you get such good quality? Im wondering because im only 15 but ive been rhyming words and progressed from that since i was 5.. Made so many songs rcently and i cant do nothing with them.. wondered how to record without a studio.. Thanks man
i did this at home... im a producer too so i learned the technical parts too... um, u just gotta be willing to spend some money .. get a condenser mic, there some really good cheap ones out ther and a usb interface of some sort that lets u connect it all up and if ure willing to spend a lil more, id say get a pop filter... thats it, if u have a beat already then u can already make professional sounding verses... good luck to u bro
Thanks for all that man it really helped, i just need to get some money together now and i may be sorted.. You may have just started my career.. Im really grateful & thanks again (Y) :)
Not really a fan of rap but I found this song on my computer.. not sure how, but I love this song.. Keep on rappin you got a future man!
MsSleepySnorlax 3 months ago
Favorite lyric- "Sinister fake you like a minister"
TheOsu22 1 year ago
Bro I gotta say. I usually hate wanna-bes but... Damn. That's all i can say. Is just Damn. My new favorite song. Hope one day you make it big. You never know. you might be the next Lil' wayne or snoop dogg. Never know
TheOsu22 1 year ago
i dont understand why every wannabe rapper want to develope and try to be the best and make $, but u have talent , maybe i se u in 4 years on MTV keep it on and if u got ur millions give me a bit cash :D
xxvallexxdaking 1 year ago
you are goood
beautiful5212 1 year ago
I like it. Not really feelin the beat tho, just not my style i guess.
rileymcg 1 year ago
Nice job =) Keep up the good work!
BryanStars 1 year ago
yea homie....i like the flow and lyrics....smooth....keep grinding
holla
-v2dheart 4 life!
V2DHEART 1 year ago
sound pretty nice!!!
NiQNiq15 1 year ago
this is awesome!!! i will subscribe to u! =D
keep up the fantastic work.
SlantyDragon 1 year ago
Excelent i subbed.
MotorTaker95 1 year ago
wow,its great ^^
ubaguita01 1 year ago
love it =D ♥
shawty25mj 1 year ago
This is awesome.
SlaveForYouBritney 1 year ago
I saw your comment on the Eminem video, so i decided to check u out. Im only 12.... But your a Really good rapper! Good job!
gingerdog7 1 year ago
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ReekyMarko 1 year ago
@gingerdog7 Who the **** cares if ur 12?
ReekyMarko 1 year ago
@ReekyMarko Amen. If you like the song you don't have to say your age. If you don't like the song same thing. Nobody cares about your age bro. Just listen to the song and go with it
TheOsu22 1 year ago
Good music man.
Can you put up the lyrics in the description?
What program do you use?
MindlessEduardo 1 year ago
@MindlessEduardo yeah ill do that,, i shud have done that long ago lol
RedChekRecordz 1 year ago
Hmm, not bad.
Tibble kind likes.
I think I have my next vict- I mean user to mention on my show.
TheTibbleShow 1 year ago
I love it! keep up the good work!!! :)
EEbugg13 1 year ago
I really like it...
it's sick!!!! :)
CraziiMadH0use 1 year ago
I'm not into rap music, but this is not bad at all. :) I kind of liked it, and it has good lyrics. :) Good job.
azncalisapphgrl6 1 year ago
hey redchekrecordz nice work keep going ur shit :DDD
pls sub us !
GangBangRecordz 1 year ago
wow shit ur realy good keep going that shit:D
pls sub us
GangBangRecordz 1 year ago
Pretty cool stuff man.
Undergroundspreader 1 year ago
Dude this is awesome ....
Great work my friend
Musicmaker805 1 year ago
I like the beat! :D
NoOdLeZ114 1 year ago
good
TheWCGoal 1 year ago
nice
i like the beat
<3
tictok993 1 year ago
best song ive heard in awhile i listen to this every morning and it helps get me through the day man nice beats and excellent flow.
TheOsu22 1 year ago
@RedChekRecordz like i aint tryin to put somebody down, rappin is fun shit, but even the best youtube rappers dont get too far. ur okay though, its just i dont enjoy internet rappers because people will always call it straight fire, and well its a good attempt by somebody whose just started rapping, theres still alotta work thats gotta be done, in all honesty to get ur name out in rap, u had to appear on the block with ur raps, thats how u get hype.
shegwin 1 year ago
@RedChekRecordz im not tryin to hate, but its fruity looped to the max, its got no soul, i aint sayin u gotta pull out an mpc5000 and start doin some old school beats, but ur lackin the soul man, and im still not tellin u to go and bring out the jazz samples. im sayin its lackin soul. its one two one two, no substance naw mean? i listen to alotta hip hop btw and the beat is killin u.
shegwin 1 year ago
this one's better
tyfll 1 year ago
horrible!
MRkallek91 1 year ago
@MRkallek91 maybe if you got the crud outa your ears youd kno that dis is an awesome song.
TheOsu22 1 year ago
its decent yo
Tsunoni 1 year ago
kinda slow yo..and get the beats straight.their kinda off but gud spittin yo
FBOMB45 1 year ago
it's ok i suppose, kinda mediocre lyrics, chorus could use work
Muppet933 1 year ago
not bad kind of reminds me of inmmortal tequnique for some reason good work .
nawfside56 1 year ago
wow awesome song!!!
blumoonshine1 1 year ago
damn!!! i love it!!
TaylorLautnerRox11 1 year ago
awesome yaar
Naseer001 2 years ago
nice song
fasooly24 2 years ago
nice
BAZHE 2 years ago
nice man - keep it up !!
mcshoebox 2 years ago
heard worst.but atleast u tride.but to be honest not really feelin it.
jaydubb1281 2 years ago
Nice rhymes man loving it a lot.
TheGoodFellowTV 2 years ago
good job keep it up mann
danmeek0074 2 years ago
dayumm :]
danmeek0074 2 years ago
good rhymes and ideas. but the backround beat is kinda distracting. so, work on flow but its fuckin sick
chubbychinkles 2 years ago
Sounds like Eminem. Nice background sounds, the verses are killa, ;)
Dog keep it on.. very nice sound.
DihR6 2 years ago
yes work on the chorus
MrLauritsjensen 2 years ago
u told me to lock at this and this is some good shit man. i have downloaded it
MrLauritsjensen 2 years ago
went hard as hell, keep it up.
ChampThe18 2 years ago
u got hard listening to this?
NiGELcat123 2 years ago
Good job homie, keep it up
straight20ballin 2 years ago
pretty good, the lyrics are great just as the music. keep on going
letsshoot 2 years ago
this song is awsome music is your thing
fasooly24 2 years ago
i agree with ''lilfazloner'' and ''fatelbitchslapped''.......
powerofjujuonweed 2 years ago
religion is bullshit so i disagree with this lyric
smartg159 2 years ago
It's called respect. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
spooner93 2 years ago
I´m gonna to give a chek in the other songs. Thank´s by the notice.
theyeshua2009 2 years ago
it sounds good bt i think u hav to work on da chorus juz a bit more... other than tt, gd job. i love it
lilfazzloner 2 years ago
this is good better than 50 cent
MrBritler 2 years ago
PUT TIS ON ITUNES CUZ IDE BUY IT
iownedu489 2 years ago
Its pretty good
ToughKane 2 years ago
this shit is bad!!!!!! fooo u sing bad u can sell this shit!!!!!!!!
Ely12G 2 years ago
I listen to underground hip hop.
This Flow needs more creative direction.
Instrumental must altered the state of mind.
Lyrics rhyme improvisation thinking, B
Come with that different shit, know mean..
FatalBitchslapped 2 years ago
Nice man
haris75 2 years ago
is alright
every song done, more learned!
RydoCavdo 2 years ago
nice man
Randomvids18 2 years ago
well done
xfablexx 2 years ago
nice
vicleep 2 years ago
it's good
but sometime the music lags...
jimpjuh 2 years ago 2
yes ist good =)
missTurkish1905 2 years ago
this is tight!
lakersrdabest 2 years ago
aint really feelin' the beat but nice going keep it up
eastsidemotherfucker 2 years ago
this shit is thigt man 5 star
YoungMoneyCBoy 2 years ago
this sheit knocks..im feelin it bruh..5 star XD
xXTopNoTcHXx 2 years ago
worth a listen.gj
SkepsisDub 2 years ago
i like this.. =)
jaquelineshamo 2 years ago
dis shit is tight
kwedaman 2 years ago
omg is that u raping? your really good i like it
cckeezybaby 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
nice 5 stars
DeathMcBattler 2 years ago
dis straight
oobel33 2 years ago
song is straight, but i didnt like the last dude tht went up his flow was really choppy, and the hook doesnt really catch you, if u know wht i mean, but the overall track is nicely done
GhostWriterakaGMoney 2 years ago
good stuff man, u got talent
SYSTIEM 2 years ago
whoa wtf good job
JoePotato28 2 years ago
this song kicks ass. but wat da hell wit da line SIPPING on da weed
slimshady13ful 2 years ago
slimshady13ful
when u drink water. u can sip right??? which is takin in a little abit of water. well, same thing for when u smokin weed, u taking in a little bit of smoke. fuck ur stupid
Adidas120 2 years ago
This song is the bomb man!
Torrent32 2 years ago
nice song (y)
b00gal 2 years ago
the rap is good, but the chorus could improve..the chorus should swing more(then the verses)
hackslash2020 2 years ago
I like a lot! As a Christian I feel bad when swearing, but over all I am surprised! You got it Byron!
Kapsakki 2 years ago
very good dude, i like it very much.
Arnyziukas 2 years ago
Whoa you remind me of mozez flowz so much. You both rap with a deep theme and you both deserve a hell of alot more views. Keep up the work i subbed.
vashlash64 2 years ago
Wow, this is amazing.
Interstella45 2 years ago
I think its really, really bad. unoriginal, feels a tad too slow, generally boring to listen to.
Qieth 2 years ago
Nice, keep it up dude :D
zanko8 2 years ago
This is really good.
ConnaG101 2 years ago
its a sinister world and a sinister flow
TheOsu22 2 years ago
nice
TheOsu22 2 years ago
fantastic!!
andreslof 2 years ago
very great rap i like this rap are u eminem im fan of eminem
fachkira 2 years ago
The song is good. You might need to quantize some stuff but you are doing well.
JoelPernell 2 years ago
this is pretty dope,, keep goin and i'll listen to your shit
WelcomebackEm 2 years ago
Pretty good, I liked how you asked nicely for people to come view. When it hits the chorus at 1:00 you can notice a little tempo change or a lack of cohesiveness. Or 2:09. I hope your career works out.
DeceitfulDestiny 2 years ago
you could probably have a future in this. Just dont get in with those industry bitches.
Vierarocks4 2 years ago
good shit man, really good, did you make he beat? can i have it ??
2009Proj3ct 2 years ago
no.
Adidas120 2 years ago
love it
WILLIAMJESSEALLISON 2 years ago
this is hott 100% what rap should be
EoVideos423 2 years ago
ahahahahahahaaaaaa sipping on the weed lmao! wow flipping burgers sittign down thing what the fuck just happened? wth was that!!!
xxdeathx 2 years ago
xxdeathx.
this is the shit thats gonna be hittin up yo mama bro
Adidas120 2 years ago
Damn, This is sick! Awesome job, Saw ur comment on a vid, thought i'd give your acc a try,
MaaDMiKeE 2 years ago
yo can i get this song on my ipod?
nicholaskakurai 2 years ago
hey man you got nice stuff, you got a facebook or something?
thomasjames9 2 years ago
woot is this ur song, ur voice?
NWA90s 2 years ago
yeah bro its all mine
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
I needa get MP3 for this
JEwCr3w 2 years ago
ill send u a link in ur inbox so u can download it
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
work and flow, your voice sounds monotone at some points. besides that nice
benbo1mageftw 2 years ago
no.
Adidas120 2 years ago
next great star if u keep on trying and trying and trying. i would like to buy these songs and put them on my i pod if possible, since i really don't want to download these songs illegally for free and not give you credit/respect that you deserve.
mikidof 2 years ago
ayt,, just tell me which songs u want and ill put them up somewhere and give u a link
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
mikidof i love your comment bro
Adidas120 2 years ago
thanks man, i love you
mikidof 2 years ago
@mikidof i love u too
Adidas120 2 years ago
Man, this is good, your beat + your rap, good voice good lyrics = a GOOD JOB!
Hold on! and you make it
(I am Dutch sorry for my bad English)
NerezMusic 2 years ago
I disagree, leave the strings, and the flow could be better in parts. Left more on ur channel. Keep it up.
Kotetsusdarkangel 2 years ago
ayt man.... thanks bro
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
5***** muh fucka! Sick
DontScatter 2 years ago
thanks bro
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
take out the strings... its making this sound like a club beat... change the string and put in something different... flows okay.. put in a second voice then it be good!!!! turn bass up a little bit, vocal a little bit down... add a little effect on the hook.. sounds plain!!! update me on yo movement!!!
brooklypark 2 years ago
Work on your flow
And you'll make a hit
peppyers 2 years ago
your songs really good!!!!!
PrimeTimeDreamz 2 years ago
you guys are beast. Good luck with some records
JEwCr3w 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Nice work redchek, mind checking out my music?
boytwin1 2 years ago
you got a great beat. I hope you make it in this world. Someone of your talent deserves to get a chance.
ggamji4 2 years ago 3
thanks bro
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
hahahaha fucking shit WHA?
2000terminated 2 years ago
2000terminated.
i hope ur joking
Adidas120 2 years ago
how does this take any skill?
tylr322 2 years ago
very good shit
keep it up
saturcampoy 2 years ago
fasterrrrr nd ur gonna go far
mikekd98 2 years ago
you said sippin on weed? you dont sip weed
harsy1sextreme 2 years ago
lol, someone i know said the same thing a while back but its a phrase used among my friends like an inside thing but i kno wat u mean lol
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
harsy1sextreme
are u retarted?
Adidas120 2 years ago
great
flame444444 2 years ago 2
u need a little work on ur flow and make the tempo a little faster and it will be baus
slipknotrulez564 2 years ago
you got the right voice
travandai 2 years ago 2
you are good !!
ridopop1 2 years ago 2
He needs to work out his flow more other than that it allright.
acerrrcss 2 years ago
acerrcs
are u kiddin me? byrons got a fuckin sick flow man
Adidas120 2 years ago
Its not that sick but its good for an unknown (Maybe underground?) rapper but could be improved
acerrrcss 2 years ago
its good song but i dont like the chorus...i dont know much about hip hop, i am just saying my opinion..
lakostakis 2 years ago
kinda good but bad
HTJT5 2 years ago
crazy!!!! man ur talented!!
Bladevil19 2 years ago 2
Youre the next big thing bruh. You WILL make it big. I'll spread word about you, cuz you got some real talent!
DarkestLightning 2 years ago
thanks man, im really trying to make my songs as real and true as possible
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
Nice man
Isuck232 2 years ago
can't stop listenin to this stuff man, gr8 song. Right out of the heart.
Did you make this at a record company, or by yourself?
BlowInYourFace 2 years ago
made it by myself bro
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
nice
BlowInYourFace 2 years ago 2
dhat iz tiqht
dizshawtyluvtafuk 2 years ago
yeah man the flavour 'n' feelin is in the right place, you the rapper? you make the tune?
ukmagix 2 years ago
yeah, i rap and produce my own shit
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
this shit is way too good. can't stop listening to it man.
KING1813 2 years ago
Good quality. In the chorus you should remove some noise, I think it's too busy now. Then it's also easier to recognize the melody which is important for a good song.
MaffiosoX 2 years ago
maybe if someone else sang it ynow but its a 4 out of ten from me man
shadowsmaster194 2 years ago
did u sing this its pretty good man i`ll work with u man just email me or wateva and i`ll send u some stuff
khera24 2 years ago
shits whack nigga thats jus my opinion
scuubay2g 2 years ago
i just uploaded another song called "What Now" chek it out, .. "What Now" along wid 'Sinister' are on the demo too
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
Was this recorded in a studio, if not.. how did you get such good quality? Im wondering because im only 15 but ive been rhyming words and progressed from that since i was 5.. Made so many songs rcently and i cant do nothing with them.. wondered how to record without a studio.. Thanks man
LegendaryRap 2 years ago
i did this at home... im a producer too so i learned the technical parts too... um, u just gotta be willing to spend some money .. get a condenser mic, there some really good cheap ones out ther and a usb interface of some sort that lets u connect it all up and if ure willing to spend a lil more, id say get a pop filter... thats it, if u have a beat already then u can already make professional sounding verses... good luck to u bro
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
Thanks for all that man it really helped, i just need to get some money together now and i may be sorted.. You may have just started my career.. Im really grateful & thanks again (Y) :)
LegendaryRap 2 years ago