One Less Share Short Film

[Liti420]

may i know how do u change the camera angle?

[J4zzyG]

@Liti420 really?

[RapidCartoon]

/user/MPMayhemProductions/feat­ured

Please check out this channel ^^^

Btw great video!

[ArmagonAuthor]

This was a very impressive student video! Considering that the clip you were imitating (the beginging of the dark knight) was very complex, you made a very good rendition. Good job!

[garillabeast]

Who has the gun? Who has the truck!

[fiqahzara]

*thief bad boy that funny like u actually....typing error......hu3......

[fiqahzara]

ur intro, music background for this vid very good, n that make ppl want to see this vid.......i luv behind the scene this vid.......u guys so cool...... i never seen thioys thatef bad b funny like u ... #justkidding hahhahah......luv ur vid, great job ^^

[RoofyProductions]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA :)

all i gotta say..

[haRDsOULx16]

its! VIDEO COPILOT! Short Film xDD just kidding!

[ROLOBSkateboarding]

the song is magic

[Dogebol7]

Good, how do you make the intro? (0:29)

[effectsniper]

lololololololololol. who has da truck?. haha

[BlueLegoStudios]

my brain exploaded@

[RaulSoaresG1452]

SHIT! IT´S THE DARK KNIGHT ALL OVER AGAIN! NOOOO

[polkadottedcowss]

if the guy in the elevator got off a floor before to get in the truck...WHY didnt you SHOW that in a "flashback" from in the guys head that was about to get run over.. he dies without closure on the fact he was outsmarted...but the real crime is not SHOWING US... "film is behavor" not special effects.. and another tip... show why that thief is running late getting chaced and the rest arent. did that guy stay behind cuz he was greedy and wanted more, so took longer to exit the job?.. show us man!

[polkadottedcowss]

behavior*



[Ebaoy501]

hahahaha lol i like it :)

[TheTeenageArtist]

... I was kinda expecting a clown to pop out of no where screaming "WHY SO SERIOUS?!"

The script/plot is basically taken from the dark knight prologue.

Any ways, good shots. I especially like the intro

[HecticFilms2]

This reminds me of the beginning of the dark knight

[TasteForDisaster]

wow, for students this was really good, I was really impressed :)

[walkmanenn]

love the script, great job

[AdamXXll]

lol so why is there a scene of the guy in the elevator shooting the other one if the shooter is supposed to be faking it. Why would they fake all that just for themselves? Great camera work and editing, Everything else needs work

[hiicheM2]

What is the name of this music?!

[priyonjoni]

i love the color correction in this

[tbit4]

Come up with something New this is batman

[GuardianShortMovie]

Good Job!

[TzeGamer]

cool! :D

[quagdingo77]

Don't hate guys do you know how harm this shit can be?

[ANDYHARGLESISFAN5]

eprom

[bringdastorm]

i thought it was kinda cool!

[imoctorino]

Riot Gear ? hahaha

[skydayang]

lol not really original but still good

wheres the truck lol

[Ray123456712345678]

Sort of a copy of the beginning of the dark knight and the acting was sort of bad but it was good for a high school film!

[DancingArmadill0]

wow copying batman much?

[hobocamptheater]

couple of problems:

1 they wouldn't have taken off their masks especially after seeing a camera.

2 guy #3 would have shot #1 before #2 could hit him with the truck

3 #2's body isn't in the elevator, even if #1 dumped it there would have been blood (even on #1's face, hands, and clothes)

4 the acting isn't the best but that isn't an immediate fix that'll just fix itself with practice.

anyway, good job (liked)!

[filmeditskate]

@hobocamptheater couple of problems:

1.) Your over thinking it.

2.) Guys in the elevator obviously had a plan to fake the gun shot, while he got off on a floor before the top to get the truck (and run him over)

3.) This was a high school film class project. Not a grammy award winner.

EVERYONE GET OVER IT! haha i get it. Its like batman, or watever you nerds watch. Peace.

[GarlynX]

@filmeditskate wow cant you take constructive criticism ? hes not over thinking he pointed out the mistakes you made, because you obviously didn't see them, he even said he liked it and good job you stupid little "highschool" turd.

[MrJesterLS]

@filmeditskate

Your comment @hobocamptheater isn't right either, if your going to post on youtube expect to be opinionated on the videos you make, reason for why comment box is there, and he's just trying to help you make a better video. You calling him a nerd just makes you pathetic especially when you're the one wasting your life making youtube videos, and don't tell me "don't watch it then" I came I gave my opinion get over it.

[Sk8erPunk8]

@MrJesterLS Dont watch it then

[MrJesterLS]

@Sk8erPunk8 hahaha lookin at your picture you looked like a 4 eyed fag lmao get@me bro

[HyperSniperCo]

@filmeditskate woah dude way to not take constructive critisism

[PrevanaDei]

@filmeditskate um, not all of the people watching youtube videos are nerds. I like to think of myself as a half-nerd. Not really sure what the other of me is just yet though :)

One thing I can tell you - get used to criticism. yeah it's only a high school project, but when you post it on youtube the chances of having thousands of directors/writers and the like giving you feedback. Don't let the negative ones bother you. Also don't ignore it - you never know who is giving you this advice :)

[PrevanaDei]

@filmeditskate good film. i might suggest closer shots for dialogue sequences, just a small thing I noticed.

[PrevanaDei]

@PrevanaDei oops I mean lowering the music in the dialogue sequences. Shot frames seem okay.

[DJdevil319]

@filmeditskate hobocamptheater was just trying to tell you things for the future come down

[Renoctsreviews]

cool vid

[strangersound]

Tarantino in less than 5 minutes. :)

[pineapplebaron]

Very, very, very nice. The acting was not the world's greatest, but it was passable. One thing I do feel necessary to point out, however, is the way the gun is held around 2:18. Elbows are not supposed to be at eye level. As some would say; "check that chicken wing, or someone's going to fry it!"

[Motopsycho96]

Duuuuude, is it me, or the guy in the checkered shirt, the last one to die looked like the actor from Equilibrium and batman?

[danapane]

start music is really nice



[JAMEVINUN]

Love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Two Thumbs Up

[badbrojack]

haha this wa well good, just noth rlow budget film i thought but you showed me lol great work , ill be sure to pm you for tips

Thanks

Jack

[holymoleyproductions]

you guys just stole this idea from bat man dark night

[Sauriouz]

Impressive! It made me feel like this was an actual Big Screen movie!

Keep it up bros!

[SimplySmashingPro]

music for this vid: (really high pitch) WAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.....WAAAAAAAAA­AAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[iWhiteFang]

I lurved it.

[monstarpictures]

Cool video. How did you get the location?

[AlegreFranz]

you lost me at the credits.

[sasadada90]

how did u do the truck scene

[filmeditskate]

@sasadada90 Simple. Just drive a truck into your actor going about 60mph. Have fun.

[sasadada90]

@filmeditskate I thought about doing that but the concequences are really big, but serouisly how did u do it??

[ionodge]

@filmeditskate y dont u actually try and help the person instead of making a smart ass comment

[J4zzyG]

@filmeditskate would have been better if you added a shadow onto the guy that got run over.

[DaRealPrinceofPinoys]

inspired by the dark knight?

[1TeddyValdes]

That was really good...

[davdud101]

Amazing! I like the incorporation of the title into a main part of the story. Good work, you guys, keep it up!

[hexguzman]

this kinda reminded me of the begining of the movie of The Dark Knight where Joker kills few of his crew for less share in the beginin of the movie but overall pretty kool I how u guys did the effect where the guy gets hit by the van

[dickdog75]

great video! i love it

[InBedWithRhinos]

Nice one dude! :D

[TheNBTshow]

i got a canon t2i with a 18-55mm i want to know how to shoot video at night with good setting using street lamps and cities lights. thank u

iso shutter aperture

[EZActionfilms]

lol nice film you guys:D

[ThisIsBlur]

im getting a deja vew of the dark knight

[GroupMusicGroup]

what kind of camcorder is?

[TheWordMC]

that one kids cant really act ahha, its all good though 10/10 :D

[MrTheMicrowave]

Infected mushroom- Heavyweight :D epic!!!

[rockon0003]

hahaha i liked it "who has the truck" :D love it

[JackieNNN]

WHOA MAN DAT WUZ SO COOL

[Editor02Channel]

lol clever film idea!

[SMGUniversalFilms]

Reminds me of the begging of batman the dark knight with the joker robbing the bank

[ShauKenshin]

You guys are FRIGGINE SIC.... keep up the fun stuff man ... 

[JTBProductions0]

I like the acting job of the guy in the truck. Very in the moment. The only thing that I didn't like was the way the guy held that SMG. You don't have to put your elbow out like that.

[NoLandPro]

Haters 'gon hate.

[flashyg55]

damn that was pretty good and it looked amamzing!!!!what sdhc memory card did you use to keep up with a camera like this?????

[futurstar96]

i shit my pamts when that truck hit him, LOL JK it was great

[wiggzentertainment]

video was great keep up the good work....quick question were did you get the music from..

[LinearFlight]

Reminds me an awful lot like the beginning of Dark Knight...

[boogy81869]

Nice job! Just a quick question why did u need to green screen the part when the guy gets run over?

[NoLandPro]

@boogy81869,

I guess we could've just ran over him. That works too.

[hecticben]

Good job man, really like the camera work on this! Can you tell me what Lens you used on this? also, did you have lighting? or is that natural light? And what about editing, what filters did you add? Thanks bud, much appreciated!

[filmeditskate]

@hecticben Thanks. I used the Tamron VC 17-50mm and my Opteka 6.5mm fisheye. It was all natural light because we really didn't plan anything. We pretty much just made things up as we shot it. And I exported the whole thing out of Final Cut and used Film Magic Pro to color grade in After Effects. I would recommend not doing it that way, as it was really tedious.

[VideoGameFallout]

@filmeditskate How'd you get so many views? What's your secret?

[vkohmoviemaker]

What was in the bag? Plastic balls for their BB guns?

[WindRushStudios]

lol movie was batman, effects are andrew kramer, other than that i think you guys did a pretty good job... next time get your own ideas :P

[hussein1sayre]

sick editting work! what sw did you use?

[ovidiudumitriade]

Soo... the movie is actually 2 minutes long. It should be a rule against credits longer than the actual movie.

[stylermy]

Cool vid ;D, Nice Job ;D

[Anchormanly]

i didnt know i was watching the kidz bop version of the dark knight

[filmeditskate]

@Anchormanly yet you favorited this? Must have a kids bop fetish or something...

[Anchormanly]

@filmeditskate ahah think of it more as a bookmark.

[thewindsurfguy]

thumbs up if Optic Predator led you here and left you sorely disappointed

[filmeditskate]

@thewindsurfguy bruh take that shit elsewhere. No one cares.

[thewindsurfguy]

@thewindsurfguy lol i'm seeing if people agree...

[filmeditskate]

@thewindsurfguy It was just a little school project. I know its not good.

[thewindsurfguy]

@filmeditskate gotcha. the filming technique was good though for sure.

[NoLandPro]

@thewindsurfguy

By checking out your videos, I'm sure you couldn't do better. shut the fuck up stupid cunt.

[thewindsurfguy]

@NoLandPro lol I'm pretty sure I could at least make a short film that was my own idea, and not a direct copy from a movie scene.

[filmeditskate]

@thewindsurfguy Well good for you man, but this was all done within a week, an hour a day. Im pretty sure I can make a better more original film if I took more time on it. This was a quick highschool project, get over it.

[NoLandPro]

@thewindsurfguy Was it a direct copy from a movie scene? It captured the main idea of it, but it wasn't a direct copy. It was intentionally done to be similar to Dark Knight.

[EDFearStudio]

Whats the song at the end?

[liv4die4skating]

LOL who has the truck!

[TheClydeSkate]

THEY LOOK LIKE SEAN MALTO AND HIS BROTHER XD

[Lobot76]

Well done!

[PhazeDesigns]

Awsome editing, really good work on this.

[HaydzInHD]

is predator the aisian or the guy at start on his ass?

XD

[energyDie]

Awesomeeeeeee

[FullMetalJakAss]

lol at that guy hating, who cares. nice job.

[TheWizard854]

Thumbs Up If OpTic Predator Brought You Here

[Amtgr]

lol who has the truck tht was fucking funny hahahaha

[thewindsurfguy]

lol this is EXACTLY the same as the opening sequence from The Dark Knight....hardly changed at all besides the fact that it had poor acting, kids, fake guns, and a pick up truck instead of a bus. Honestly, if you're going to copy a movie, at least put some originality in it instead of essentially reenacting it.

[filmeditskate]

@thewindsurfguy haha spot on ;)

[DevanMorrisseyHD]

which guy is predator :S?

[NoLandPro]

@thewindsurfguy

The asian kid was a hell of good actor :]

[thewindsurfguy]

@NoLandPro sarcasm?

[xfuszie]

lol 1:00-1:04

[xLandsoul]

badass.film.but.work.on.the.ac­ting.:D

[M40A3VeNoMZz]

I bet you freaked out when OpTic Predator (Koncealed112) told you he'll feature it on his channel for 24hrs. He's Probably the best know gamer on the Xbox Community! Awesome editing by the way!

[filmeditskate]

@M40A3VeNoMZz Did not know that. Pretty dope.

[M40A3VeNoMZz]

@filmeditskate Have you seen how many subscribers Koncealed1122 has?

He's gonna make this video pretty famous.

[MrBlomu]

Great work! Cool Film!

[EricLongden]

yeah kyle!!!

[filmeditskate]

@EricLongden lol dude lets film a montage together! You down?

[crookedxSkater51]

Pretty Sick Flim.

[funmak3yumadk1d]

Its like the batman beginning!

[xDeaDxLegacY]

fucking awesome :D

[zISkillzZ]

Nice, how long did it take you to make and put all of this together?

[filmeditskate]

@zISkillzZ We did it all in about a week, but had an hour to work on it each day.

[Batesie7]

Ehem Dark Knight? xD Nah but it was a good watch.

[x3dzio]

Did you get the idea from Batman The Dark Knight? First scene when it starts with the two guys on the roof and then the Joker wins it from all?

Also nice editing, liked the intro :)

[filmeditskate]

@x3dzio Yes the idea originally came from the Dark Knight intro. After seeing that I thought it would be fun to make a short about it. However this doesn't do what I had in mind any justice. Maybe I will try it again one day.

[Koncealed1122]

I'll feature this on my channel for a day. Nice editing!

Logan.

[filmeditskate]

@Koncealed1122 Thanks man!

[TheDiViNeStaTiC]

@Koncealed1122 i was on your channel and saw this pred. i thought it was yours now that makes since haha

[Wolf555Hound]

Nice quality! Am I nerd that I recognized stuff from VideoCoPilot's Riot Gear? Yes :D! Once again nice.

[filmeditskate]

@Wolf555Hound Yes we used Riot Gear and then also the Video CoPilot car hit tutorial. Thanks man. Sub if you want!