I thought I detected some strain in Erika's voice, to keep that high pitch up. With a sprinkle of breathlessness on top mayhaps, at least I'd be fighting for air during a stint like that. Mercy beaucoup for the fun in any case.
Well, it sounds like you are looking for input, so I'll add - great concept, but cut the time way, way down - people have very short attention spans today and expect a lot, fast - I think aiming for 3.5 minutes would be perfect.
Little mark is the perfect parental ploy to make this wonderfully fun to watch. Little erika woul dbe better if she modeled herself after Lily Tomlin's EDITH ANN who was more realistic as a child. LIttle Erika come soff as a fake child and misses the real subtlies of a kid. The recipe is great! Little mark's energy focuses on erika as does erika's - which is why it doens't work as well.
Lil' Erika here! You are totally right, the voice is insane and hard to get past, deffinitely jarring! Thanks for the input folks, much appreciated for sure! ill work on a newer voice. agreed that lil marc is perfectly awesome.
@SchillingFilm Some slapstick would be good. I kept waiting for Erika to slice a finger off or something, then a cutscene with her hand in a bandage with no explanation of what happened. I also agree with the others to not change Little Mark. He is great.
I thought I detected some strain in Erika's voice, to keep that high pitch up. With a sprinkle of breathlessness on top mayhaps, at least I'd be fighting for air during a stint like that. Mercy beaucoup for the fun in any case.
chevkoch 1 week ago
Oh wow Erika is so dreamy.
SeminarioMAE 2 months ago
Why did I watch this entire thing!?
I feel so useless.
Dilrd 2 months ago
@Dilrd ha useless you just learnt how to make coslaw yeaaaa!!!! and that apples keep doctors away.
regularjohn09 1 month ago
@regularjohn09 But I already knew how to make coleslaw...
Dilrd 2 weeks ago
It's the sword dancer!
Blazur 3 months ago
Thumbs up if carlos pesina brought u here
Raven67891 8 months ago
I'm thankful for Carlos Pesina bringing me here, lol-worthy.
subzerosmokerain 8 months ago
Well, it sounds like you are looking for input, so I'll add - great concept, but cut the time way, way down - people have very short attention spans today and expect a lot, fast - I think aiming for 3.5 minutes would be perfect.
Kiora999 8 months ago
Little mark is the perfect parental ploy to make this wonderfully fun to watch. Little erika woul dbe better if she modeled herself after Lily Tomlin's EDITH ANN who was more realistic as a child. LIttle Erika come soff as a fake child and misses the real subtlies of a kid. The recipe is great! Little mark's energy focuses on erika as does erika's - which is why it doens't work as well.
cddemoss 8 months ago
Lil' Erika here! You are totally right, the voice is insane and hard to get past, deffinitely jarring! Thanks for the input folks, much appreciated for sure! ill work on a newer voice. agreed that lil marc is perfectly awesome.
erikamiponi 8 months ago
I want the Captain America mask. Also, maybe tone Erika's voice down a bit. I found the whole thing hilarious, though.
Murtagh42 9 months ago
@Murtagh42 Thank you, we appreciate the input.
SchillingFilm 9 months ago
Needs less high pitch and more blood.
tbt10f 9 months ago
@tbt10f More slapstick?
SchillingFilm 9 months ago
@SchillingFilm Some slapstick would be good. I kept waiting for Erika to slice a finger off or something, then a cutscene with her hand in a bandage with no explanation of what happened. I also agree with the others to not change Little Mark. He is great.
tbt10f 9 months ago
Little Mark is great. Erika is nails on blackboard.
lakespeedinc 9 months ago
@lakespeedinc Is it the character, the voice, the obnoxiousness?
SchillingFilm 9 months ago
Little Mark is great. Erika is irritating and I started fast forwarding after two minutes. The recipe should be edited down to 3 minutes.
707Taj 9 months ago
@707Taj Thanks for your input. We are trying this out as a concept, testing to see what does and doesn't work.
SchillingFilm 9 months ago