I think the new sound is a bit overwhelming and almost detracting at times. the music that once was added a level of understanding through the tones. before, i saw a love story of a man who had his heart ripped out and tried to fill his life with others to make himself whole. He finally saw true happiness and realized he was empty. With just the noises the story changes. Taking out some of the noises and having a back music would balance this i think. BTW nice job. :D cant wait for the finished
Hi! Some of you might visually recognize this new upload, but did you know it features a brand new soundscape by a VFS Sound Design student? Turn up your speakers!
@Whinestee its a supernatural story about a man who has no heart and cant find happyness, so he steals the hearts of others and absorbed them into him :)
the last 1 had bossing music
scarehead4 6 months ago
Hey guys, thanks for the kind comments and the constructive criticism, you can check out some my other works on my channel if you please. Cheers.
shahmaitreya 8 months ago
creepy
Nordfean 8 months ago
so whats the difference between this one and the previous 1 ?
JacksonTheGod 8 months ago
I think the new sound is a bit overwhelming and almost detracting at times. the music that once was added a level of understanding through the tones. before, i saw a love story of a man who had his heart ripped out and tried to fill his life with others to make himself whole. He finally saw true happiness and realized he was empty. With just the noises the story changes. Taking out some of the noises and having a back music would balance this i think. BTW nice job. :D cant wait for the finished
ririmuchan 8 months ago
oooh! I like the new sound effects on this one.
AniDex 8 months ago
Great video keep up the good work.
tillasmax 8 months ago
I think the sound here is too overwhelming.
awagamgnalaw 8 months ago 2
This is a clever metaphor, very nice :)
ThEgRoWtHsPeRt 8 months ago
It's very cool, also a bit confusing.
fapotu 8 months ago
For the love of God, tis the beating of the tell-tale heart!!!
Waltham1892 8 months ago
This short is old.
sithioth 8 months ago
and...? what happen? nothing?
andresca1985 8 months ago
It was a bit too techno-ish to me, but, it evoked the right emotions, so I guess Shah succeeded.
VitaNuovaRevolution 8 months ago
Hi! Some of you might visually recognize this new upload, but did you know it features a brand new soundscape by a VFS Sound Design student? Turn up your speakers!
VancouverFilmSchool 8 months ago 3
without the ending it doesn't make any sense AT ALL
DarkAngelEU 8 months ago
liked the original better
misto713 8 months ago 4
I liked some parts of this audio, and some parts of old one
MMMIK13 8 months ago
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nave4pres2 8 months ago
eh?
buizel200 8 months ago
Doesn't make any sense.
Whinestee 8 months ago 13
@Whinestee its a supernatural story about a man who has no heart and cant find happyness, so he steals the hearts of others and absorbed them into him :)
TheBoomTube 8 months ago
@Whinestee Or you are just stupid enough, not being able to interpretate?
nunxqrw 8 months ago
@nunxqrw Nobody asked for your opinion dumbshit.
Whinestee 8 months ago
@Whinestee yeah because it's missing the end : /
TheAngelgirl7 8 months ago
@Whinestee if you think about it, he has every heart in the world,yet no one will love him for he is missing his own.
scarehead4 6 months ago
This is old!
star0shadows 8 months ago 9
@star0shadows
Yes' it's old. This is a project for sound design, that means only sound is different.
jacho80 8 months ago 4