I like how you do this. I was looking for a reading with building passion and crescendo. Sure Prufrock is depressed, but he wouldn't tell his story in a monotone. Just looking at the lines you see they deserve more emphasis than other readers give them - emphasis that you provide. Thank you.
i dont understand how people think women dont get it. you seem to get it plus you have a nice soothing voice. although maybe i just dont get it as i suck at understanding poetry. I DONT GET IT GAHHH. P.S i do have a penis so there! HAH!
The speaker doesn't have to male. I'm very anti set genders in poem/short story readings. I feel like the sex of the readers isn't as important as the vocal emotion poured into it. I'm a theatre major, and i go to school with many girls who can play male parts incredibly, capture the harsh, rough edge of a male voice. And guys can poems written from females perspectives.
It's not the gender in my opinion that matters, but the inflections, and how you convey the poem.
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You do not understand the poem (inflections not correct, etc.). This is a man's poem and requires a male voice. A woman cannot understand the poem; although she may appreciate it for its, rhyme, meter, language, etc.
AN excellent reading of this is by SpokenVerse who has a preceeding comment
You might try Bronte's "Remembrance". This poem should only be read by a woman. It takes a woman to fully understand this, although I do enjoy it, some aspects are puzzling to me because I am not a woman.
What a bunch of crap! While I agree that she doesn't really have it right as far as inflection, I can't agree that NO woman can "understand" the poem. What an ignorant thing to say! You should be embarrassed!
Although I do agree that this girl doesn't seem to understand this poem. I feel like she's just reading it because it's pretty. Just the way her voice sounds as she reads it, and her little chuckle in the middle, makes me feel like she doesn't know what the fuck it really says.
@losersalwayswin Well, it's beating a dead horse trying to get these radical feminists to understand that they just can't be men in every physical and mental capacity.
The reader simply does not have a "feel" for this poem, in large part, most likely, because she is female. A good analogy is the fact that I cannot "feel" a menstrual cycle.
Hate to break it to you, but he's not talking about peeing standing up. Quite frankly though her verses follow like a tedious reading of not so insidious intent.
It's a natural human tendency to believe that no one can think in the same way that you do - that your oh-so deep pains and longings are too complex to be held anywhere but within your own mind. That being disproven, it's natural to imagine that only people that share your situation in life can share your sentiments.
you read well, but your voice doesn't suite the poem, and also you should be reading it about 3 times as slowly; finally, i find you sometimes don't stress the right words, but that's just me
Good voice ut i really don't feel it suits the poem... however you sound uncannily like Claire Danes in Romeo & Juliet (Baz Luhrman)... Prufrock is rough and sad and i always imagined him with a harsher voice...
Listening to your recital, that was beautiful, pure pleasure. I never heard the emotion of the character presented in such a way before, like for the first time I could see Prufrock (Eliot) come alive. Wonderful!
She did a lovely job, and we all love the poem. Perhaps Tom Waits should read it, too. I have composed music for Prufrock, and will take calls from either Wallace Shawn or Tom Waits on recording it..
A lovely voice, indeed; but this ought to be read by Wallace Shawn. J. Alfred is speaking to us from the eigth level of hell. He has pulled back a curtain to give us a surreptitious peak at the world that has destroyed him while taking tea and cake.
Kudos! You have accurately and eloquently expressed my sentiments. It is difficult to tell a seemingly nice person that they don't what the heck they are doing.
I love, really love this poem, very good choice. I also think you have a pleasant voice, and that you should maybe try recording some childrens literature. However, I don't think that these soft, nice, voice of yours suits this poem. Prufrock is... well... sad. You read it like it was a nursery rhyme. Sorry if I am being rude, its not my intention. Congrats again for the voice
very nice intonation etc...but it just doesnt register when the voice is female.its universal in its solitude, sure,,,but it just isnt the same.. for me that is.
Thanks, msg. You know, when I first started doing YT, someone told me that I've such a lovely voice, they'd subscribe to me even if I were just reading from the phonebook. ;)
My favorite poem.
MaRIsSaLuVsThAtGuY 1 year ago
amazing recital,you would have made Eliot proud
buzzarlett 1 year ago
Thank you for that! This is my favourite poem also, hearing you read it I think I fell a little bit in love
jamesshirley 1 year ago
@jamesshirley
How appropriate for a 'love song,' eh? ; ) Thanks for the kind words.
TheGrammarian 1 year ago
I like how you do this. I was looking for a reading with building passion and crescendo. Sure Prufrock is depressed, but he wouldn't tell his story in a monotone. Just looking at the lines you see they deserve more emphasis than other readers give them - emphasis that you provide. Thank you.
makenna88 2 years ago
i dont understand how people think women dont get it. you seem to get it plus you have a nice soothing voice. although maybe i just dont get it as i suck at understanding poetry. I DONT GET IT GAHHH. P.S i do have a penis so there! HAH!
boysingsjpop 2 years ago
The speaker doesn't have to male. I'm very anti set genders in poem/short story readings. I feel like the sex of the readers isn't as important as the vocal emotion poured into it. I'm a theatre major, and i go to school with many girls who can play male parts incredibly, capture the harsh, rough edge of a male voice. And guys can poems written from females perspectives.
It's not the gender in my opinion that matters, but the inflections, and how you convey the poem.
thelightelectric 2 years ago 2
outstanding
dreamsalittle 2 years ago
Outstanding.
dreamsalittle 2 years ago
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You do not understand the poem (inflections not correct, etc.). This is a man's poem and requires a male voice. A woman cannot understand the poem; although she may appreciate it for its, rhyme, meter, language, etc.
AN excellent reading of this is by SpokenVerse who has a preceeding comment
You might try Bronte's "Remembrance". This poem should only be read by a woman. It takes a woman to fully understand this, although I do enjoy it, some aspects are puzzling to me because I am not a woman.
eclectorsdevices 2 years ago
What a bunch of crap! While I agree that she doesn't really have it right as far as inflection, I can't agree that NO woman can "understand" the poem. What an ignorant thing to say! You should be embarrassed!
elleOF67 2 years ago 2
Better to be silent and supposed to be ignorant, than to speak out and remove all doubt.
eclectorsdevices 2 years ago
Touche! Easier said than done, eh?
elleOF67 2 years ago
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losersalwayswin 2 years ago
Although I do agree that this girl doesn't seem to understand this poem. I feel like she's just reading it because it's pretty. Just the way her voice sounds as she reads it, and her little chuckle in the middle, makes me feel like she doesn't know what the fuck it really says.
losersalwayswin 2 years ago
@losersalwayswin Well, it's beating a dead horse trying to get these radical feminists to understand that they just can't be men in every physical and mental capacity.
eclectorsdevices 2 years ago
Explain what you mean when you say 'mental capacity.'
losersalwayswin 2 years ago
The reader simply does not have a "feel" for this poem, in large part, most likely, because she is female. A good analogy is the fact that I cannot "feel" a menstrual cycle.
eclectorsdevices 2 years ago
Bullshit.
Menstrual cycles are exclusive to women.
The feelings expressed in this poem can belong to anybody.
losersalwayswin 2 years ago 4
Hate to break it to you, but he's not talking about peeing standing up. Quite frankly though her verses follow like a tedious reading of not so insidious intent.
MavsWorld 2 years ago
It's a natural human tendency to believe that no one can think in the same way that you do - that your oh-so deep pains and longings are too complex to be held anywhere but within your own mind. That being disproven, it's natural to imagine that only people that share your situation in life can share your sentiments.
People are disappointingly alike.
MorroccoSurrogate 1 year ago
@eclectorsdevices
thumbs up folks
chobogamer 1 year ago
Not as a value judgment, but as a specific function. I might have known this would be misinterpreted.
eclectorsdevices 2 years ago
very nice reading, i love it, it is also one of my favorite poems.
vnss88 2 years ago 2
you read well, but your voice doesn't suite the poem, and also you should be reading it about 3 times as slowly; finally, i find you sometimes don't stress the right words, but that's just me
thanks for posting this:)
oxoEclipsEoxo 3 years ago
Good voice ut i really don't feel it suits the poem... however you sound uncannily like Claire Danes in Romeo & Juliet (Baz Luhrman)... Prufrock is rough and sad and i always imagined him with a harsher voice...
jtallen12345 3 years ago
The poem was written in 1917.
Kathara14 3 years ago
The obvious problem is that the speaker is English and male, with male angst. But your phrasing is good.
SpokenVerse 3 years ago
Listening to your recital, that was beautiful, pure pleasure. I never heard the emotion of the character presented in such a way before, like for the first time I could see Prufrock (Eliot) come alive. Wonderful!
Oscar301 3 years ago
Wow! Thank you very much.
TheGrammarian 3 years ago
She did a lovely job, and we all love the poem. Perhaps Tom Waits should read it, too. I have composed music for Prufrock, and will take calls from either Wallace Shawn or Tom Waits on recording it..
beanaeb 2 years ago
A lovely voice, indeed; but this ought to be read by Wallace Shawn. J. Alfred is speaking to us from the eigth level of hell. He has pulled back a curtain to give us a surreptitious peak at the world that has destroyed him while taking tea and cake.
beanaeb 3 years ago
Kudos! You have accurately and eloquently expressed my sentiments. It is difficult to tell a seemingly nice person that they don't what the heck they are doing.
eclectorsdevices 2 years ago
for our sake, can you post a telling of a fairytale? your voice is awesome. pick your favourite...
by the way, thanks, this helps for english
THEOogalieBoogalie 3 years ago
Sure, I'll keep that in mind for my next video.
Thanks for the compliment. =)
TheGrammarian 3 years ago
I love, really love this poem, very good choice. I also think you have a pleasant voice, and that you should maybe try recording some childrens literature. However, I don't think that these soft, nice, voice of yours suits this poem. Prufrock is... well... sad. You read it like it was a nursery rhyme. Sorry if I am being rude, its not my intention. Congrats again for the voice
nicolaslevine 3 years ago
Very lovely. My favorite also, visualized with old home movies. I hope you like it.
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prhughes0 3 years ago
You have a very soft and pleasing voice. Have you ever thought about reciting children's books on tape or CD? I think you would be amazing! :)
jefftheactor7 3 years ago
Aww, thank you very much!
No, I haven't considered children's literature, but someone once suggested that I recite the phone book. =P
TheGrammarian 3 years ago
Lol well honestly your voice is so smooth I might even buy that CD
jefftheactor7 3 years ago
Wow, not on YT much, huh? Only took you two months to respond. =)
TheGrammarian 3 years ago
Yea, I don't get on very often lol
jefftheactor7 3 years ago
Noted. =)
TheGrammarian 3 years ago
I have to memorize this poem for english, i like it. But I'm so stuck.
solongandgoodnight 3 years ago
and you forget the dante quotation at the beginning...im not trying to criticise..im just a dante fan and its pertinent to the poems mood
pipposback 4 years ago
I can't read the quote.
TheGrammarian 4 years ago
very nice intonation etc...but it just doesnt register when the voice is female.its universal in its solitude, sure,,,but it just isnt the same.. for me that is.
pipposback 4 years ago
That's interesting.
TheGrammarian 4 years ago
Thank you, this helped me study for my exam.
Randeez1 4 years ago
Haha. Well, I'm happy to have helped.
TheGrammarian 4 years ago
This is also one of my favorite poems of all time. Thanks for posting this one...and you do have a great reading voice!
1nceuponathyme 4 years ago
Thank you for the compliment! T.S. Eliot totally rocks! =)
TheGrammarian 4 years ago
You have a nice voice.
msginca 4 years ago
Thanks, msg. You know, when I first started doing YT, someone told me that I've such a lovely voice, they'd subscribe to me even if I were just reading from the phonebook. ;)
TheGrammarian 4 years ago
I'd second that!
rowsdowersavesus 4 years ago
Oh, Ben! ;)
TheGrammarian 4 years ago
LOL ... I think I probably would too!
msginca 4 years ago
i like the poem, it was quite nice.
zzbullan 4 years ago
Thanks.
TheGrammarian 4 years ago
5/5 :-)
tallhunter1 4 years ago
Thanks! Gosh, I love this poem so much!
TheGrammarian 4 years ago