This is an excellent composition. Everthing what you can expect from a good musical: Recitative (Introduction), Main Theme, Verses, Bridge, B-Part with opposite character, Return to the Main Theme: Ron is using every method professionell. So the song becomes interesting. You can understand the meaning of the lyrics by hearing the music. I would put this piece in one row with Phil Collins' Tarzan which is very succesful in Germany. Greetings; Martin
@MartinRaetzJr Thank you very much Martin, and yes I am thrilled with your comment. Thanks to Stu also for the opportunity to try something new. Greetings to you from USA. -Ron
Thank you both for sharing this song. Ron, you are the perfect match for a song like this. Beautiful words, voice and piano. I watch a lot of musicals and can picture this song being an important part of one. I would like to see it!
Thank you for you very kind comment, and I would love to see this play too. Hear that Stu... see what you can do about that.... :o) Greetings Lindsey from USA and UK. -Ron
@Cameragirl803 Hi, Jane ! Thx very much indeed :] I have to admit that I dream of sitting in an audience - and watching the whole thing unfold in front of me, someday. I worked back-stage on Aladdin, for a season, when I was 25. Even that gave me a buzz !
...you just wrote the lyrics for this one! Wow!! Totally agree with breendenburgh!!! Can't say much more, but that i had an experience during Expo 67 here in Montreal... there was one of these ships, i don't recall what her name was... in the port where us mere mortals could visit and walkabout... Hard to explain the feeling, i had the same thought when i saw the hammocks down there. It was a profound and lasting experience! : )
@streetspiritlive Thanks for the great comment, Marianne :] When you go onto these historic old ships, you can really sense the lives that have been lived there. Such strong emotions, in a closed environment, I guess.
This is a really great one. I can really see the 16yr old John performing this song on stage. Great lyrics and interesting text to read. What a wonderful melody. I love how Ron sings this song with his beautiful voice and how he plays the piano. I wish you all the best for your theatre project.
This is amazing...Rons voice and piano, stuarts lyrics..felt i was on broadway and standing next to Jonny at the same time. well done ! also loved the vid, beautiful!
@breedenburgh Thank you so much, I agree with you about Ron. His voice and phrasing is perfection & I feel like I'm listening to the character singing, on stage.
@breedenburgh Thank you Louise for Stu and myself. We are all enjoying your uploads now too, they are always great and different from each other. -Ron
Hi Stu, I think the vid is perfect for it, a really great feeling I get from it. The lyrics you wrote created very vivid images in my mind and that made it easy to write the music for. A good collaborative experience Stu, thanks a lot. -Ron
A great, awesome song!
jogo1209 1 month ago
Fantabulosa !!!
Vlogglebox 5 months ago
This is an excellent composition. Everthing what you can expect from a good musical: Recitative (Introduction), Main Theme, Verses, Bridge, B-Part with opposite character, Return to the Main Theme: Ron is using every method professionell. So the song becomes interesting. You can understand the meaning of the lyrics by hearing the music. I would put this piece in one row with Phil Collins' Tarzan which is very succesful in Germany. Greetings; Martin
MartinRaetzJr 5 months ago 4
@MartinRaetzJr WoW! Great comment! I think Ron will be thrilled to read this :]
stufish4040 5 months ago
@MartinRaetzJr Thank you very much Martin, and yes I am thrilled with your comment. Thanks to Stu also for the opportunity to try something new. Greetings to you from USA. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
Thank you both for sharing this song. Ron, you are the perfect match for a song like this. Beautiful words, voice and piano. I watch a lot of musicals and can picture this song being an important part of one. I would like to see it!
BluegrassForte 5 months ago
@BluegrassForte I can certainly agree with you about Ron's voice. " Straight To Broadway! ", for this one ;]
stufish4040 5 months ago
@BluegrassForte
Hi Lindsey,
Thank you for you very kind comment, and I would love to see this play too. Hear that Stu... see what you can do about that.... :o) Greetings Lindsey from USA and UK. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
thats really awesome! I love it!
hugs xx
fvfrau 5 months ago
@fvfrau Thx so much for stopping-by to have a listen X :}
stufish4040 5 months ago
This was wonderful guys!! I could so hear this done in a play onstage!!! Bravo!! *****
Cameragirl803 5 months ago 6
@Cameragirl803 Hi, Jane ! Thx very much indeed :] I have to admit that I dream of sitting in an audience - and watching the whole thing unfold in front of me, someday. I worked back-stage on Aladdin, for a season, when I was 25. Even that gave me a buzz !
stufish4040 5 months ago
@Cameragirl803 Thank you DM Jane :o) DM Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
... what to say again ??? ;-)
WolfgangRaetz 5 months ago
@WolfgangRaetz lol :] Hope you enjoyed !
stufish4040 5 months ago
A great video....
And an excellent song.
Nice work!
IamHelenKeller 5 months ago
@IamHelenKeller Thank you from both of us - it means a lot :]
stufish4040 5 months ago
@IamHelenKeller Hi Helen, thanks for you very kind comment. It is appreciated very much. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
Hey!
I didn't write it like this, all in one line!!
Oops! Sorry i misspelled breedenburgh!!! ; )
streetspiritlive 5 months ago
streetspiritlive 5 months ago
@streetspiritlive Thanks for the great comment, Marianne :] When you go onto these historic old ships, you can really sense the lives that have been lived there. Such strong emotions, in a closed environment, I guess.
stufish4040 5 months ago
This is a really great one. I can really see the 16yr old John performing this song on stage. Great lyrics and interesting text to read. What a wonderful melody. I love how Ron sings this song with his beautiful voice and how he plays the piano. I wish you all the best for your theatre project.
Very nice greetings from Anette
TanteA 5 months ago
@TanteA Thanks so much, Anette. I hope to see it staged, one day, if only in a school.
stufish4040 5 months ago
@TanteA
Hello Anette,
and you have already had your songs in a play haven't you... even on the BBC :o) Thank you for myself and for Stu. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
Interesting project. Thanks for the explanation in the video description.
blackturtleshow 5 months ago
@blackturtleshow Thx for stopping-by, Mr 'T' :]
stufish4040 5 months ago
A nice share Ron. Cheers! Here's to more from this partnership.
CurtisMateer 5 months ago
@CurtisMateer I think Ron's the 'senior partner', when it comes to talent. lol. Thx for listening.
stufish4040 5 months ago
@CurtisMateer Hey Pete, thanks for stopping in for this, we appreciate it. I hope all is well with you down under. Greetings to you. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
Nice thanks Stu and Ron
CharmedQuarkZ99 5 months ago
@CharmedQuarkZ99 Thx, Richard ;)
stufish4040 5 months ago
@CharmedQuarkZ99 Hi Richard, Thank you for coming by and commenting, for Stu and myself. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
@rhopen You've contributed a lot of music to the world Ron, never stop
CharmedQuarkZ99 5 months ago
Wow, what a treat of a video to watch and listen to on a Sunday! Mieke
miekemaligne 5 months ago
@miekemaligne Thank You ;] Happy Autumn !
stufish4040 5 months ago
@miekemaligne Thank ou very much Mieke. Greetings to you from USA. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
This is amazing...Rons voice and piano, stuarts lyrics..felt i was on broadway and standing next to Jonny at the same time. well done ! also loved the vid, beautiful!
breedenburgh 5 months ago
@breedenburgh Thank you so much, I agree with you about Ron. His voice and phrasing is perfection & I feel like I'm listening to the character singing, on stage.
stufish4040 5 months ago
@breedenburgh Thank you Louise for Stu and myself. We are all enjoying your uploads now too, they are always great and different from each other. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
nice work:)
joezjoezjoez1 5 months ago
@joezjoezjoez1 Thx, joseph :]
stufish4040 5 months ago
Hi Stu, I think the vid is perfect for it, a really great feeling I get from it. The lyrics you wrote created very vivid images in my mind and that made it easy to write the music for. A good collaborative experience Stu, thanks a lot. -Ron
rhopen 5 months ago
@rhopen I was thrilled with what you came up with - still am :] Magic !
stufish4040 5 months ago