Eminem - Space Bound Instrumental

[mrRight3193]

continued ... you thought he was decent

like a beast he took ur heart and ripped into pieces

i guess u can keep learning about our species but i can tell ya u dont need him

he had the best but sure didnt deserve it so pull it togetha

stay strong forever never let another tear fall coz unlike the sun theres billions of people like him and i can tell you girll even if it dont make no sense u light up my world when its dim

jst like the other night i was cofuzd when i lookd at my watch n saw 10 pm

[mrRight3193]

you are beautifful there aint noone like you even thru all the shit u go through u still manage to keep a smile on your face and thats waht makes u so unique a beauty that noone can speak of they think they know ya but really they got no clue of who u are or what u been through what youve slept through and what u cried thru but keep ya head up even when u dnt see the blue sky up above it never quit coz things fall apart so better things can be put together

[mrRight3193]

dkgklg fojglf fldmgfd

[sullydudeismyhomie]

fucking fagget not downloading



[DREMAN23]

a song worte to haliey jade marshall i want to put my heart into like im slim shady

i was 12 years old an you were my baby im crazy in love with a parent who does drugs

fuck is up space bound bitch suck a dick an eminem your gay ass shit fucking kill your self

naw that the drug talking im walking an seeing everything clearer that you in the mirrior

i neverkno your name you was lame jus fucking nigga an dames what ashame no bang fuck abtich jus make a make in teh matrix im hated for being

[Tazmusicinyurarea]

CHECK MY CHANNEL FOR THE NEW 2012 INSTRUMENTAL I MADE

[element115infication]

catz

[crazytrent01]

thunder and lighting are like fireworks in the sky their will always be animosity cause we cant see eye to eye i say i love you but why do I lie?what the fuck do you think will happened when american idol dies?no more hope left and anyone who say they rap dope is depressed

[crazytrent01]

its nightfall the sun just set and Im trapped in the wilderness,they say if you see coyotes somewhere near them is where the pilgrims lives,i spot a villiage in the middle of the woods,hide in the brush the civilian's are the watch dogs of this town Im just too good,i spot a automobile i could use as an escape goat but wait its rainning i could use that guys raincoat,

[DESERTRANGER7]

I can hear him do I get a prize?

[3DMAXXtreme67]

in chorus: Because your an playstation and Im an x-box 36deeeeeee And we could nevaaaa beeeeeee/ The beginning of a hit single

[Bloodylvl85paladin]

turn up the volume and u will hear him

[di8torted]

Thumbs up if you have thumbs.

[crazytrent01]

the things I been through is nothing you can recovery from but move on from/

and still I mourn over alot of things any shape or form these song has meaning what the fuck do you think I made it for/

these hos dont know me and they better leave me alone I only like tight pussy having nothing but a cheesey flow,

[crazytrent01]

its been 2 years yet Im still not over you cant you see you abducted my heart duct aped it to your chest my whole soul porpose on earth is to make you happy or atleast try my best seconds chances are rare arent they yes?I was sapposed to leave yesterday and i aint even out the fucken drive way yet

[545416855987988666]

Almost perfect MY ASS

[fcbabdoumessi]

fooooor



[barnesy31]

ikr u can hear him still lol

[05134312]

links off =/

[HachArt]

thumbs up if you are human

[D33Lan3Productionz]

@HachArt LMAO!!!

[PandoraPurpleParadox]

I sit back and just watch all this pain that you've brought I get caught in this web of lies that you've told Every time, every rhyme that you hate I sit here and contemplate my next move my next rhythm that make you think, Thank im as good you want want me to be. Yet all you do is sit here and make me think that you hate all the things that i speak that i write down in this book, Bitch, let me just sing. Let me live my life even if its filled with sin I dont care anymore so ill say bye

[PandoraPurpleParadox]

@PandoraPurpleParadox I tried :D

[Mr123chulo123]

lol this isnt a instrumental xD his voice is there

[AkADarknessImmortal]

lol people say the same thing lmfao keep attention thumbs lmfao

[KTevolved]

space bound climbin to the top never gonna stop, on a mountain there goes a rock, impactin me now im gonna drop, falling on my side with pride, impact the earth at 150 mph, formed a crater 1/2 the size of mars, some wud think im a god but im not, im just red hot like the sun, number one i become till the end watcha want! i gonna come across yall common ppl, and yall gonna say omg, i'll say want some weed its good for ya

[Dylan808Raynes]

@KTevolved everything was priceless except the weed bro.. when ur writing a song dont put something as random as that...

[KTevolved]

@Dylan808Raynes

Yeah i was trying to rhyme something else but yea my bad, but i still prob suk at rhyming i mean it didnt sound that good did it?

[Dylan808Raynes]

@KTevolved it was pretty dope weed part fucked u up like i said other then that ur ryhmes were pretty tight nice word flips btw lol

[KMunix]

The Vocal Filters, also removes the kick drum. Hip Hop - Kick = ?

[theofficialPALM]

thumbs up if you her eminem RAPPING

[Skatem93]

@theofficialPALM

why the fuck would I give you a thumbs up when the top comment already has like 100 likes and it says the exact same thing?

people are so pathetic

[theofficialPALM]

@Skatem93 because he's rapping and not singing my dear friend

[les35837]

haha so i rewrote some of this song imma be practicing for awhile but i will post it when i get it perfect gotta remember i aint trying to change it cuz it aint good cuz i love it but cuz i just got my heart broken an these lyrics i kinda relate with a bit more

[CiloBaN]

Perfect <3

[Thejacarigriffin123]

i like this

[rafaelrawr]

audacity



[Arvindkewatvideo]

nice......



[paschen2219]

you fail 

[multicelester]

thumbs up if u like eminem

[AkADarknessImmortal]

@multicelester lol

[Mariofanman100]

@multicelester

That's like saying thumbs up if you like having sex

[glambertdevil]

Thumbs up if you can hear eminem sing♥

[element115infication]

@glambertdevil hey i can hear him i think hez in the back round

[Music4YouToDie]

Cowboy

[Punkguyta]

This would be better if he wasn't a dick and encoded it at some low-ass bit-rate before he uploaded it. Seriously people, are we still in 1999 and using 128kbit mp3 codecs? Seriously? Fuck off.

[pllmall]

@Punkguyta dude calm down, some people don't know about that

[H3Y0o]

lalalalalalalalalalala dadadadadadadadadadada deedeedeedeedeedeedeedeedeedee­ dududududududududu ohohohohohohohohohohohohoh hohohohohohohohohohohohoho weeweeweeweeweewee ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah moomoomoomoomoomoomoomoo

[Thenottyboy1]

This makes the song better, because I feel like he's leaving... and i have to strain my ears to get more...

[dragonflamekyle1]

eye haer ham

[TheSuperenergi]

EMIN3M just listen

[Alyssongbc]

quem conseguiu ouvir a voz do eminem la do fundo ja um joinha aew ^^

[187REDCLOUD]

every time you come around im space bound for you hart in my mind its so dark this love i hope we could start im falling apart just wish we could sit in the park and talk baby cant you see you my only lady you know im fucking crazy is that why you hate me look you know im nothing like an angery crook try to hit you up on face book douse my self wit liter fullid you yellin dont do it fuck this you the only one i miss

[TheJosephJinx]

Everyone stop posting your shitty verses on here lol

[carenyourock]

If he really is singing the shower he sounds ever hotter in the shower then he does in the studio x)

[EminemDrDRE100]

WHEN WE TOUCH i see u depressed i know theres nothing but hate and distress the past is gone this the present now im sorry 4 wat i did u mean the world 2 mean girl my hearts nothing but yours

[KillerB46]

i am a white guy lol

[JayyMmms]

we touch I feel your agony, eye to eye I see the misery!

cause of all the insecurity and jealousy all that lays inside of me..

emotional I ve been, depression and all the guilt, all the frustration that has been built!

to create this monster that I am now!

end the life before i'm feared with a 44 scoped ranged, how?

just take the sight you see of me and make it clear with a pow! NOW!

Im not worthy enough to live another damn day...

[dinoraumazor]

What program did u use to kill the voices? its pretty good

[willstaruss22]

i feel alive for the first time in a long time, no one gonna put me down today or ever again, ima take this moment and sing u a song from my heart, ready set go im so high in the sky never gonna explode, keep mvin forward u worth it, i wish u the best just like all the rest, doesnt matter if u fail the test cus u tried ya best, u give me strength to move forward thanks :)

[wrestlingvideos5]

I thought this was instrumental, why is there singing in this?

[Blackrev0lt]

Why not remake the beat?? U know the sample i assume?

[JayePeaVlogs]

Thumbs up if you can hear the msn alert at 0:23 xD

[CHILLEDKAHLIL]

@KTevolved yo the world is your's/ but only if you learn to dream first of course/ make all bet's on the right horse/ and when you don't win and your voice get's hoarse from screaming and contour shun just twisted dreaming it be seeming that your teaming and there leaving and the hater's scheming just keep on living envision your unique incision and when the world makes you crazy driven don't be lazy just tell your baby to take me and don't faze me and keep the life in a powerF strive stay alive

[joshjet2oo]

im gonna open my chest stab it with a fucking steel knife then my heart out on it squeeze it until there is no life stop tryna fuck with my lfe ill fucking murder ur asses then put that gun to my head cause i cant deal with the sadness tryna take away the rope away from mes like tryna deal with my madness dont try to help me with this shit cause this stuff always happens

[MMURevamped]

(insert rap here)

[undercovermyownworld]

im walking down this road nobody knows me im alone

but i keep thinking about you when i look at the starts i never get over you

i gived you my heart and now you told me you dont want me

but i cant forgot you cuz youre in my heart when i walk around in the rain

i still see youre face i told you i still like you but you told me you dont care and

its not a good idee now ive got to go one with out you i never get over you :$

[thomasballer64]

you feel me cause feel u i needa tell you the truth your to amzing got gazing in the sky i feel high of exctasy when you stand stand next to me so i feel so free flyin straight into life debt needa take sec to light a cigeret cuz i bet when i get comfronted ima sweat cause i love you to much dont fret to hit me you needa send me in the right direction and to not get an erection every hit i take cause it might be a mistake to get high the nxt time im not guna lie when i look into your Is

[ForgottenUchiha726]

this is just his voice drowned in the rhythm. so this isnt an instrumental.

[Stickgoncraz]

@Stickgoncraz *PT 2* You don't deserve this damn face. Lemme take it off fo gods sake. Your a disgrace, opinions, lets face it, yours are just shit. You fucking hate my taste? So, I listen to Eminem & Chelsea Grin, its mine, your fake! Wannabe punk-ass bitch. Go bully Marshall! He'll fuckin' beat you till your blazed. Hold on, lemme piss you off. Thats better, now lemme push you off, this nonstop bridge. You already got ready, thanks. Have a nice day, bitch. GOODBYE MR Hate. I don need no chorus

[AlphaBreeze]

@Stickgoncraz All you can do is swear, bad rap.

[Stickgoncraz]

@AlphaBreeze I can do other things, I just get bored sometimes & make really offensive lyrics. I made some other decent ones that I can't remember anymore, lol.

[Homersimpsonsfanful]

(PART 2) while you flaunt your fleeces, im stuck with my friends, this broken heart cannot be mend, ed, just cause im not crying doesnt mean im okay, would it kill you to say hey, Once in a while to say, at least one word, try to make things okay, left with me, to cope with these feelings that leave me in the dust, this thing was never lust, true love it was, but i guess its nothing much, to play with if you hate me that much....

5 months later it still hearts. show me somthing for my effort.

[Homersimpsonsfanful]

We touch, theres no rush, i feel, nothing much, the love, has gone to rust, but, you hope there's somthing left, sorry cant hear you, im deaf, nothing left, but the hate you left, it was YOU who avoided me, it was YOU who deployed that strike on my heart, nothing like a toy dart, might of well been a bullet, no body knows the pain i have gone through, no body knows the shame i have gon to do, just to get over someone as ridiculous as you. My heart in pieces,

[robloxianmaster]

I would put up a rap but I don't wanna risk people stealing it because it's too good :)

[InfinityArch]

lol you guys all suck at writting raps

[moodini99]

'Insert shitty, generic lyrics here':

[breakthetrend0]

i have never loved, but always lost, to worried to trust, gotta get it through my head, to late to forfeit i must, but i can never tell you, what would you think? cos i am on the brink, no second chances right now, this is all i got, till i lie down to rot, your wearin the crown, queen of the town, i see you differently, but the guys just fuck you around,

[tmsreds05]

eminemmm

[AmitChakrabartiMusic]

0:15 is where it staarts

[theheat151]

Besides REM's "Drive", what other classic rock song does this song sound similar to?

[andyelgrand0]

@theheat151 hotel california

[theheat151]

@andyelgrand0 Yes, you are correct.

[MrPersonManXIII]

@andyelgrand0 hotel alpha

[ve3prd]

what just happend let me remind u befor u get flatend just as we started to clend u thoght this kid was ur friend but towords the end ur hole life just started to bend all i ever do is lend u allways take and pretend well things are gunna start to change i dont even ask for anything in exchange i think i gotta start reaching for my range and start stepin out of this cage it's time for everyone to start acting there age ..........by:Andrew LaHaise

[peachy0095]

i came from an all time high but im at my all time low i was so happy but now iam so cold so upset i wanna keel over i fold i give up i played my cards i came so far but too loose it all everything i feel so small and i drop and i fall with every teardrop every scar because of her she had my heart

[kickinitfan1414]

if u listen closlley u can hear him

[Jkurupt]

@kickinitfan1414 u are right i ken hear him

[OdranoeLDj2]

@kickinitfan1414 that's why this is made with audacity.

[agnieszka123ization]

you may hear more of beat without eminem sining so it cool but there are beople sinnig in that beat so that is just rubbish i whant to hear more beat.

thanks

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[bleachndnaruto]

wow

its eminem singing in streets all alone

[Tod2Productions]

Thumbs up if you can here eminem still =3

[MrEhbaw]

I Still Hear Akons Voice Who Ever It Is =.=

[way2sexy4u1]

I Can Hear Eminem .. Or I Dont Know It Was Your Mom Moaning At Might While You Were Recording The Video -.-'

[BJJisLove]

PART 2

when she walks by, my heart races goes berserk,

she controls my heart, and how much i get hurt,

its like she chooses if im a diamond or dirt,

and so i flirt, hopin she picks me, cmon baby please,

ill do anything for u, you got me beggin on my knee's

my hearts on lock, and she's playin with the keys

i know this girl, she is the woman of my dreams,

and i think to myself, maybe god did hear all my screams,

[BJJisLove]

PART 1

i hear this song called "space bound"

about a guy who feels drowned,

how he keeps lookin for a girl, but one just cant be found,

i think about, how perfect my girl is, she wears a crown,

atleast thats how i make her feel when she's around,

id rip out my heart for her, throw myself to the curb,

id do anything for her, if she'd just fuckin call me hers,

i try to explain it, but i get lost of words,

fuck butterflies, my stomach only gets birds,

[ddtdth]

(part 2)dont even think for a second, pull out a bottle of vicodin and vallium your stomach craves for more,so you go dope with it i'll take a hammer and hit it.,or just a dagger and slit wait i got a rope too why not just choke onto it now dugs the flow through my veins haha by the power of grey skull,i am superman man i see faces in air hi momma i dady hi dede where the fuck are we,why are we flying like this but then i see some things my mommas cryin my daddys denyin im dyin

[ddtdth]

(part 1)what hapens when this happens, you are beaten and told,"you're out of breath you are cold" then these emotions they flow in frozen as snow over that volcano inside you when it grows you wanta cry but you wont,tears in your eyes but you hold its all fucked up now it sucks,you go shake hands with him congratulate him and then run back to the lab again tears roll down both of your cheeks what about the fun in the game,it was all lies now it seems as if i was never playin'

[SwaggaInk]

People On Here Write To The Full Song....But Dont Record It...smh

[bigjoker125]

@SwaggaInk i know right ? then people go on here stealing lyrics and shit haha

[chonsay33]

im a spacebound rocketship and your hearts the moon..... and im aiming right at you babe......

[reggiessidekick]

(3/3) the flame inside of me keeps on burning,

we hold hands, the worlds stop turning,

us two together hoping and praying,

someday we will both be saying

for sickness and in health,

til death do us part,

til this world falls apart,

as i jump in this ship, strap in my seat,

coming to tell you i love you..cuz imma

[reggiessidekick]

(2/3) now im sitting here goin insane. cuz we just had our first kiss. 3 years late, my worst wish. my heart is sinking knowing i missed out on 3 years of my life. because of this damn knife. stabbing my heart. telling me we will never be apart. of each others lives. i wish they were lies. making me cry.i don't know why. but when i look in your eyes. i'm high. floating in the sky. knowing that when i die. you'll be by me side. bonney and clyde, cuz a love like ours would never die,

[reggiessidekick]

(1/3) 3 years. a lifetime apart.never knew it could be so dark. you never should ran out on me. you knew he was bad, endin you up with a degree. in mom. 101. cuz he got you pregnant leaving you on your own. making it impossible for us to ever be together. we could have made it last forever. our dreams fucking shattered. our friendship no longer mattered. first girl to hear "i love you". you were my fuckin boo. i promised you. i would do anything. take a bullet, protect you from the rain.

[PsasClan]

you came into my life when i was going to die

you helped me write these words when i was tounge tied

bringing me back to the top when i forgot how to fly

i couldnt get your signals like i lost your wifi

still checking my phone just to see if you replied

then i start to read it tear drops slide down from my eyes

little did i know that the last text was a good bye.

[JoeAllcott]

ill do whatever it takes, trust me girl i know my place

providing for you just to see that smile light up on your face

theres so much more love for me to show, you've only just had a taste

just the hors d'evours and now ill move on and start to serve the drinks

baby you're the one and trust me imma hold onto you for sure

im not a coward whose just gonna let you walk right out of the door

i hold on to your arms and my chest you do shove

its in peril but im like cheryl so gotta fight for this love

[brewster234]

sounds like eminems singin the song in the shower:P

[fierytwins]

@brewster234 must be a large bathroom, check out the echo!

[H1RSCHY]

@brewster234 he is just flipping polarity on one of the tracks, he isnt actually making an instrumental. thats why it sounds like garbage

[brewster234]

@H1RSCHY fuck off.. you make one?

[H1RSCHY]

@brewster234 i go to school for this. lol i would do a remake instead... kus you can still hear the reverb on eminems vocals. anyone can split it to two tracks and then flip one out of phase. i dont mean to be a jerk about it im just saying that the way you did it cuts out a lot of the kick and snare as well. I use this method to get the feel for what instruments are in the mix, but this isnt something thats meant to be used to produce.

[Crossfeet606441]

@brewster234 FTW!!!

[brewster234]

@Crossfeet606441 im not 10, i dont use text language, what you say kid?:L

[Crossfeet606441]

@brewster234 I say: For The Win. Plus I'm 17.

[thisdudefromwhere2]

walkin alone on this road the cold wind hits my face nd breaks/noone here to help/even though i made it here with the shit i had to dealt/but yu dont even know the feeling i felt in this love that i fell in/loves a crime and imma felon/charged with shit that i didnt even did/why should i be happy when u didnt even love me?/ u just dont see how crazy i was in ur love/got to the point where its killin me i never undreamed of/ all u did was shove me in the dirt but i never quit nd got right back up

[poloX1220]

i hear eminem in the background

[rasengun99]

@poloX1220 thats when he is humming in the song its a backround voice included in the actual song

[serweed]

AMAZING!!

[crazytrent01]

I lift up in outter space direction im being abucted,its ugly looking et or something,it feels strange never felt so violated ive been taken away to a diffrent planet i feel violated of my privacy,they tooken me to a new vaccancy,cloaked with secret identities fucken panzys,

[DanteDevil2727]

U can still hear eminem. but good job anyways. better than anything i could do

[zachary12220]

Slowly, I'm dead without you, life has no meaning, this ceiling

Is invisable, as I try to take steps forward, but I'm reeling

In reverse, death is calling me with perserverance,

He's extatic and all I need is a bullet for clearance

[zachary12220]

There's a pain in my eyes, and I can see that you're lonely

I understand why you don't want me, I'm a liar and a phony

But I'd give what left of this thing that I call my person

'Cause I've learned my lesson, and the rest I'm still learnin'

I want you, I'm not afraid to say I love you Brittney

You're more important to me then January, my own birthing

I'd rather see you smile and know that your happy and smiling

Then live my life at all in solitude, depressed wanting death and dying

[zachary12220]

Beauty is your eyes I could never despise

Evil was my lies I'd never hurt you, compromise

Was all I could offer, after I did what I said I wouldn't

But I couldn't fix anything, so fuck it I'm wooden

And burning up, your loves hot and it's burning right through me

If I could fix it I could, all I can think is to shoot me

Put a bullet right through me, let your grasp drop loosely

Because you are the love of my live, that's the truth it hurts, see cuz I'm

[zachary12220]

I met you on the frontier of a high school, junior year

Stole my heart at first sight, hesitation for a mirror

To look at, see my own emotions explodin', implodin'

My hard shell I was trapped in, it's exterior was slowly erodin', exposin

The red of my heart returned from the darkness, embark this

My blood was flowing again, like my flow and it's sharpness

Insane was my mind, and so I ripped out my soul

But I fucked it all up and now all I can feel death's toll

[ThapowerfulOne]

How do i find this song on youtube

[MVP6941]

@ThapowerfulOne ?

[Wong3112]

very good but dunno.. lacks some bass.... some weight, u know what i mean? andeminem singin in the background is not much of a problem if you rap over it

[canoobis]

like the 7th seal Im broken holdin the moment hoping your commin back through that open door, but Im chokin knowin the tears will be flowin when the truth hits my core, I know I made mistakes efforts gone blown up in my face and now that your gone I feel like im disgraced, is there any one up in this human race that could ever take your place, or is it as I feared and Ive been sheared to a lone wolf for this race, my only company my tears engulfed with memories of your face....

[CSMT800IC53]

You can here him singing in the background

[MVP6941]

This was exactly was i was looking for thanks so much!

[volcomfan09]

The best version that I could find, Thanks!

[Manchintanater]

watch?v=nAd4U1OYiug

[reckless204]

probably one of best Instrumental's for Space Bound that I heard on youtube, good job keep it up I'm a download it.

[merker]

u can hear him in the back back round

[MistaBluMagic]

instead of waiting on people to send u downloads, which is never promising , you should download These two programs "Youtube Downloader" and "My Video Converter". Now you can be in control of what you wanna download off of Youtube

[360FTW666]

im back again, dont worry i still aint the same/ i got rid of it all, money, price and the fame/ i was miles in the wrong/ too damn far in the game/ i just dont no what to do/ i wish i was back on that plane/ to new jersey/ and even thought it hurts me/ i wanna be back to my wife even though she dont deserve me/ but i know i cant have it all/ trust breaks and falls/ never felt so good now im standing tall/ somone finish it? or something i dont know:L

[jopinheiro88]

@360FTW666 What's up, you feeling torn? I felt like that before

But don't ever again have the audacity to say you souldn't be born

How would your lady feel if you weren't there I guess

you need to get something real

And if you take a look back

You think straight

You'll realize right away

What you and her have for each other inspire me to this day

So don't say can't name

Some bright moments, if you really can't it's your f***ing blame

[ConVerzRapstool]

i also hear Eminem in the background =D ... US Blaster headphones :P

[MattsBaby151]

uhm i can hear eminem in the background wtf?!

[ayyachris]

What instrument did they use?

[FrostmourneFK]

I can't take it no more, struck me to the core/ like lightning, it was a flash/ hot love, all in the past/ don't touch me, don't tell me, you love me, kiss my ass/ I played your game and you hurt me/ hot knife cuts flesh, you broke me/ I been through the ringer, and this you already knew/ But you decided to play it, three chances, you blew/ now take a look in my eyes, darlin, and tell me what you see/ No love for you, replaced by love for me/ Too proud to be played again...

[FrostmourneFK]

I told you, we can't be friends / You already lost the game, honey, give it up, just let it end/ but I take another look at you, and I feel the rush again...

[FrostmourneFK]

@FrostmourneFK That would probably go well as the second, or last verse.

[JaMarcusfromphilly]

(PART 2)u throw my heart into spirals/and deep inside of me, the thought of u, ignites a fire/that lets me do unbelievable things i never thought possible/in my head ur voice constantly rings/but it kills me cuz deep down i know/that this is it this friendship is as far as it goes/wish i could go back in time before all these problems arose/back to a simpler time, like the beggining of summer/we was havin so much more fun, but the u was like "fuck ya"/thats when i realized "shit man i love her"

[JaMarcusfromphilly]

(PART 1)yo i always wonder what my life could be like/if for jus 1 brief second i could get u off of my mind/cant even sum all my true feelings up in this rhyme/uve got me at a loss for words jus call me a mime/now i know youve been stressin bout these past couple of days/its gettin to me too, keep on jus lyin awake/up at night/causin fright/but in spite/i jus might/help u out cuz seein u for me is like gettin payed/even tho no matter wat i do i know i aint gettin laid/but thats not all i desire

[MrGigitygigity123]

nah man i noticed it too

[r4p2ast4r]

some comments on my lyrics would be nice pls, only just staretd writin so want some pointers :)

[r4p2ast4r]

u make me unfold, in this world I call home, stop me feeling stone cold/U never messed me around, wen im lost, u make me found, at any leap or a bound/My hearts under attack, im surprised it aint cracked,u stop me dead in my tracks./I’l do watever it takes, to keep u safe in this place, never leave u to long, only with u i’m strong/even tho it hurts me to say, that im feeling this way, i just want u to stay, every hour of the day/but y does it feel like im dreaming, when i see that ur breathing.

[JordanDeLeon001]

you should get ym banger by lil wayne

[bobsaget832]

yea this is almost perfect but i can hear eminem. and the drums arent there in the first verse