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  • I thought this series was ur best out of all of the others. And I hope u do more of these. Btw I love the theme song. Keep up the good work!!!!

  • This is my 4th time reading this over. XD I read it when I feel like Demi in life..

  • Aww their brother died =/

  • omgcomebackplease

  • i didn't even know what fan fiction was until i accidentally came across this video like 3 years ago. i've tried to look for other stories to compare to this and none have come close. this is the most amazing thing i've ever read. i keep reading it over and over everytime i have a break from school. i stay up all night reading it on summer vacations, like i will tonight. you're probably not reading this but please come back. it would literally change my life...which might be pathetic but true.

  • reading this all over again because my love for this is so immense. <3

  • I love this series. I cant tell you how many times I have watched it. Its so good. I love it!!! :) <3

  • Come Back please!

  • u need to come back already, you are the best writer on youtube, come on

  • I'm sad you left :( i hate that your gone but i've always Loved Jemi alot but reading this made me love Jemi even more.

  • This makes me scared to know that Tom Cruise is following me on Twitter. :O

  • i love this series <3

  • Awhsomee loved it! :D

    I'm making a Jemi Movie called "Fall For You" too! xD

    Pleasse if youu have time, can you check it out? :)

    thanks! =D

    ~ILJB4E

  • aww.. why does she have to have hiv? id rather have her have like a tumor or something.

  • man joe is actully a jerk in this series

  • cool

  • I don't think I ever read a story that used actual actors/actresses as parents and teachers....It's a good thing, though. I loved it. Sorta feel bad for Demi in the begining. It's horrible how David treats her.... I hope he starts being nice to her.

  • Mrs Fey this is a waste of time...

    HAHAHAHHA :)

  • i love your intro ! its amazing hahaha i love your songs there awesome and this is interesting! haha but in my opinion i like nelena better than niley but its fine i can live with it :)

  • aww poor nick. is this like a jemi/nelena love story or a jemi/niley story

  • I think I read something like this in quizilla..Imma go check..anyway I really LOVE this series.

  • omg if i were new and i was supposed to say something about myself and a fricken guy started sayibng that i'd be like "okay you, first of all SHUT THE FUCK UP, or are you stupid to understand that buddy boy and second of all im a little nervous so why dont you say something about yourself while i hide in the corner and laugh at you!" lol that be fun to say

  • This is kewl! I feel so bad for Demi! Theyre all so mean to her! Im gonna have to go kick David, and Joes asses!

  • david is a jerkkkk

  • ok im just starting to read your serires and im going to comment and rate on almost every one of them i already subscribed and im very excited to read this series!

  • LOVE IT!!!!

  • Im re-reading your series :)

  • i feel bad for demi.

  • 3th time I'm gonna read the series xD

  • 3th? you mean 3rd? Lol. :]

  • 4th time im reading this series!!! awesome!! The best on YT.

  • aww..aweesome vid but the intro is kinda long =] but awesoome anyway

  • why is the teacher from mean girls in this? 3:15 ?

  • OMG! this was freakin amazing!!! joe's such a jerk though

  • my 7th time watching

  • Gosh you make Joe seem like a jackass in here. Poor Demi. WELL I LOVE IT SO FAR!

  • i love what you wrote in the description that made me realize this should be a movie

    with joe and demi

    AND THAN THAY CAN SEE THEIR PERFECT FOR EACHOTHER!!!!

    yyaayy

    lol

    and you would sooo be the directer

  • i love this series soo much!

    this is my second time watching it!

  • im rewatching the series

  • I Realllllllllly hope its Nelena NOT Niley!!

    5/5 stars!

  • 0:30 thats on gmtv

  • Loved it !

    Favorited it !

    AHH!! haha.

  • haha tom cruise...

  • do you use sony vegas 9 or something else because i know how to work sony vegas i just dont know how to upload it everytime i do it,,it always says request failed or something or andthis seems like a saddish happyish movie i like it

  • love it love it love it its so great im addicted already :)

  • is this gonna be niley or nelena?

  • it should be Niley

  • U kno....i have already watched the whole series....but i feel like watchin it again......idk.....i am goin to watch the 1st ep and then watch ep 28 the one u just made....well i already watched ep 28 so now i am goin to watch the 1st ep.....ur series.....there just so awsome...its like the name of the series and the # of ppl who watch it just draws me into the story to want to know wuts so good about ur series....i do that with others series to...ur series r just so awsome...i.....i...idk!!!!!

  • omg!!! THANK U !!!!!!!!!!!!!! somebody finally noticed joe was being a complete asshole. wen david wud have hand me his books i wud throw them away. but of couse...thats just me!

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  • omg :] i loved this so much! this is really amazing . i knew you're a great writer, from your niley series . but since the niley story is coming to an end soon & you're posting this again, i thought i could check it out . & i don't regret it, haha :] .

  • my opinion is that it should be that miley likes nicks ....but nick likes selena......so plz make it nelena......well thats my opinion but idk about other ppl

  • i cry when i see this!!!!

  • watching this again love it :) lol

  • i love it it sometimes makes me cry! lol great!

  • Ohmygodd. This is good BUT it reminds me of Behind These Hazel Eyes written by iHolleeee. Joe's a jerk, He's dating Taylor, David's his friend, He's an ass to Demi, He doesn't really like Taylor, Nick is all quiet, etc. The only differences I noticed were she's adopted instead of cancer, she's the new girl. Okay nevermind it is ALOT like BTHE. :/

  • omg i love it amazing job!!!

    This story reminds me of the movie "A walk to remember" like Landon is a jerk to Jamie & then she has cancer and he gets hurt about!! Ugh joes being a complete ASS though!!!!

  • I know this is like my favorite series EVER

  • loved it!

  • i cant believe joes a jerk in the episode. and i cant believe jason is in there hes hot

  • i really love your jemi storys and i wish to see new ones. i love them more than the niley stories. please do more of them :)

  • I LOVE this series SO much!!! I watched (S;1)1- (S;2) eight times because this is the best Jemi series EVER!!!! BTW, When R you going 2 make (S;2) 26? I've been Dieing 2 see it!!!

  • you spelled haylie wrong

  • haha

    joe is like his complete opposite when hes in the nileys :P

    and so is demi

    if he talked to her like that in the other series, she'd hit him with a shoe :P haha

  • haha, I love the part when selena was like : I'm a black belt in karate

    I luv these series

  • Wow...I can't remeber the last time I saw this Video.I love though!Ahmazing

  • lol me 2

  • i always watch every episode more than three times because this series is the greatest series of all the jemi series on youtube!

  • Love ur series!

  • i love this song

  • SAD!!!!!!!! :( :(

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  • what did they say

  • to who??

  • AH-MAZING!!!!!

  • hmm.. I decided to watch this again (:

    and Selena pwns in this!

    never knew :O

  • i love this series

  • It was AH MAZING!!! I loved it:) aaww poor Demi, & Kevin died? that's sad:(

  • SPOILER! grrrrrrrrrrrrr lol just started watching LOVE it good work from wat ive see. Always love a good tear jerker here and there

  • loved it...x

  • idk y? but the intro made me cry lol

  • I'm gonna read this entire series all over again.

    I'm gonna miss it.

    :')

  • Me too. :]

  • ME TO !!!

  • UH-MAZING! that's all i can say. i loved it. lol. i tried to watch it before and stopped in the middle of the episode and didn't ahve time to get back to it. now i do.

  • omg i love it so far

    and wat is the name of the song at the beginning?

  • fall for you

  • who is it by? and thnx

  • it is by secondhand serenade nd ur welcome

  • thnx again :D :D :D

  • ur welcome :-)

  • love this!

    i have watched the trailer, and it made me cry in the end! you're awesome!

  • nelena!

    PLEASE PLEASE!

  • good ep!

  • you're an awesome writer!!

    i loved it :)

    ppl can be cruel. *coughs*joe

    haha lol

  • nelena plzzz

  • this was good!

  • aww... it makes me cry joe is so a jerk he's bad :(

  • i started watching this series last night nd didnt goto bed till 4 am it is addicting as nick's drugs lol i cant wait till # 25

  • nelenaaaaaaa please

  • im watching it all over again because it so good it made me cry

  • joe is so mean! x-(

  • I want Nelena Please

  • you should REALLY continue

    xoxolyraxoxo

  • omgg i love itu better not stop this or ill kill you....jkjk

    love it keep up the good jub=S

  • Ahaha.

    I love this.

    Selena is so sweet.

    Poor Nick...

    Joe's a meanerrr. Haha. xD

    I looove it :D

  • please continue making this story! :) i love this!!!

  • this is soo sad

  • thanks.......tthats really gr8 of u.....

  • I LUV IT......even one of my bffs is a hiv postive.....i wont let her die...;(

  • soo sad

  • Best series of life!:)

  • Aaahh, I love that you used "Mrs. Fey" lol :)

    love the songs you used too!

  • OMG i just read the part where they say that kevin died...that is so sad.....

  • i LOVED itt.;)

  • Awh Poor Kevin :(

    AHH im going to watch the

    next one :)

  • This is depressing.

    But good.

    <33

  • I watched this again because I didn't continue. LOVE IT! <3

  • OMG!! is kevin the one who's dead?!?!

    awesom story im like already tearing up

  • Whats Hiv?

  • and sexually transmitted disease that gives you AIDS, which eventually kills you.

  • omj, i already know what will happen, they fall in love n he finds out bout the HIV and so now i am crying my ass off!!! i need a tissue *goes to get tissue* Damn it! i used up to whole box! :( :(

    LOJ

  • oh i love this!

    :D

  • love the vids but sometimes the colors of yhe writing is kinda hard 2 read

  • BESTTTT aggrees with jb4..yeah<333

  • this is the best series on youtube

  • geez im already crying!

  • i lovve ur series

  • yea what program do you use ??

  • What Program do you use?

  • i ove this song

  • AWESOME!! TINA FEY!!!! and at 4:43 i thought it said looks down at her ass. LOL!!!

    PeAcE.lOvE.jEmIsTrY<3

  • i luved it!! as good as the niley stories!!

  • This is AWESOME! But Kevin died?? :(

    :( He's my fave Jonas.

    Great story though (Y)

  • wat is the intro song??

    and btw great series!

  • the intro song is fall for you by second serenade omg great song!!

  • yaaa first episode

  • DRAMA!!! yippee! kevin died? SOB, and da bestest stars r mean but still LUV it, i heard miley dies, :'( oh well, shes my favorite but its ok!

  • kep it up grl

  • Oh My God!! This is sooooooo sad.. the song fall for you really gets to me for sum reason.. You really have a gift..!!

  • woooow u have a writing stories GIFT

    ur awsome and I LOVE THIS STORY ALSO NILET STORY IT'S AMAZING !! I LOVE THE STARRING TOO!

  • I must say, I have seen a lot stories posted up on youtube but this is the first one that seems to have some talent behind it.

    Good Job =)

  • Wow....Im not aNiley fan cause I a Nelena chick so I dont read your other story but thi one is awesome sooo far!!!!! Continue soon please you are a great writer and its very difficult writing about this tipe of things lke being abysed and all of that!!

  • omgggg, this series is freaking AWESOME! and sadd :[

  • wow..usually the first ep is crappyishh but this was amazing x]

  • lol i know but TheRealTz12895's videos are never crappy. She is truly an amazing writer

  • Ok first time watching this series and its AMAZING ahhh cant wait for number two...going to watch it now!!!

  • I love this series!!!!!!!!!! It's the best one out there!!!

  • this series is amazingggggggggggggg

  • loved it selena is funny in this 1

  • I freaking love your series!! You're an amazing writer!! You should like write a series on the television or something!!

  • i would tottaly watch it!!!!!!

  • Me 2!! And I know a lot of other people would too.

  • hi i like the series....so far =]

    the starring part was ah-mazing!! best 1 yet...haha i kno random..but still very professional!! =]

  • i love this series! well i wondered about jemi and HIV so i reserched some symptoms of HIV... chronic yeast infections or thrush (yeast infection of the mouth) Fever and/or night sweats Easy bruising Bouts of extreme exhaustion Unexplained body rashes Appearance of purplish lesions on the skin or inside mouth Sudden unexplained weight loss Chronic diarrhea lasting for a month or more --Just wanted you to know what she was up against! kmbskb
  • Amazing!!

    Best series so far!

  • this is the best series ever!

  • wat the heck y is he being such a jerk he was nicer in a niley story no offence

  • theiir Dad is a vjerk later on i think

  • loved this episode, but Joe was such a jerk xD poor demi!

  • Oooh this is good. I love the Niley series alot. I wasn't so sure about this, but you proved me wrong (: Im hooked. <33

  • yoo ! ;D ! HAHA ! well imma ask something , where do you edit you video ? it look good ! &&& nice stoory (: anywaaaays COMMENT PWEASE ;)

    - teeeaam JEMI<33

  • Sony Vegas

  • amazing!!!! i should slap ever1 who is being mean2 por demi

  • the trailor looks like its a soap opera. hehe.

  • Wow Joe is a jerk.

  • Poor Nick...

  • I <3 THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!

  • okay i know i said that i wouldn't like this because it takes place in a school.....but i really like it! good job! you're a g