Last, but not least, the thing I think you should ask yourself is: Does anyone really want to watch a 4 minute movie about a guy destroying his alarm clock? Plus, an alarm clock is technicaly not a robot.
See you around and good luck with your next movies, I really think you are good at doing them, you just have to let your film-making skills mature. And youtube is a nice platform you can use towards that end:)
And that was my positive critique. Now, as far as the negative critique goes, I must say the movie is nice, bue it could use some more editing in some places. The last music, for instance, starts with like a 2s delay.
It somehow looks like you were too eager to post the movie on youtube, you couldn't wait until it was 100% ready. But why would you do that? You lose quality, you lose fans.
I think it is a good idea, overall, I really do. I like the music, the way you fit it into the movie, I like the taping and the cuting.
You even avoided showing up in the alarm clock's reflexion when slow-motion recorded it. That's cool, man :)
I think you're getting much better, and now have a bigger control over the programs you use and the things you can do with it. The way the clock-punching scene was recorded shows that preety well - I really liked that scene, by the way.
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zezima12121212121212 3 years ago
Part 3/3 (damn 500 character limit!)
Last, but not least, the thing I think you should ask yourself is: Does anyone really want to watch a 4 minute movie about a guy destroying his alarm clock? Plus, an alarm clock is technicaly not a robot.
See you around and good luck with your next movies, I really think you are good at doing them, you just have to let your film-making skills mature. And youtube is a nice platform you can use towards that end:)
jumbalare 3 years ago
Response for the part 2:
the music is supose to be like that, i'm making fun of "There Will Be Blood". If you saw it, you would no better!
Response for part 3:
Like i said, in the title i´m making fun of the same movie! But thanks for your posts lad!
theguywhomakesmovies 3 years ago
Part 2/2
And that was my positive critique. Now, as far as the negative critique goes, I must say the movie is nice, bue it could use some more editing in some places. The last music, for instance, starts with like a 2s delay.
It somehow looks like you were too eager to post the movie on youtube, you couldn't wait until it was 100% ready. But why would you do that? You lose quality, you lose fans.
jumbalare 3 years ago
I think it is a good idea, overall, I really do. I like the music, the way you fit it into the movie, I like the taping and the cuting.
You even avoided showing up in the alarm clock's reflexion when slow-motion recorded it. That's cool, man :)
I think you're getting much better, and now have a bigger control over the programs you use and the things you can do with it. The way the clock-punching scene was recorded shows that preety well - I really liked that scene, by the way.
jumbalare 3 years ago