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  • all friend who comment here ,i used the lyris to sing check my profile and let me know thanks all

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  • beyond my fear,theres a beautiful view i wish you're here,just me and you i found you the girl of my dreams the sun came out and brighten me with its beams when im with you i feel so warm inside this is the feeling i cannot hide we are miles away and distance apart i will always remember the day that you got my heart girl you are the world to me now im giving you my heart for free i wish you knew how much you make my day with just a single touch
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  • will you be my valentine?

    Girl Your so dam fine

    Will you ever be mine?

  • @burntoastism

    yes baby, I will be your valentine

  • loving everyday wit my wife/god sent angels this is my life/gotta make my start/ cuz in my heart/ your my world/ happy in life,my wife,my girl/everything to me/from the first day that you kissed me/passed all the hardtimez wit eachother/ told you i love you/ never leave eachother/ i'll take care of you like no other/ wit love in the air/when im wit you i jus don't care/happy in life wit you here/ right beside me in life/this is to my wife/

  • smoke ur weed while listenig to my beats

    hahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­aa

  • shit some people cant write lyrics naturally

  • AREBEATS.COM BEATS FOR SALE

  • check my version po nito english

    sear for "My Valentine rap version"

    by JuanMakalawang ft KidJoriL

    add me sa FB

    saint_rusty@yahoo.com

  • Sunshine birds chirping in the morning,so boring,picked up the phone and dialed your digitz,girl whenever im around u i fidget,i dont know why its like theres sum connection between us,theres no other girl or man that can get between us,ur beauty inspires me,maybe one day we could settle down,have 3 kids put the metal down,because ur that type of girl i love,u give me a buzz,stronger then any drug,and girl its permenant.

  • isnt this like a sean kingston beat bro?

  • Das klingt wie diese Musik aus den langweiligen Kurdischen Kindersendungen -.-

    haha =D

  • when we met, we were both ten, two little kids caught up in the moment, it started with talks, long walks, u held my hand, we would look at the stars, pick out pictures that they made in the dark, we were in love and it was true from the start, been 9 years past, and we aint fell apart, got the same feelings from the beginning, and shared some feelings that some people experiment, we always together, forever and ever, beat the hardest weather, the 3rd of november, my valentine was found forever

  • Baby I know love me, you know I love you too,

    lets get this over with and go out to dinner places,

    Ill do anything for you, u tell me and ill do it for you

    come on baby just say yes and you will like your choice

    I know it seems weird right now but in time we're allways there

    O Please just say yes, and Ill even get

    a plan that has a lambo, and a mansion in hollywood

    O I know you think its not right that Im a little wooo

    But that what yoou make me just say yeaas

    Hows that for a little song?

  • Girl, you're amazing, like someone I'll never forget/ I think I'm in love, and we only just met. Because when I look in your eyes, all troubles are gone/ You make me wanna sing, and just write a song. I feel so cold and alone, when you're not by my side/ When you fucked another guy, I sat at home and cried/ You're the reason of my depression and insomnia/ I could tear and rip you apart like fucking Bosnia. But instead, I just mourn, cry and keep moving/ After all it's me you're losing
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  • this beat is sick, motherfucking GID productions her eyes are fixed on me like sensual seduction mixed with a fine body, she's got my soul corrupted voluptuous, baby you giving me a heart attack coronary stoppage, I'm beating to a fast track lacking nothing, girl you the whole package I'm not like other guys, I'm beyond average my expansive vocabulary using words u aint understandin love at first sight, cupid shot me with a canon music without you girl is a world I cannot fathom
  • im a thief steal shit cuz im ruthless greedy in the world of confusion happy i get stuff free till god takes wat i need or is it karma wat happens to them happens to me makes me sad i lost sumthing or go to juvi an if i die i hope i go to heaven dnt wanna go to hell get exacuted or have to deal wit the devil serail killer over my leval an i want to get a mag 45 so if sumone fuk wit me they ganna die an al just kick bak drinking a beer wal hoping i see a star cuz it might be the last one there

  • i hang out in the sun hoping sum one pops a gun in the street wer thers crips an bloods in the hood just getting high in the sunshine lookin in the sky enjoying my life

    reminds me of partying wit dis bich had a nice ass big tits fukin in the bed

    dat was my first time in the six grade

    now look at me 9th grade all fuked up just flunked

    i still dnt care im a juggalo kikin bak drinkin my faygo an if i see a juggalette out there give me the signal im here im a mfc

    clown love to all the clown Gs

  • (Part 1) Forever Thats what were gonna be, When were together Theyre just gonna have to see, That were neva gonna sever This love will always last, Were just gonna be like that People ask arent you going too fast (And) I say we aint living in the past Baby I loved you and I still do I care about you and I can too Be the one man in your life So honey wont you be my wife
  • (Part 2)

    Smile for me baby, The one that always shines

    The one that makes a mark, And is always in my mind

    I love every moment that weve survived

    When I feel your touch Im just revived

    Cant believe that I was so deprived

    All of my life until I found you

    A perfect match for me to choose

    You will always be my boo

    And we are never going to lose

  • The heavens sent Valentine It was lik the 7 signs

    I sen those lips tht ass I sen that body

    Soon to mine Tht voice al the woman dey sound lik nobdy

    Loved u, til tht day u said fuck u

    I nu baby, How could u? Taking showers Its humid

    Half past da hour, I kinda feel stupid, everybdy lookin

    Cant take it I devour, No longer tht cupid, a lil shookin

    Grabd my pistol, came home to hear u moan

    Ran in the room n put 1 in her dome, right by the phone

    Marriage papers n a ring, is ther sumthin wrong??

  • K so How do you lease this beat?

  • very talented

  • everytime i hear this/makes me want to write

    one..write a poem..write a song-to my love

    be the man i never thought i could be/always

    wanting you so very badly/caress you..to hold

    you/and never let go of you/cause boo you are

    my on and only true.

  • Cause all the ravines can only wash away time

    But they can't erase the image I have of you in my mind

    We designed a lifetime and it was never perfect

    But we maxed its potential only cause you deserved it

    I didn't have the greatest credentials but I preserved it

    Persevered the weather and the storms that were reserved

    Reverse the engine but it's only getting us further

    Cause under the water soaked sun and the explosions in the sky

    Your sun-padded eyes will always swallow my pride

  • this sounds like music to my ears,music

    that 'll swallow up all my pain and wipe away all my tears/i have a weakness for listening for tunes such as this/makes me want to open up my heart and make real wishes/now..i'm no longer feeling sad or blue...and weather your with me or not.../remember... that i will always love you/

  • can u b my valentine cuz u know i want you my oh my i can express my feelings over and over again cuz i know we should b more than friends i know u can c i want u and i hope u want me can dis be u and me 2getha 4eva we would never seperate neva until we are mr and mrs yea imma take it that far cuz u know u hav my heart and i hope i have urs sincerly urs

  • this one i wrote especialy for you,

    i was thinkin last night of how we used to do/

    coming over early morning,i wake u up,

    fed u some breakfast you said thats enuff/

    no stoppin for me girl ima keep coming,

    next move i layed out,u said that was somthin/geantly by the arm i layed you down, kissed your body all over to up that frown/all troubles aside girl its me and you,let me show u how two lovers can do/

    on the floor u giggle and of course u flirt,

    never before,u said its your first/

  • @nine113 AAWW!!! LOVE IT!!!! ;)

  • this song makes me thinnk of wen i was in pre school and playin on da monkey bars and in the sandbox....makes me miss childhood

  • doja souljah never soba im gone off the haze but its gravy angelbaby got me stuck in a maze gettin high off the vibe and the look in her eyes got me stuck so wussup wanna go for a ride

  • Me I really like that beat and the people who critique it don't know what is sentimental music

  • listen to my beat thank you:)

    i love this one

  • watch?v=5r5pLhpmMvo

  • baby i miss u only u i think of u all the time day after day i dream night after night o how sweet dreams just cant wait until the day we meet again daddy lil baby u n mommy's lil princess u say u want a puppy on b-day well on my b-day its was ur b-day da made me the man i am now happy to have u n proud u to me was whole life da i been lookin for n found daddy loves U daddy loves U
  • this beat is tight bro....keep me updated

  • Roses are red and violet are blue

    your eyes locked on mine will blind are truth and see no clue.

    To what we do

    special sessions of passion

    and

    only kiss'en you

    Me hugen you close just to wanted to

  • On to our second activity: I rate your performance with one letter

    D+

    I appreciated your double d cups, but i didn't

    like it when you trying to get up and run

    I'm just trying to have fun

    fun to shoot sum sum in your eyes

    even if you despise not being able to see me

  • as crazy as your lyrics are lol, you actually have a lot of talent. on top of that you remind me of Eminem

  • fuckin crack your spine, now your mine forever and ever

    My homies call me clever

    I asked you to date me and you said "NEVER!"

    Now look, your crying in my bed reaching for the release lever

    I crack you in the head, now do you feel better?

    My bed sheets now are so much more redder

  • please oh please wont you be my valentine, I want you to be mine, god you're so fine. I wanna stick my 6 in your 9 its love making time, You're so hot it should be a crime to show your face in public Lets get rubbin and shovin in hot sheets hotter than an oven I wanna pull your hair Pull yours clothes off, bare, give you a long stare but beware.. i dont care if you got air or not chokedy choke
  • ya maybe stick my 9 up your 6 and release a bullet, blow your dick off like some hick with a mullet, maybe im talking too soon i do love to spoon , i could see you soon, we can sail on the lagoon spot a loon or two maybe a fuel juts me and you the sky will be blue sun shining down wont be able to frown just clown around town jump up and down go and get some food with a rad dude hes got attitude likes to get nude but dont be worry you'll get paid im just a guy who wantsto getlaid bya frenchmaid

  • haha i like the beat :))

  • how can i get this track?thanks verry nice good music

  • this was gr-8 =]

  • start at :12

    it's a Valentine day/ that's a good hollyday/ thank god i made it to this day/ that's why evry single day i wake up and pray/ Valentine it's for me and you/ baby girl just to let you know i still luv you/ i swear i don't want to loose you/ and if i do/ i be the stupid fool/ but is not going to happend think about all the time we been threw/ evrytime i look at you/ i wanna kiss you hold you hug you and the other thing to/ if my poem never ment nothin to you then for ever fuck you

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  • o.k bitch what the fuck is your problem? you fucking youtube gangster you a fuckin hater fuck off if you don't like my freestyle then why you waisted your time reading it you fucking ediot jerkoff kid don't have time to play with faggs wanna battel i bet you i beat you if you want it like that little kid

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  • now thats a true fag that shit for his man

  • hi hater by hater

  • N everybody loves your poetry,if it wasn't for you I wonder if the music world would notice me

    Freakin you like Jodeci every chance I get, just thinkin about it caressin ya feet to ya neck

    makes my hands sweat, for some odd reason my left is the best, I could tell by the way you bless me back

  • And I dream about you every time you bless a track, and everybody around me could second that

    I wonder what made you love n stay with me all these years, helpin me channel my anger, happiness and tears, showin me not to fear what they might say about what you knew was in my heart, I thank you night n day

    Even when you spill on my skin, pants pockets and book I still love you the same, Dear Pen

  • who made this song

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  • I lovveeeee this beatssz..!!

  • *Lol im not really 10 nor a little small kid*

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  • I'm living my life, no valentine My cryin', sighin, drinking this wine Shine, my life it is not alright Until I could say this one word; mine buyin time by drinking out of this bottle Never strong enough to make me happy blap slappy crappy chappy lappy laffy taffy tap me, b mi vlent1ne, rhyme, icantrhyme whine with this sad face, fine i will drink till i drop bop sock top blahblahblahblah stop okay i will stop
  • when i look into her eyez i see heavin

    we been datin ever since we were seven

    got our first kiss at age eleven

    together forever

    however.. we are clever

    she getz me warm datz i call her sweater

    whenever we together we get sunny wheather

    we would never fall for another

    cuz we know god made us to be with eachother...

    another lil freestyle i came up wit

  • alright i got one

    okay girl i like ya cherry blossom lips

    love the way you move them hips

    i love it when you crawl up next to me

    i knew that we were meant to be

    with ya smooth body like chocolate

    get a mini you in keep it in my pocket

  • got lost in another world wen i looked into her eyes

    far away from lies and fake shit i despise

    far from ties and tangles dat got me mentally strangled

    been a while yo since i seen an angel.... like the baby in the manger she knew wut she wus doin

    body language was fluent yo right then there i knew it.. i had to have you like a fluid so "do it" is what my dick told me to do and you know i spit my game cuz i dont argue with dat foo

    haha

    LIVIN DA HIGH LIFE

  • Ooh SHit nIcee Nigga lol

  • i dont usually rap love but here i go she is so real wit it if we got a problem we will deal wit it talk about how we feel wit it you love me and i love you 2 and i love hearin i let her hold my heart now she forever wearin our life is gonna be perfect...promisin and swearin it the lies dat we come thru we forever tearin it done with hearin we gonna grow old together...we forever cheerin it our love is so real we never started fearin it.. tell me wat yall think =)
  • i like it.. do u mind if i use it in my music..=)?

  • yah i dont mind...glad you liked it =)...i dont usually rap about love but glad u like it =)

  • thank=)

    if u have time

    can u make onother one.. lol =)

  • i'm yours just like you forever mine our love is to dangerous it should be known as a crime and i cannot get you outta my mind i think about you all the time when we under dat sun we forever shine we shinin to bright girl..we're gonna make em blind she opened my heart opened wide and she found love inside and lotz of pride she so sweet..shes so kind shes so smart..shes one of a kind i love you baby!!! happy valentine you like dat one?
  • yeh it is cool..=)

    .thanks again..

    .but ur first one i couldnt make it on rhyme..

    .where should i start..?

  • nice rhymes bruh

  • With every beat of my heart im sayn baby im 4real be with me believe me & always keep it real, you dont believe that im only with you you say im gettn tired & want someone new, but your close to anything but reality im accustomed to your love theirs no need for questioning, i wouldnt mess around to ruin what we have no gurl in this whole is worth a 1 nite stand, no other gurl can make me feel like you are you dnt hav 2 wrry im in love wit all my heart, bein always only yours til i Rip you n me

  • together is the reason why i breath dont ever for a second think your gonna learn a lesson bein blessed your the best for my life woithout a question, your always in my heart and thoughts girl you should know ill look you in the eyes and asssure youll never be alone, ill tell you all the time your mine your gonna be my wife treatin you the best in life tellin you the truth with no lies, ill ppick you over money as long as im alive moneys temporarily happiness with you its a lifetime. is dat good

  • rate the new one i just made =)...hope you like it!!!

  • when I look into ya eyes, I can see the passion.... cum drippin down ya thighs, when we be smashin.... all i'm askin', if you could just understand, that i made a mistake, but I'm just a man..... were not perfect- and thats for certain, instead of listenin to me, you listened to the serpents... fillin yeah head with so many lies, i just want to die..... they're just envious, cause they cant get a guy, now i wonder why...
  • nigga u got issues

  • suck my meat.

  • stfu

  • i look up in the sky, and i see a star

    then i look into your eyes, and see who you really are

    girl your mine, and i dont want us to be apart

    its me and her combine, we share the same heart

    we are godz sign, we've been since the start

    talkin about house designs, with big yardz

    baby when we together we always win..we deserve a medal

    cuz girl we're like christmas...so special

    how do yall like dat one?

  • Wow Niceee! lol

  • does anybody know what program he uses to make his beats

  • i wouldnt pay 50$ for this shit, its kinda basic and needs more work. thats just how i feel, but you keep doing ur thing man

  • I feel like i can use this beat and put the song "Kim" by Eminem.

  • baby i know we had our share of fights but baby know that ima neva let you go porque sin ti en mi vida no tengo que hacer/ bby i remeba our first date yu say this bald headed gangster yu father used 2 say i told yu so but still we remain as 1 nuthin gonna break u away from ma arms abrazame y dime que mi ama porque bby por amarte ima love till i die/ till then i give yu tha world you ma valentine n yu o so fine baby yu ma valentine baby yur mine yur ma valentine so i never let you go i love you

  • lol 50 $ ? wow, why dont u just use a youtube mp3 converter to get this for free

  • LOL!! duh...datz what ive been doing.  :)

  • hhhmmm..what's youtube mp3 converter??

  • try searching ' youtube mp3 converter ' on google

  • a can you get in truble if u use it ?

  • lol nope, cuz ive been using it for a year and nothing happened

  • but have u made any song to the beats

  • yea u can get in trouble for using someones beat without permission...thats what sucks about outting ya beats on youtube.....but anyway if he or she is using the converter thingy and using other peoples beats and make it big the beat maker can always sue...so it be smart to work out somehting with the beat maker

  • how do ya use the youtube mp3 converter?

  • shhh..!!! don't share the secret! xD

  • how do youu use mp3 converter too get it free?

  • yo wat up ill beat can i use it for my song

    -young sammy

  • baby boo u ma numba one, so why did i fuck up

    u da motha of ma son, but i went n pressed ma luck, so many regrets, but it seems shits stuck,cant git out dis hole ive dug up, but as time goes on ill gro stronger, my love will never die so let the thot ponder, ill alweys be here i aint neva leavin', side by side we'll remain even wen not breathin', wen I die, i hope we holdin one another,let god take us away r spirits rise as a bundle, for eternity we'll remain, as one...

  • Girl, you know, sometimes you astound me

    And yours are the only arms I want around me

    I love being able to call you mine

    Even though you're your own person most of the time

    You're so beautiful, inside and out

    And I'm proud to say that without a doubt

    You're the only woman I'll ever desire

    Shawty, you know, you set my world on fire

  • i love u, it takes a real man 2 say tht,

    but nuthins 2 much 4 me 2 get 2 back,

    i miss u, da way u smiled, i cud feel a sudden vibe from 1 whole mile,

    my journals were always about u, kept on pillin up, like 1 big file,

    n girl, i regret everythin i did 2 hurt u,

    i just wasnt thinkin straight,

    didnt no exactly, tht my heart was traped in 1 big gate,

    n i hate myself 4 leavin u away, if it means anythin ill spend some time,

    2 ask u, if ud b my valentine,

  • You're selling this for $50?? HA!

  • yo, ur my #1, n ima never let u go, no motha fker can take u away, ill kill em so fast, there blood gonna flow, im sry 4 da times i hurt u, evn 4 da times i cursed u, ur so kind, da 1 thts impossible 2 find, n ur so fine, if dere was a jar of pennies, ud stand out lik a dime, i wish ud b mine 4 ever, but da question 4 dis particular time, will u b my valentine?
  • One look at her and I'm nearly faint Such a strong woman, who appears yet dainty And irately, what I see can't be true For how could a woman so fine as you Ever choose to be with a guy like me It won't happen, it simply isn't meant to be To be my Valentine, you can't be in my future, And yet you look at me as though you're sure You've made up your mind and I'm what's on it But how is that so, C'mon girl won'tcha let me know
  • I could make this into a drak song haha

  • ur da only thing that would pass truw ma mind us a dime,alwais have u as ma valentine,

    shorty mine,yea u kno i b the for yah..even walk this miles just for yah

  • mean maori mean

  • this beat is shit

  • LMAOOOOOO

  • Never thought that love could feel like this

    my chest rub against ya tits, that sensual mix

    your luscious lips,brings tingles to my spine

    forever you will be mine, my eternal valentine

  • Baby you know that you're my forever

    I don't always treat you right but whatever,

    You know I'm there for you girl, whenever

    Where ever, no matter, whether you're in pain or you just want to be together, I'm your man

    I ain't afraid to hold your hand,

    Together, you and me can make a stand, across the land, Heart to heart it's plain to see

  • That you're the only one for me

    One in a billion and it's true

    I'll never find another girl who's as perfect for me as you

  • Eyes shine bright; Tear drops of ecstasy

    All at the sight of the woman next to me

    My vision is glazed as I see my reflection

    Those deepened pearls of pure perfection

    I gaze inside with inflection; A rather hastened self-inspection.

    We both want this don't we

    You'll be my Valentine, my one and only

    And As We hold each other softly in the pale moonlight

    A whisper felt from the lovely, a gentle "Goodnight"

  • niiiccee

  • This is really beautiful

  • :D:D:D:D:D:D:D holy shitttttt :D MJ should rap on dis :D fo real

  • pretty gay

  • it was the first day we met one day i wont soon forget the only day where i stopped time when we kissed on valentines i told you your my only love you were sent from god above so baby lets move it up i wanna put my fist inside your butt you say no but i dont care i go deepthroat you gag for air but then you started not to shake i realize you arnt awake your pulse had stopped im feelin sad all the good times we coulda had then i smile and i said therell be more holes when your dead
  • hahaha that was so fucked

  • hahahaha

  • lol

  • ROFL

  • looooooooooool that it the funniest thing i've ever read on youtube

  • x2 XD!!! THAT IS PRICELESS!

  • you funny bastard

  • wtf!! this is funny!!!

  • Heres a story about a girl that i love, Sent from above, thought for sure she's the one, the feeling of love that can't be undone You see baby i will always be there, i'm your shoulder to cry on when life is unfair, i just want you to know this cause i care seeing you happy puts a smile on me I'd swim thousand miles in sea all for a minute its all worthwile to me and if i ever hurt you my apologies that was never meant be My prayers have been answered by this angel sent to me. I love you babe.
  • very good job

  • yo is it ok if my guys and i use this beautiful beat for new song we wrote????

  • i need Feel so bad instrumtal can you help me

  • id do anythink 2 see her happy, and if im wrong then sumbody plz tell me wos right,

    i cudnt bare to see her cry, or see her alone it'd make me die, and shes gotta man right now,

    but its kool cause he treats her right, but da second he takes her smile away, im not havin sh**,

    im riding bate, and its like im in much 2 deep, its like their is no floor beneath me,

    and wen ur in love, you cant fall asleep, cause reality seems way better den dreams,

  • what the fuck????

  • init wreckin the song

  • yup

  • wassup with other niggas hatin on other niggas lyrics? n other niggas tryin to be cocky sayin they better than other niggas wtf if they so cocky then how come they not up? who cares if u think other niggas lyrics are wack the good thing about them is that they tried some calm the fuk down NIGGAs

  • damn nigga.. that's some real shit you got there, WRITE THAT DOWN xD

  • whats up with all the fuckin nigga shit everybody think they go hard juss cuz they can cuss but that shit iz stupid all yall need 2 calm the fuck down

  • im a gangster you know i have guns,

    my fake muscles like 50 cent have guns,

    guns bang boom bang, im so cool,

    i go to the club and not to school,

    i have money and honey when i drink tea,

    im so cool, you cant f#$%&^97 with me..

    just thought i'd rhyme on same level y'all doing..

    ..

  • dumb!!!!!!!!

  • Nah Chill

  • imma write a song to this if thats alright?

  • Im rappin it live from the 305

    So baby lets take a drive

    and make time stand till

    take a chill pill

    and relax

    Remember

    Just focus on the present

    and not the future or the past

    -JSG-

  • Yep love time is our time sitting next to a fire and admiring your beauty and presence forget about the future or the past and focus soley on the present Ill be your everyday present believe girl youll feel it and if you ever get sad baby i would feel it as if it was my pain it would drive me insane I would take the blame for anything bad happening
  • '' sometimes it doesn't feel right, my friends give me no advice...one day i'll make you my wife, till you say 'I do', that would be nice...''

    say it slow...with melody, whew.

  • yo, how much for this? please respond asap. private message me, or respond on the post, I'll check.

    - serious mc

  • it sounds really romantic

  • Shits Very Romantic I Wrote A Song For my Girl Wit This beat Great

  • "a smooth romantic instrumental"

    Yes, it is... *THUMBS UP* ^^

  • nice itz bad azz

  • dis is sum crazy shit i gotta rap 2 it lmfao

  • pretty good, it could be a funny rap

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