Aviation Waltz - Chapter One, part 4/4

[Kingdom2469]

I love the ending.

[FFVV]

o.o you used photoshop and audacity, assuming that the audio mix and artwork was all by you. This is so cool!!!!!! You are so cool! This whole cast is so cool!!!! A very amusing especially the preview too. I liked the dramatic pause before stating "I am an asshole" wow, you have a sense of humor. *laughs*

[AderuMoro]

Well I guess that saves answering quite a few questions ^_^ Yup I did pretty much everything for this. And in case you haven't found out yet, auditions started around May 26 last year. I would've finished the entire thing a whole lot sooner but school totally got in my way XD

[MisdermeanerJ]

I'm sure my family would love to cage you XDD

God I love this Aderuuu ;D

[superchode20164]

Rewatching....

Edillian : They're not in the den anymore the lights are off.

i bet he never did go around the town....

[SuperMiharuIsBack]

"I eat real people food! 8D" I giggled.

"I..... am an asshole." I snorted and laughed in the middle of the night. XD

[sapphireailishstar]

Same Here

[crazy20164]

got me hooked from part 1/4 ...

[Linlee1000]

Lolz those bloopers made me throw up a rainbow! XD.

Hey...uh...I really liked that ending song....so.....uh....where can I find it and what is the name of it?

[AderuMoro]

Well the ending song that plays right after the chapter and the credits start rolling is called "Soaring Wings" from Unlimited Saga. I think that's the one you're talking about XD

[Linlee1000]

Thanks that is the one i was talking about. :D

[PrincessGarnetXVI]

haha omfg the guy read the balerina LOL

[PrincessGarnetXVI]

hey hun how did u do the drawings?

[AderuMoro]

Yep, I did all of 'em--incredibly time consuming, they were.

[Captain4eyez]

This was a fantastic job you guys did; the music score, acting, the art work. They're all great, it'll be nice to see more.

[Tacklevines]

Forgive me for having my comments so late on this, but...

THIS IS FREAKIN' AWESOME. From the music, to the sounds, to just the whole presentation, Aderu, you done outdone yourself.

pagemg, trollitrade, you ARE Edillan and Scilla as far as I'm concerned.

Everyone's great, really, though I have to give the L.O.T.E. (Line of the Episode) to MichaelsWorldStudio, for some of his "rich girl" comments. Great stuff man.

And I move that "caban" be entered into the english language.

[ScarletHue]

"And I became one of the most graceful ballerinas.....oh wait that's Scilla's line LOL" ahahahaha this is great! can't wait for the next chapter!

[GmodCaboose56]

I love that last part at the end, it cracked me up xD.

"An I....am an asshole"

WINNERRR!! lmao xD

[GmodCaboose56]

Great job! :D

Very original and amazing. I'm still wondering if auditions open for ch2. If not , then it's alright. in fact, I COULD send you maybe send you a voice clip of me for you and the others to listen ;)

[Damaru12]

This was... incredibly, I mean INCREDIBLY beautiful. It almost made me cry! The mixing, the music was so well put together, the story was touching, and the cast delivered their lines with such wonderful emotion--a really talented group, and extremely talented producer! :D I love it I love it I love it!

[AderuMoro]

Oh thank you! I'm glad you like it so much ^_^ I hope you'll like the future chapters too! XD

[Klaw117]

I was watching this while doing my summer homework. I must say, it's very well done! Now I really regret not being able to audition...

The script was pretty much flawless. Nothing seemed out of place and it all flowed very well.

Excellent work to all of you! I'll definitely be checking back for more!

By the way...in part 1, this was rated G, so...why is there cursing like "jackass" and "asshole?"

[AderuMoro]

Jackass slipped my mind, and I don't count anything after the credits into the the rating, because...well...people say bad things in bloopers XD

[nutharanger]

haha loved the outtakes "my mothers was a wonderful women. she taught me everything, made me into the person i am now. Because of her i became the youngest most amired graceful ballerinas of .. eh what? oh man thats scilla's line" hahaha funniest thing ever

[theBESTsithlord]

AHHH!!!! I love the Keddle phone charm!!!

[AderuMoro]

ME TOO! XD  I want it!!!

[ElleEctricity]

Wow this was amazing, i'm hooked already ^_^

Everyone did a really great job, and i'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

[linkfreak404]

did you guys create this story?

or is it from a book or somthing?

[AderuMoro]

I adapted the script from a short story I wrote ^_^

[Emoyott]

sugoiii... I admire the imagination and the effort in making this happen. =)

[DMDracoMoondragon]

Excellent work, AderuMoro. I'm already hooked on this, and I look forward to the rest. I'm really impressed with the scripting, so far, and I imagine it will only get better! Also, loved the fact that you used so much Square-Enix music in the score, like from the Mana and SaGa series. Really added to the feeling of it all.

Anywho, keep up the good work! I look forward to Ch. 2! ^_^

[LujaxChan]

Kepp up the good work! I will be watching u...

[Hbh12890]

"And I... am an asshole."

That was the best part! Oh, ROFLcopter.

[Calenthedestroyer]

Whoa, outtakes? Sweet. Next time I'll include mine. xD So I'm gonna redo my lines, haha.

[MangoandManga]

Chapter one was amazing- Keep up the good work! I especially like how you added the bloopers during the credits, or else I wouldn't have seen Lancun call his character an asshole :D.

[AderuMoro]

Lancun calling himself an asshole was actually scripted, haha XD

[Riku91]

What's the meaning of "jackass"? °-° Nice scene,loved the bloopers ^^ Will definitely wath chapter 2 ^^

[Schubert34]

this is really good~! can't wait for the next parts!

[katethegreat19]

Terrific! You are very talented! 5/5

[darksideJ]

Yay~ Finally. about time, aderu XD

[sanvirwii]

FUCKIN BRILLIANT! i cant wait for chapter two :)

[SamioDaynilloAnnie]

I like it

really original...

When come the 2? '-'

[Peraudis]

wonderfully charming and enjoyable. I'll be watching for the next episode

[WolfsbaneRevolution]

Eddi is so sweet :)

[RubyPhoenix05]

Horray! This is so worth the wait, all the voices were awsome and the bloopers made me laugh.

Limit Break Salad throw! That's my favorite, along with JC line with the movie ^^

[JCTrance19]

Wow Aderu. This has been one of the more enjoyable radioplays I've listened to, and the visuals were pretty cool-almost like a visual novel, except with the options screens. XD

And the VAs are fantastic! Trolli really brings out Scilla with her elegance and eagerness, and page is just awesome as Eddy. MWS was cute as Tack-naive little brat. XD As well as cathanki as Tinny.

Favorite line: "And I... am an asshole." lol Lancun in awesome. Loved the bloopers. Can't wait for future installments!

[deanzyz]

That was really good! I loved the outtakes at the end!

Keep it up!

[cathanski15]

Wow. I just finished watching this . . . and all I can say is wow XD lol

The voice actors were amazing! Except my lovely mic that decided to play up . . . ¬¬;;

But anyway! X3 I LOVED those bloopers! LOL Maybe I should do some next time! XD;;

[Rachelplum]

This was really great!

Aderu, do you do all the drawings too?

It looks like so much work - well done on getting it started, it's been fabulous so far :D

[AderuMoro]

Heheh, yes, I do all the drawings too ^_^; I just counted and I made about 199 new ones for this chapter alone, heh heh heh.

[Rachelplum]

woww!! All the drawings, all the editing, doing your own voice parts, judging the others!

I must say you're doing an awesome job!

[sumirehana013]

this is AWESOME!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.. =3 i love everything! the voices, bgms, story.. it's perfect! ^^

[LadeeJelly]

I'm sorry I didn't get to audition for this (blame stupid classes), but I'm loving it so far! The cast sounds great, and the writing and mixing are really nice. And oh my gosh, trolli, I didn't even realize that was you at first! I can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^

[LoD100]

AWESOME!

I mean DAMN! Keep the good work up dudette, love the timing, the voices, the story....

Your the Queen of the internets for one day.

[AudioPanacea]

This was fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter. Well done, everybody!

[WolfsbaneRevolution]

Trollitrade, if ur reading these comments, I just want u 2 know, you should get an oscar girl!

[WolfsbaneRevolution]

What powerful drama! I really hope this becomes an anime, I really do hope so!

[happykillin]

lancun: and i am an asshole~

[Mikeg993]

That line made me laugh so much, esspecially with the grin he was wearing! XD

[happykillin]

lol i liked the bloopers was great :D

[killrodx]

Hi Aderu,

I ended up taking a little break and just noticed you completed the first chapter. I see your hard work is paying off.

Welp, not much longer until you make your debut in my project.

[MichaelsWorldStudio]

I love the ending! when Scilla starts talking about building the plane and the music swells up, it feels so exciting! XD haha, I love the bloopers too, especially the eddy one where he says he is a ballerina, i actually started laughing too. Tack got pwned in the face by final fantasy salad attack, nuuuuuu! XD Again, great job, this really came out great, there were a lot of little amazing visual details that made this very entertaining and fun to watch, ah! I gotta watch it again! XD

[CrimsonStar120]

Awesome! everyone did an awesome job, I can't wait to see chapter 2

[AderuMoro]

Hehe, thank you! ^_^

[MattAlchemy]

I seriously like how it sounds so serious. This is really cool!

[AderuMoro]

Hehe, thanks? I guess serious is dramatic ^_^;

[dancergirl]

Totally awesome!!

The bloopers were hilarious, and I cannot wait to see what happens next. I just hope I do a good job with my part. *crosses fingers* Keep up the good work everyone!

[AderuMoro]

Woo! I'm sure you'll do wonderful with your part! (Speaking of, I've gotta send everyone notes, heh--) I can't wait to hear you as Madame Bruche XD

[decemberxrain]

Oh my gosh! That was fantastic! I can't wait for chapter 2! ENTER! MARIN TOWSE!! XDShe's probably one of my favorite character roles :D The bloopers were priceless, especially when pagemg started recording Scilla's line. That was brilliant! The most beautiful ballerina in all of Placea is Edillan Kenstin! :D

[AderuMoro]

Marin is one of my favorite characters to write, especially when she's talking about Vermisse, haha. I can't wait until everyone gets to hear you as Marin XD

[GTRfiend26]

"And I....am an asshole!" XD

^Nice ender.

Standing ovation by the way....entertaining all the way through. Keep up the good work and I dig the visuals.

[AderuMoro]

Tee hee, Romein saying that line cracks me up every time :P

[LovelyMyko]

I loved it! It was like listening to those books on tapes that use different voices for the characters, but this was definitely better! =D

[AderuMoro]

Thanks! I was kinda going for that sorta audio book thing, but ended up tweaking the script so it would read more like drama. ^___^

[LovelyMyko]

Well you did wonderfully!! =D

[fairuzathelolita]

This was really great! You guys were really impressive with your performances and the bloopers are always a treat!:D

[AderuMoro]

Hehe, thank you, I love the bloopers XD