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From: Zanessafan08
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  • her a mistake?

    how bout a her dad who is a piece of shit!

    he's the mistake!

    i dislike with a fire-burning passion right now!

    loved it, please post more soon!(:

  • @krenke015 lmao. you comment made my day:) i was having a very bad day but you just totally just made it better. so thank you:) and i love making him the bad guy in the story. its something really different i think.

  • @Zanessafan08 lol, your welcome!(:

  • awesssooommmeee! post more, yes? :)

  • aww poor girl i love it i cant wait for more

  • aww that is so sad.... her dad is a worthless piece of shit...

  • @JBfan4ever129 lmao. everyones entitiled to their opinion:) but i know i like making him an ass to her:) thanks for reading!

  • This is awesome! Post again!

  • This Story Is Awesome :0 Post More Please

  • This is awesome! Please most more! I wish that you would post more cause this story is just the best, its so awesome and it's different form every other story! If i were her i'd be pretty mad, probably run away! I am so glad that they are not like that in real life!

  • @xxMusicIsMyLife1xx im gunan try ad post more. its just with the whole comments thing it pisses me off. but hanks for reading:) you lke one of the people who actualy GAVE me feedback:) so i thank you! i cant give anything away but she leaves later in the story.

  • @Zanessafan08 Oh your welcome and about the whole comment thing I figured out that if you keep on demanding it, no one tends to comment, you can try to just add something like "please comment" something sweet, that really works! I also fiqured out that if you post more people will comment more as well! Just advice, and if your wondering where I got it from, i used to write a story, and that was what I did :)

  • @xxMusicIsMyLife1xx hah thanks.i'll think about it. and you did? what were your stories? a love story or sister?

  • @Zanessafan08 Mine was a sister story, like yours :)

  • @xxMusicIsMyLife1xx thts cool. do you still write?

  • @Zanessafan08 Yea I still write at home and stuff but not on youtube :)

    I sing now!

    Lol! In a couple days i will have a video up on youtube!

  • @Zanessafan08 Yea I still write at home and stuff but not on youtube :)

    I sing now!

    Lol! In a couple days i will have a video up on youtube!

  • @xxMusicIsMyLife1xx thats cool. and i'll check it out then:) there are sometimes i wish i could just quit writing but i cant:) haha. its deff a hard job.

  • @Zanessafan08 I totally agree! And thanks, that would be great!

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