Bear’s hook was very nice to get her audience’s attention. Her speech structure was good, and her voice was loud enough to be heard by all the audience. Showing her all props was good to be seen by everyone, but she spent too much time during the 2nd step so that she didn’t have enough time to explain all the steps. It was very nice to manage her speech time by skipping her third step despite of an unexpected situation. It would be much better if you had enough time to explain all your steps.
Although it’s painful to watch this video but I still did a good job. I should watch my time more carefully, because it was not enough for me. But skipped the third step is a good decision. Practice and control your time and more eye contact!!!
You used a lot of props, it was good for your speech. I think you need more interaction with your audiences, you just passed your props, I think it was not enough, you can improve it next time. Your speech was very clear, I know how to make it after your speech. Good job!
Bear’s hook was very nice to get her audience’s attention. Her speech structure was good, and her voice was loud enough to be heard by all the audience. Showing her all props was good to be seen by everyone, but she spent too much time during the 2nd step so that she didn’t have enough time to explain all the steps. It was very nice to manage her speech time by skipping her third step despite of an unexpected situation. It would be much better if you had enough time to explain all your steps.
s2pinkpetal 4 weeks ago
Although it’s painful to watch this video but I still did a good job. I should watch my time more carefully, because it was not enough for me. But skipped the third step is a good decision. Practice and control your time and more eye contact!!!
aqbear 4 weeks ago
You used a lot of props, it was good for your speech. I think you need more interaction with your audiences, you just passed your props, I think it was not enough, you can improve it next time. Your speech was very clear, I know how to make it after your speech. Good job!
Samlin0912 4 weeks ago