I think you should try to connect more to the words. Try to feel the anger she must have felt at her cousin, I mean, all she ever did was beat her out, and even in death she has still won, Rosaline must live with the loss of Romeo, and with the chaos that surrounds her. She's angry and passionate and at this moment is making that clear. It's bitter and sickening at times. Also, there are hints of sarcasm. Try to show less grief, more frustration but instead of trying, let the text speak.
i love how u move your eyebrows you should try to change the tone and pitch im doing this piece too this year :) good luck ps can u give me any tips about it like should i stare sternly at the grave or should i just look at the wall?
@123KatieH Thank you for the feedback. Hopefully, when I performed it at college earlier this week, all was well. I think I did okay. =)
Erm, I would suggest you vary between looking at the grave and actually imagining she is there. Have a look at the monologue for key points when this could happen. You don't have to take any of the tips but they are there if you want them! =)
@Carolita310 You can get the full version of the monologue from the play which you can buy off of amazon... but that is a really really long version. But it's a very good read. Plus it helps you understand the shortened one better.
But anyways, I shall still send you the monologue! =)
its good although you missed out half of the script.
becziie101 2 months ago
im only 12 and i already know the full script and have been given a distinction for this preformance.
toffas1 8 months ago
@xrainfalls I this is a really late response... but do you still want to monologue? I tried a while ago but there was no way to send it to you!
lilmonkeybecki 10 months ago
Are you british? This is incredible!
secretme127 10 months ago
@secretme127 Yes, I am british. And thank you!
lilmonkeybecki 10 months ago
I think you should try to connect more to the words. Try to feel the anger she must have felt at her cousin, I mean, all she ever did was beat her out, and even in death she has still won, Rosaline must live with the loss of Romeo, and with the chaos that surrounds her. She's angry and passionate and at this moment is making that clear. It's bitter and sickening at times. Also, there are hints of sarcasm. Try to show less grief, more frustration but instead of trying, let the text speak.
madzdaname 1 year ago 2
i love how u move your eyebrows you should try to change the tone and pitch im doing this piece too this year :) good luck ps can u give me any tips about it like should i stare sternly at the grave or should i just look at the wall?
123KatieH 1 year ago
@123KatieH Thank you for the feedback. Hopefully, when I performed it at college earlier this week, all was well. I think I did okay. =)
Erm, I would suggest you vary between looking at the grave and actually imagining she is there. Have a look at the monologue for key points when this could happen. You don't have to take any of the tips but they are there if you want them! =)
Good Luck
lilmonkeybecki 1 year ago
@lilmonkeybecki
thanks 4 da tips :D do u go 2 a drama college?
123KatieH 1 year ago
@123KatieH No problem, anytime! =)
No, I'm just at college studying Performing Arts but I aim to go onto a drama college once I've finished! =)
lilmonkeybecki 1 year ago
@lilmonkeybecki o ta brillent haha im just 13 in speech and drama club :D:D r u finishes all your grades? :)
123KatieH 1 year ago
I agree , if you could add some variety and a bit more inflection in some parts of it, it would really be a lovely monologue.
p.s. could you by any chance email this monologue to me, I've been trying to find it anywhere!
kitsunegrl@gmail.com
Carolita310 1 year ago
@Carolita310 You can get the full version of the monologue from the play which you can buy off of amazon... but that is a really really long version. But it's a very good read. Plus it helps you understand the shortened one better.
But anyways, I shall still send you the monologue! =)
lilmonkeybecki 1 year ago
Im in year 10 and I doing this for my LAMDA exam
tips: maybe you could change the pitch and tone of your voice to make it more interesting especially in the more intence parts.
Otherwise it can get a bit boring and you need to keep the audience alert and wanting to know whats going to happen next.
Good luck
xForrealnowx 1 year ago
@xForrealnowx Thank You for your feedback... it's really useful! =)
lilmonkeybecki 1 year ago
@xForrealnowx Oh and Good Luck with the LAMDA exam!
lilmonkeybecki 1 year ago