@jasminethereal Don't worry, sis! Things get better. We can't limit ourselves to short-term when we're worth long-term. There's more out there for you. :)
thank you for those words! i love your poetry girl :) still in that relationship and just going with the happy times..maybe ignorantly but i'm young so i give myself that space for possible mistakes to learn from but won't ever regret
A summer love...I will never forget my summer love. this poem reminds me of him so much and how even after that summer had come and gone I still adored every detail...every imperfection that for some reason only made him seem more perfect.
it's amazing how she described it so in depth. Knowing that the relationship would end up having her back where she started but still trying to savor what little bit of enjoyment and fulfillment out of being with him. It's great.
Man,just listenin' to this poem brings back memories of those "few month" relationships that I knew weren't goin to go anywhere but enjoyed it while it last for that moment in time.Its sad but funny how sometimes or a lot of times we may let useless situation linger knowing that it won't progress to anything permanent or meaningful whatsoever...
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TruePoetryShockz 6 months ago
Pretty good Pretty good!
PoohPooh071 7 months ago
so touching.... in the final stages of one those right now. hurts pretty bad though...
jasminethereal 1 year ago 5
@jasminethereal Don't worry, sis! Things get better. We can't limit ourselves to short-term when we're worth long-term. There's more out there for you. :)
shanellegabriel 1 year ago 7
@shanellegabriel
thank you for those words! i love your poetry girl :) still in that relationship and just going with the happy times..maybe ignorantly but i'm young so i give myself that space for possible mistakes to learn from but won't ever regret
jasminethereal 1 year ago
I really like her she is sooo dope
iysiskiss 1 year ago 2
summer loves always are very passionable...
browntreasure 2 years ago
yes girl...i feel you
93Liberation 2 years ago
A summer love...I will never forget my summer love. this poem reminds me of him so much and how even after that summer had come and gone I still adored every detail...every imperfection that for some reason only made him seem more perfect.
absbeline 2 years ago
y do we always adore the season love and the one we know just wont last
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how do we always kno it wont last
argh this poem reminds me ov the winter just past
muah**
thecocopopxpixie 2 years ago 2
it's amazing how she described it so in depth. Knowing that the relationship would end up having her back where she started but still trying to savor what little bit of enjoyment and fulfillment out of being with him. It's great.
enfknox27 2 years ago
this is great! you should subscribe to Te V Smith a poet from France i think you'll enjoy him.
tevsmithfanpage 2 years ago
i feel her .... !!!
SwaqqThatSingerGirl 2 years ago
i keep listening to this over and over... reminds me of lots of things...
AriWonder 3 years ago
this woman speaks to me...white or black...she speaks to me.
lustnpixxxiedust 3 years ago
I think I jus became Alice in Wonderland because there are a pool of tears at my feet.
ajamaicanparadox1 3 years ago 3
Comically poetic...
Ntahlekshual 3 years ago 3
Man,just listenin' to this poem brings back memories of those "few month" relationships that I knew weren't goin to go anywhere but enjoyed it while it last for that moment in time.Its sad but funny how sometimes or a lot of times we may let useless situation linger knowing that it won't progress to anything permanent or meaningful whatsoever...
buttaluv10 3 years ago 24
@buttaluv10 Those kind of relationships can't possibly be "useless," when you can take from them "permanent" memories and lessons learned.
Babyluvmusic 1 year ago
Wow i think you are really talented, im luvin ur work, do you have a web site or anything, and how can a new poet as myself get on Slam
Jayblackz 4 years ago 4
i wish i could live there too
Noclue0828 4 years ago
i luhv her n i sooo love this piece cuz i jus learnd this feeln n she cudnt have said it betta
MsKupkakes 4 years ago 3
i luv it
Dijah713 4 years ago