Feedback: not sure if anybody said this before, they probably did but just the same.. If you rack a pistol's slide back when it's already got a round chambered (his second 'rack' in the garage(?) ) you'd hear a shell eject and bounce off somewhere. Other than that, not bad.
Feedback: not sure if anybody said this before, they probably did but just the same.. If you rack a pistol's slide back when it's already got a round chambered (his second 'rack' in the garage(?) ) you'd hear a shell eject and bounce off somewhere. Other than that, not bad.
Excellent. Had me all the way. Liked the contrast between the zombie nerds one-upping on another, then having to put their "expertise" into practice themselves. It is never as easy as it seems -- it's all about ourselves, not about optimization of weapons. That means little if you don't have tactical sense and the will to live. Good, film school techniques on display here -- somebody's learnin'. Colin's death struggle with the zombie in the KTN was horrifyingly realistic. Good show!
Pretty good, unlike others i have seen at least its mature enough and without some 15 year old kids acting in it, although 1 question, does everyone keep a gun in the top drawer, anyways good editing espesically with the gun shots, hope to see another soon
Its understood that this has been on here for two years. And I realize its a bit too late, but for the sake of it here is what I thought.
Yes, the camera was an issue, but if any of you are looking for that film look, get a Panasonic DVX100b, usually can pick them up for $1,500-2,300. Sold mine for 1,500.
I cant give myu full critique cause of youtubes limit, but the story itself was effective. The lighting was an issue, and dialog was lacking a bit.
This short film blew me away. Very well directed, cinematography was amazing,and the special effects were pretty much outstanding. id like to see some other stuff from you guys. great job keep up the good work.
that was cool, i think for the ending it shouldn't have been all shaky with the camera and him going really fast. he should have taken his time because shooting yourself is a pretty horrible thing to do, and obviously the last resort. Maybe if like he sat in the car for a while staring at what he might become (the zombie) and then was like spose i have to, coz that johnny caash so would have been perfect for that sorta ending. sorry if i write loads i just love my zombies, anyway great film
depends how many shots you have left, looked like he had 3 or 4 around him, if he didn't have enough ammo, it's pointless trying, if you do have the keys to the car, DRIVE! and find some ammo
all in all i think it was pretty well done. You stayed within the lore that is zombie while adding the concept of at least primitive tought. All in all very well done. my only complaint has been mentioned and that would be the double chamber.
not bad was that johnny cash signing when the he shoots him self the only goof up i caught was when he puts the clip in he chambers it than as he walks through the garage he chambers again but its ok they do that kind of stuff all the time in the movies
Man dude that scene where the one zombies over the guy and ripping the guys fuckin throat out was gruesome I love how you used like roast beef colored red for the flesh that was my idea
nice short i like it, but i think you need to improve how your zombie cast moves, i mean most zombies move like the ones in resident evil, they dont run. But other than that i think its good.
If the body wasn't damaged it could run, at least till the muscles decomposed. I don't think it would have the brain power to hide around a corner, but then again it is refreshing to see a new perspective.
Good job, i agree that it needed a lil bit more something to drive the action along, found myself skipping forward through to the action. Definatley a high 4!
I liked it. Only a few things i have bad to say about it. All the doors being open. the shirtless zombie jumped into the truck bed then out when it was already at the end of the truck. the guy being munched on wasn't making any noises indicating he was being eaten alive. The shaking camera wasn't too bad just the fact that at first i thought it was going to be a pov movie because you were following the guy to the car at the start. otherwise 5 stars. hope i didnt offend
There where a couple little things here and there that I didnt like, the camera shaking, but that may just be me. And is there a reason they are packing so much heat?
Badass!!!! it was pretty cool, but the bullets came from above at an angle not straight foward where the guy was pointing.....anyway cool movie... im thinking about making one
It's not bad at all, but some parts were just so painfully boring. You need more interesting filler, like some more of the dialogue you had at the beginning. Your actions scenes were great, and the dialogue adds character development, just it was hard to get to them through all the times of not doing anything. Overall a solid 4, though :)
Pretty cool movie... Really impressive... the running zombie is often a heated topic. I don't think "zombie" would be the correct label for a running one. I think "Infected" is much better.
i agree that since zombies are rotting corpse's have rotting flesh and normally they would rip apart when trying to run, but this makes the film more intense, zombies, flesh eating creatures that want to eat flesh, kill anything just because it's there, now picture running from them, as if that it's you running from them. try to use imagination with things like this. they try to make them better.
ok couple of things 1 why kill ur self was that the last bullet he had if there were only 4 zombies and he had more bullets he could have stoped an epodemic 2 good job im thinken of make my own zombie movie the production is in progress do u have any tips for a rookie
Hrm. A lot of aspects of this is similar to the stuff a couple of my friends and I put togethers.
- Props on getting many people to work
together.
- Spending the time to edit it.
Some of the parts are VERY hard to watch. The "dude, dude, dude... dude, dude. Pier one imports, dude" "dude" "dude" Arg. no good, I know you guys were throwing something together on the fly but, yikes.
Camera movements were a bit erratic and hard to follow.
LOL at the zombie that hates sleeping outside, and only in cars. And Extra LOl at 10 min, when the guy wakes up out of nowhere to go RIGHT to the window to see a bloody car.
And why would this guy seeing a hurt friend pull a gun out to shoot him.
Personal preference, Sprinting zombies = booo.
I'm glad to see your parents arm all of you.
A+ for bullet wound effects!
character in the end, had NO will to live. Nice job guys! Keep em comin!
i like the way you covered up the lack of muzzle flashes, but i have to agree with the last guy about the ending...should have drawn it out a bit to make it more dramatic
that was a good film overall...the digital effects were awesome and the music did a great job of setting the tone/s...on the down side, there were a few too many cuts, the ending was bad, and you didn't do a good enough job of explaining who was what and what was going on...but I do applaud your efforts. Maybe a part 2 would remedy your problems hint hint.....?
lol, well, i explain the ending on my youtube page, you should check it out.
unfortunately we're in the works on a new film, that will most definitely out-do Daybreak, check out our website for details (hyperlink on my youtube page)
lol, bullet effects are pretty complicated, cut paintballs in half, cleaned them out, and filled them with baby powder, partially re-sealed them with super glue, turned the fps low on a gun, and voila
lol, yeh it just takes a lot of practice...and in most cases, a lot of takes. a few times the paintballs would just explode in the gun, but overall it was worth it
12:33 DOUBLE TAP!!! rule #2 haha
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Feedback: not sure if anybody said this before, they probably did but just the same.. If you rack a pistol's slide back when it's already got a round chambered (his second 'rack' in the garage(?) ) you'd hear a shell eject and bounce off somewhere. Other than that, not bad.
JesterNightbreed 1 year ago
Feedback: not sure if anybody said this before, they probably did but just the same.. If you rack a pistol's slide back when it's already got a round chambered (his second 'rack' in the garage(?) ) you'd hear a shell eject and bounce off somewhere. Other than that, not bad.
JesterNightbreed 1 year ago
@ismega10 i use that program and now it works it didnt before but now it does thanks
Jackmachinima 1 year ago
bad cameraman
gaserlazer12 1 year ago
how do you put music in your vids when i do its says its not othurized by wmg do i have to download from itunes?
Jackmachinima 1 year ago
duuude...dude..duuude??? duuuuude!!!!!!...dudedudedude...
bjornjoseph 1 year ago
great film and i would do the same thing the guy did in the ending
Zombielandkiller 1 year ago
Song name?
HaloZero147 1 year ago
Why do they all have guns in their neighborhood? lol
HaloZero147 1 year ago
good job but the screen going black between cuts was a little distracting
ChrisEvil138 1 year ago
Epic Fail.... Just Kidding! You guys did a great job! Check back on my channel soon for my crews newest zombie flick! =NPJ!
NewportJuggalo 1 year ago
BEST YOUTUBE ZOMBIE SHORT.....EVER..or best out of the others ive seen! though may i ask why all their doors are wide open?? lol
Achecorn 1 year ago
Wow! That was awesome!
I've got a Zombie short too! It's got a hot chick in it! Check it out!
Desert Dead
-S
silvascreen 1 year ago
god i love zombie stories.
frnnk 1 year ago
Good job guys. I liked the first zombie in the headlights. Very freaky. Check out my series. THE ZOMBIE PARTS.
TheZombieParts 2 years ago
That was really good man!
I'm going to +sub, hopefully you guys will make another short soon :)
PirkFiretree 2 years ago
Excellent. Had me all the way. Liked the contrast between the zombie nerds one-upping on another, then having to put their "expertise" into practice themselves. It is never as easy as it seems -- it's all about ourselves, not about optimization of weapons. That means little if you don't have tactical sense and the will to live. Good, film school techniques on display here -- somebody's learnin'. Colin's death struggle with the zombie in the KTN was horrifyingly realistic. Good show!
50zcarsman 2 years ago
this is relly good
criptostar 2 years ago
nice job better than most shorts i have seen.
superchris2333333333 2 years ago
nice techniques, I just felt like the camera needed to be tilted up a bit more.
imoveatparaderest 2 years ago
I like how everyone just has a gun
urgodsam123 2 years ago 2
that was pretty sick good job on this
SexuallyAmazing 2 years ago
hahahahaaha a fucking air soft gun lol nice
sn4lclothing 2 years ago
lol nice i like how you guys are watching dawn of the dead...this movie is awsome...
sn4lclothing 2 years ago
Pretty good, unlike others i have seen at least its mature enough and without some 15 year old kids acting in it, although 1 question, does everyone keep a gun in the top drawer, anyways good editing espesically with the gun shots, hope to see another soon
KrazyKomradeKong 2 years ago
Its understood that this has been on here for two years. And I realize its a bit too late, but for the sake of it here is what I thought.
Yes, the camera was an issue, but if any of you are looking for that film look, get a Panasonic DVX100b, usually can pick them up for $1,500-2,300. Sold mine for 1,500.
I cant give myu full critique cause of youtubes limit, but the story itself was effective. The lighting was an issue, and dialog was lacking a bit.
Nice work though.
7/10
MrKlay 2 years ago
how come there is so many zombie shorts were they kill them selfs? stupid... u always stay in it. there is always a chance to survive
dannyq1025 2 years ago
I really enjoyed it guys! Great job with the sound track too excellent overall short. One of the better ones I have watched on youtube.
Mottzaballz 2 years ago
pretty good except for the ending, why didn't he run back into the house?
dreadful0chicken 2 years ago
This short film blew me away. Very well directed, cinematography was amazing,and the special effects were pretty much outstanding. id like to see some other stuff from you guys. great job keep up the good work.
MoreLikeButtFilms 2 years ago
that was cool, i think for the ending it shouldn't have been all shaky with the camera and him going really fast. he should have taken his time because shooting yourself is a pretty horrible thing to do, and obviously the last resort. Maybe if like he sat in the car for a while staring at what he might become (the zombie) and then was like spose i have to, coz that johnny caash so would have been perfect for that sorta ending. sorry if i write loads i just love my zombies, anyway great film
browni 2 years ago
why every zombie short film ends with the main character blowing his/her head off, does anyone know what to do in a similar situation?
Neckrophilous 2 years ago
@Neckrophilous
depends how many shots you have left, looked like he had 3 or 4 around him, if he didn't have enough ammo, it's pointless trying, if you do have the keys to the car, DRIVE! and find some ammo
Pokemonfan1234567 2 years ago
they should make more parts for it. Because there just arnt enough good zombie movies
shredder3359 2 years ago
all in all i think it was pretty well done. You stayed within the lore that is zombie while adding the concept of at least primitive tought. All in all very well done. my only complaint has been mentioned and that would be the double chamber.
Glenarms 2 years ago
not bad was that johnny cash signing when the he shoots him self the only goof up i caught was when he puts the clip in he chambers it than as he walks through the garage he chambers again but its ok they do that kind of stuff all the time in the movies
vampirelostintime1 2 years ago
Slow to get going but I really liked it. Nice
CheapAssFilmsHull 2 years ago
the only cool part of this short film is when they play deftones at the end! hahaha
hippolove100 2 years ago
well at least you took something away.
griminar 2 years ago
you should have made a series or something cause the ending IMO was kinda lame :/
GuitarPinoy 2 years ago
People have heads. Didn't see them in most of the shots. Action was nice. Music didn't really aid the story any. Was this improv? Just curious...
alteredeffect 2 years ago
there was no written script, but there was a plan before shooting started.
griminar 2 years ago
@griminar when i make movies its exactly the same
Kholberg94 1 year ago
I Really could of done without the shaky cam this isnt the blair witch project or Cloverfield
SSJSasuke777 2 years ago
Man dude that scene where the one zombies over the guy and ripping the guys fuckin throat out was gruesome I love how you used like roast beef colored red for the flesh that was my idea
SSJSasuke777 2 years ago
the begginning was gay
holygrail2009 2 years ago
agreed. but i think the end compensated for it.
griminar 2 years ago
I liked where the ending was going until he shot himself.
FatKayoMatt 2 years ago 2
you spent a lot of time rec'ing tv
CyrusKrill 2 years ago
word
griminar 2 years ago
nice short i like it, but i think you need to improve how your zombie cast moves, i mean most zombies move like the ones in resident evil, they dont run. But other than that i think its good.
graphkid 2 years ago
If the body wasn't damaged it could run, at least till the muscles decomposed. I don't think it would have the brain power to hide around a corner, but then again it is refreshing to see a new perspective.
curdus77 2 years ago
You dont know nothin bout nothin, lol
All the best zombies RUN!!!
RUN FORREST RUN!!!
Run till you catch that futhermucker and eat his face!!!
FallenPastry 2 years ago
good job keep up the good work but get a different camera man that made me dizzy when yall would run
deathistimeless 2 years ago
that was really good. I didnt expect the suicide at the end though.
only thing i didnt like was the shaking camera
JohnBruce32 2 years ago
Good job, i agree that it needed a lil bit more something to drive the action along, found myself skipping forward through to the action. Definatley a high 4!
Sweet Music choices!
craigsmith21 2 years ago
nice thats pretty awsome loved it when they got shot
i didnt look close enough but was it cgi or real ?
check out my zombier movie im uploading soon its a drugg fucked adventure with zombies
jonnywoodsfansite 2 years ago
I liked it. Only a few things i have bad to say about it. All the doors being open. the shirtless zombie jumped into the truck bed then out when it was already at the end of the truck. the guy being munched on wasn't making any noises indicating he was being eaten alive. The shaking camera wasn't too bad just the fact that at first i thought it was going to be a pov movie because you were following the guy to the car at the start. otherwise 5 stars. hope i didnt offend
acousticismehlife 2 years ago
no offense taken. constructive criticism is always appreciated.
griminar 2 years ago
There where a couple little things here and there that I didnt like, the camera shaking, but that may just be me. And is there a reason they are packing so much heat?
5/5
restortheorder 2 years ago
yer just the guns is over the top for me, if it was from UK there couldnt be any guns only melee unless i had a sporting shotgun
MookyManster 2 years ago
nice job... love the intro.. hehe check out my zombie film.... talynfilms the video is above in the responses thing... tell me what tu think
TalynFilms 2 years ago
Badass!!!! it was pretty cool, but the bullets came from above at an angle not straight foward where the guy was pointing.....anyway cool movie... im thinking about making one
Treblinka20 2 years ago
where you get a gun that has an ammo thingfy?
mouldymat 2 years ago
It's not bad at all, but some parts were just so painfully boring. You need more interesting filler, like some more of the dialogue you had at the beginning. Your actions scenes were great, and the dialogue adds character development, just it was hard to get to them through all the times of not doing anything. Overall a solid 4, though :)
KozySpike 2 years ago
Pretty cool movie... Really impressive... the running zombie is often a heated topic. I don't think "zombie" would be the correct label for a running one. I think "Infected" is much better.
Good job... do another one!
Dozeman22 2 years ago
Wow!
That was really good!
What did you guys use for gunshots and w/e?
And, where did you guys get your guns from?
JamesFromInferno 2 years ago
Wow that was freacking amazing
btw save one bullet
lamesniper2 3 years ago
GREAT!!! 5 stars n sub
remen3 3 years ago
Johnny cash mixes in with zombie movies so well.
zeppzo4 3 years ago
This was Great!.Except one thing,everyone makes this mistake,Zombies CANT run :).
addiecody 3 years ago
i agree that since zombies are rotting corpse's have rotting flesh and normally they would rip apart when trying to run, but this makes the film more intense, zombies, flesh eating creatures that want to eat flesh, kill anything just because it's there, now picture running from them, as if that it's you running from them. try to use imagination with things like this. they try to make them better.
dylan
JamPantsProductions 3 years ago
it's his movie
let him do his own take on it, in case you havent noticed there are no real zombies
which means no one knows what they'd really do
Toasty373 3 years ago
Well done boys. Head and shoulders better than most of the indy zombie movies on here.
carlbrain 3 years ago
great job Will Turner! Loved the ending!
blinddoctorwho 3 years ago
awh deadly lads! fuckin ace
will u make a full length but use the same survivors?? please god do!!!
creepoffaith 3 years ago
Wat the HELL WAS THAT
Jokernnc11093 3 years ago
the lighting is very dark, other than that great! ^^ and if you need to learn post stabilization for your camera in editing check videocopilot
BaphometStudios 3 years ago
is that dawn of the dead on the TV. is that for jock or very imprinted to the movie please tell.
Killermonkey5 3 years ago
very good i love it..it's like watching a pro movie
OOOJAREDOOO 3 years ago
pretty good
i like fast zombies
what did you guys do for squibs they were great
ibanezkid07 3 years ago
Very good amateur movie.
But i dont like speed zombies, next time romero style please ;)
Dolalgamur 3 years ago
Regarding the last guy: That's why you keep more than 4 rounds in your magazine.
And why didn't he just drive away? The car looked okay, apart from the broken windshield. I'm guessing it was supposed to be wrecked?
RadialSkid 3 years ago
i hate speady intelligent zombiesgreat film, but i would have liked it much better if the zombies were classic style
PissedOffTV 3 years ago
Extremely impressive
Conspiracyfreak3 3 years ago
awesome job!
TSMD 3 years ago
ok couple of things 1 why kill ur self was that the last bullet he had if there were only 4 zombies and he had more bullets he could have stoped an epodemic 2 good job im thinken of make my own zombie movie the production is in progress do u have any tips for a rookie
blackparader16 3 years ago
favorite parts are when zombies are running
but my beef with this is the camera work...
in some scenes it worked well (zombies spriting)
but the rest of the time I wanted to slap the camera man. it would randomly zoom in on random stuff "feet, back of the guy's shirt,etc."
like the johnny cash at the end
Etheallmighty 3 years ago
dude bad ass movie. nice job guys
chris2000555 3 years ago
u cocked the gun 2ice
moocow346 3 years ago
he was maken sure he had a bullet in there
blackparader16 3 years ago
Will Turner? awesome
maniaclay 4 years ago
Hrm. A lot of aspects of this is similar to the stuff a couple of my friends and I put togethers.
- Props on getting many people to work
together.
- Spending the time to edit it.
Some of the parts are VERY hard to watch. The "dude, dude, dude... dude, dude. Pier one imports, dude" "dude" "dude" Arg. no good, I know you guys were throwing something together on the fly but, yikes.
Camera movements were a bit erratic and hard to follow.
Nettikturbo 4 years ago
Spent a little too much time watching TV.
LOL at the zombie that hates sleeping outside, and only in cars. And Extra LOl at 10 min, when the guy wakes up out of nowhere to go RIGHT to the window to see a bloody car.
And why would this guy seeing a hurt friend pull a gun out to shoot him.
Personal preference, Sprinting zombies = booo.
I'm glad to see your parents arm all of you.
A+ for bullet wound effects!
character in the end, had NO will to live. Nice job guys! Keep em comin!
Nettikturbo 4 years ago
Cool but... if the gun was not jammed anymore he could keep trying
PowerMadHeadBanger 4 years ago
a lot better than i thought it would be...
i like the way you covered up the lack of muzzle flashes, but i have to agree with the last guy about the ending...should have drawn it out a bit to make it more dramatic
chaseofspades 4 years ago
well done. one pointer tho, u could have made the ending have the guy a bit more freaked out and stretch it a bit to make it seem more dramatic
metalhead250 4 years ago
That was intense!..the start it's kinda slow and boring but the ending definetly saved it.
Great Job!
cpos06 4 years ago
good story although i always like zombie movies ending in the infected being exterminated but yours was good too
a little shakey filming but all together its a 8/10
Americanxproductions 4 years ago
personally, i enjoyed the ending.
my only criticism would be a better soundtrack choice.
except for that primus song in the beginning.
itsmeegg 4 years ago
that was a good film overall...the digital effects were awesome and the music did a great job of setting the tone/s...on the down side, there were a few too many cuts, the ending was bad, and you didn't do a good enough job of explaining who was what and what was going on...but I do applaud your efforts. Maybe a part 2 would remedy your problems hint hint.....?
chewynickerson 4 years ago
lol, well, i explain the ending on my youtube page, you should check it out.
unfortunately we're in the works on a new film, that will most definitely out-do Daybreak, check out our website for details (hyperlink on my youtube page)
griminar 4 years ago
Cool. That was pretty good.
thesonofabob 4 years ago
pretty good for home-made but the ending was crap
illkill9 4 years ago
Fucking amazing.
The start is slightly strange but cool and a tad confusing, and then it goes abit slow, but not bad..and then near the end its fucking awesome.
Hellogals 4 years ago
i saw elements of 28 days/weeks series.
DFILMS07 4 years ago
Pretty good, I wish it was longer.
lucasberg 4 years ago
hey where did u get the sound effects and music from?
micohal 4 years ago
sound effects from free sites around the internet, music from my personal stuff pretty much
griminar 4 years ago
The Zombie Survival Guide is the greatest book ever written by a human being!
Weare13886 4 years ago
hey nice special effects, it was pretty cool that you could carry the story with such liittle talking too
overall pretty impressive
KriEgaR89 4 years ago
How did you get those bullet hit effects? Do tell!
salsburysteakjr 4 years ago
lol, bullet effects are pretty complicated, cut paintballs in half, cleaned them out, and filled them with baby powder, partially re-sealed them with super glue, turned the fps low on a gun, and voila
griminar 4 years ago
Wow! Well it was worth the effort, it's a good looking effect, lots better then those digital hits other shorts are using.
salsburysteakjr 4 years ago
lol, yeh it just takes a lot of practice...and in most cases, a lot of takes. a few times the paintballs would just explode in the gun, but overall it was worth it
griminar 4 years ago
Claypool in the opening credits.
Nice.
Good jon on the video though.
Me and some friends are making a zombie movie too, but it's just in the opening stages.
prozacrock1616 4 years ago
yo man pretty good, a little slow towards the middle but not a bad job, good gore effects!
razgriz1010 4 years ago