NOT MANY PEOPLE SHOWED THERE FULL POTENTIAL ON THIS SONG FEATURING T-PAIN.. WELL YOU ALL NEED TO CHECK THIS VERSION OF THE SONG! ITS FUCKING HOT! I TRYED MY BEST TO GO IN ON THIS BEAT! FUCKING MURDERED IT! ;]
ayo I checked you out now show some luv and check me out..I dont have a lot of views cause Im not computer friendly and dont have a lot of networking skills but I think I have one of tha best verses on this track and I have checked out at least 60-70 of them and I only heard 3 including this one that are worthy of pain checking out
honest opinion and constructive criticism: shldnt have had the autotune, too much repetition, not really sayin enough in the verse....bars need to be a whole lot stronger...good luck tho
Lol, cool bro, sounding like you were having fun with this! Cool remix though bro, good luck in the competition, hope you'll check my new holiday song "Christmas Time" Merry Christmas Eve Holmey!
You sent me a message asking for honest advice for this, so here it is:
1 Remove any additions like the "du-dudum"s at the end, because chances are TPain and friends wont be wanting to re-edit to remove that from the file. You would be better off with just killing the verse.
2 The "doubler" or "straight reverb" is a bit high and makes the recording seem pitchy. Lower it a bit for a more natural feel.
Do these and you're going to have a much more promising entry. I love the style!
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RIOTGOONSQUAD 1 year ago
Cool I made one too
lepricon3 1 year ago
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NOT MANY PEOPLE SHOWED THERE FULL POTENTIAL ON THIS SONG FEATURING T-PAIN.. WELL YOU ALL NEED TO CHECK THIS VERSION OF THE SONG! ITS FUCKING HOT! I TRYED MY BEST TO GO IN ON THIS BEAT! FUCKING MURDERED IT! ;]
Tw0Thre3 1 year ago
Dam bro this is strait firee yu ever tryin to collab im down jus hit me upp
Tubeyhead 1 year ago
HOTT!!!
Mizta2NE 1 year ago
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come thru check my version!! on my page
00MONEY 1 year ago
cooooool!
mamaschannel1 1 year ago
shit...bring this fire to our collab please man...you a beast
TheKingofpassion 1 year ago
this is fire keep it up
ShaqqMoneyBeats 1 year ago
ayo I checked you out now show some luv and check me out..I dont have a lot of views cause Im not computer friendly and dont have a lot of networking skills but I think I have one of tha best verses on this track and I have checked out at least 60-70 of them and I only heard 3 including this one that are worthy of pain checking out
1marquesparks7584 1 year ago
honest opinion and constructive criticism: shldnt have had the autotune, too much repetition, not really sayin enough in the verse....bars need to be a whole lot stronger...good luck tho
DatgurlKP 1 year ago
You killed it! Best version
djyoungprice 1 year ago
this shit was tight fam i hope 1 of us win
LyricalDevils 1 year ago
Lol, cool bro, sounding like you were having fun with this! Cool remix though bro, good luck in the competition, hope you'll check my new holiday song "Christmas Time" Merry Christmas Eve Holmey!
JhuntdaProdigy 1 year ago
or just 1st british asian ever haha jus playin. this is hella good
hydropill 1 year ago
Damn you Really killed this
ShizzGoneMusic 1 year ago
haa nice :P made ma day
stunta567890 1 year ago
are you asian?
SicFloBeatz 1 year ago
NICE`JOB`FAM.....CHECK`ME`OUT......T-PAIN`FT`KILLA.L
MrKillal 1 year ago
check my music video to it
sk8ingballer 1 year ago
Good promoting.! U went hardd.!
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Check mine.!
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Katiejtq2010 1 year ago
This is real good! Keep doing it for Britain, you'll get there some day! Nice Flow (:
YoungJayHQ 1 year ago
Shit Hard Keep It Up
WideAwakeCriminals 1 year ago
You sent me a message asking for honest advice for this, so here it is:
1 Remove any additions like the "du-dudum"s at the end, because chances are TPain and friends wont be wanting to re-edit to remove that from the file. You would be better off with just killing the verse.
2 The "doubler" or "straight reverb" is a bit high and makes the recording seem pitchy. Lower it a bit for a more natural feel.
Do these and you're going to have a much more promising entry. I love the style!
vudukatacomb 1 year ago
@vudukatacomb Ay you gave him a honest opinion can you dew tha same for me
PimpinOnDaDaily 1 year ago
Wow, i like it!! nice beat, Amazing!!!! ♥♥♥!
Ladythrasza 1 year ago
ya blood im feelin it rude bwoi
swiph1 1 year ago
Now this is good. :)
ComRadKeL 1 year ago
lithis was good man now check out my version plz
yungdsj 1 year ago
Awesome sound with head phones on....and great rapping !
rrogers2009 1 year ago
@rrogers2009 LOL! :D HEADPHONES! MAKE A TRACK BETTER!
OfficialAspMusic 1 year ago
@OfficialAspMusic Hell yea they dew ha
PimpinOnDaDaily 1 year ago
daammmmmmm he went inn!!!!!!!! nice job man!
YoungBraVe15 1 year ago
@YoungBraVe15 THANKS! MAYNE!
OfficialAspMusic 1 year ago
@OfficialAspMusic no prob bro!! keep it up yu go hard!
YoungBraVe15 1 year ago
goddamn!! your the reason i dont wanna enter this compitition!! haha i think this is my fav. you went hard!
keep it up *thumbs up*
--K.I.D.
0oLiiNkZZo0 1 year ago
@0oLiiNkZZo0 THANKS FOR THAT COMMENT xD JUST ENTER FOR FUN HOMIE!"
OfficialAspMusic 1 year ago
nice m8. Real complete track. *thumbs up*. send some comments back my way T-Pain Ft. Incite- Motivated
WaRpEdProductionz 1 year ago
@WaRpEdProductionz THANKS!
OfficialAspMusic 1 year ago