Nice effort - thanks!
I agree with cmonsense: there's really too much going on in the video, with the result that the overall message gets lost.
Also, you might try using a spell-checker...
EcoDad 5 years ago
there are too many things competing for a viewer's attention in this video: the music, the text and the voice.
cmonsense 5 years ago
I like your video and especially it's topic. Thanks for posting!
jollygreencar 5 years ago
Nice effort - thanks!
I agree with cmonsense: there's really too much going on in the video, with the result that the overall message gets lost.
Also, you might try using a spell-checker...
EcoDad 5 years ago
there are too many things competing for a viewer's attention in this video: the music, the text and the voice.
cmonsense 5 years ago
I like your video and especially it's topic. Thanks for posting!
jollygreencar 5 years ago