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[ily143xDD]

awh! i should have read this forever ago! its amazing so far!

[grovychic2]

It's soooo realistic! I love it !

[lovejonas90]

interesting with the western scene ahah but in my mind its modern

me likeyy :]

[lovejonas90]

interesting with the western scene ahah but in my mind its modern

me likeyy :]

[dreamerxnelena]

great pilot ep! :D

[MiaStoryMusic]

Love it! :D  ♥

[xAshuleexLuvzxNickyx]

haha im REALLY late but i just realized i havent subbed to ur stories!!! :/ and i read ur old stories before! :) AND YEAH ... oops sorry for the caps. x) but anyways YEAH! I LOVE IT ALREADY! :DD

[EpicNelenaStories]

AHHHHH!!! :D

[fakerocker109]

very original,unique,fantabulous!!l­ol :D!!!

[fakerocker109]

What program did you use to make the video?The story was awesome!

[JonasBros4ever321]

A totally unique and fabulous idea!

[JonasBros4ever321]

Ooo looks good =)

[ladiicrazii234]

Oh, how I love bad boys :)

[LovelyLiLAmy]

im so late on reading this but uh i love ur story like always. :D

[NickJonaslover424x3]

omg nishh! i totally love this!!

it's SOOO different!

i love the western late 30s spin you put on the story!

can't wait for nelenaaaaaaaa<3

[TinkerBellForever12]

Its really good.&

Nick is a bad boy .xD

[xHeyKat]

haha i kinda like but not the western but oh well im still gonna watch :D

haha cant wait for nelena moments xD

lol when i saw theres gonna be a graphic scene , i was ohh, haha!

[TheFanFab]

Omg something I wuz NOT excpecting from you!So unique I really liked the idea!:)

[NiShiLuvers]

It's a lot different fromt he other videos I have watched from you but amazing!

I love it!

[luvnelenaaa1]

okay so this is really diffrent from the other stories oh and loved it

[Alex13Channel]

cool

[xkimberlay17x]

sounds good, can't wait for more!

[mmccon01]

i like it its much different than the others i think is very interesting i love it

[7jackass77]

its really goooddddddddddd :))))))))

[Paris1143]

Really good/different ... but in a good way :)

xoXOxo Ciara

[cvstar411]

make the next one!!! =)

[hotmiddlechild002]

omg loved it want the next!!!

[wowpownow12]

wow this is well dif then any others i hav read! amazin =] x

[lovertribethe]

oh, awesome! i love it :)

[TheOnlyCassidy]

woow! this is really originl,, sure i'm gonna love it! i do already XD

[ballagirlly123]

Whoa ! This is different, I really like it ! :) one of my favorite 1st chapters of the fall so farr

[Kimlovesk2]

I like ittt! [:

[xsugaprincesshx]

AWESOME, ITS FUNNY BUT REALLY GOOD

[BonnieWrightFan4ever]

Great, please continue

[DemiOSelena]

amezing!!

[JonasBrothersXOLover]

Wow love it

it's so original :) x

[silver307rulez]

Thats so good :D

So cant wait!

I could picture everything in my head, it was brilliant! So excited :]

and love the theme

[xxtaytaydemidemi]

amazing! i love it :)

[LankanLil]

Haaha, loved it. OMG this is going to be a GOOD series. Can't wait.

Great WORK Nishitaa!

[comonnnnnnn]

gr8 so far

er..is it nelena??

[selgomezfan14kay]

YAY! new story... :D

[JasmineTilman]

love it!

[sugerplanet]

i love how its not like high school or collage or any of the other stuff itcstands out

[GintareAuglyteMusic]

awesome i like how it's set :)

its different.

[678trriple98212]

eh :/

[mzzjudylee]

awesomeeeee ;D

haha what is it with you and Texas stuff? xD

[GuitarGeek211]

i could totally picture nick as a cowboy XD can't wait until the next

[Brie651]

Haha!! Sooo good so far!!

[YourBestFriendME]

okay if there is a graphic scene please tell when it is about to happen so i can skip it cuz i just hate it when people don't tell you and then you read something you wish you hadn't. so please tell me anyways i thought it was good

[elvisjecca]

love it

[RawrItzSamx3]

hahaha, Wow, Nicholas really is the badass in the Wild West :) He sounds sexy as well ;D

I can't wait for the next one cause this story instantly caught my attentions with its different plot and background. I really like it :DD

Keep Up The Good Work, You Deserve It :D

[selenagomezzfan1]

awesome

[tootoosmith]

i totally luv the theme

[PuertoRicanBratz]

lovee it!

[swirlygirly411]

totally kewlz. i can't wait to read this!

[LittleMissBroadway34]

Awesome!! I cant wait for more! its very different then other nelena stories

[XxXDazzleGurlXxX]

LOVE IT!!!!! check out my nelena trailer

[JonasLuv4Eva7]

Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I love it =D=D=D=D=D=D

[XxSelenaDemiFan1xX]

amazing, cant wait til selena steps in. and im fine with the warning, lol

[betskiboo]

post nect one soon

i luvvv the theme of the story

[britter1331]

AMAZING!!! cowboy nick in my head is SOOO HAWTT!

[freakyyellowgirl]

Loved it ha im so excited for the next one.

[Deniselvr1]

aww AMAZINGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!! loll

[cheerleader8yrs]

love it nick is always the bad ass guy

[smileyfacegem]

LOVE IT!!!!! cant wait for the next one!!!!!=]=]

[partypuppy22]

haha i was confused tell i read your little "author note"

[micbobo666]

awesome like ALL your other stories and I can't wait for episode 2

[Nelenaxostories]

Ah-mazing:)

You are such an amazing writer.

I shall admire you from a distance through my laptop screen. Lol

Can't wait for the next episode.

[singingvamp19]

nice the wild wild west lol

[mrsjoejonas4578]

Loved it!! Its so different, and thats what i love about it!! :D

[mrsnickjonasJB4ever]

i love it can wait for the next one!! i like nick as a bad boy.

[laughlovelaura]

Well, not technically, but in my mind I do. i agree very very much lol

[jbluvrr98]

love it oo Nick as a bad ass ♥

[pinkypietige]

Dont love the bad words. :(

[nishitaa1]

aww sorry

[pinkypietige]

Its ok, besides that its fine.

[taylorlautnerfan455]

cool! :)

[missmorphin11]

this is so different! I LOVE IT!

[joennie86]

is this a nelena,nemi,niley seris?

[nishitaa1]

Nelena

[disneychannelrules12]

:D this looks reaaallllllly good!!!

[beachgirl1754]

lol nice :)

[kinnytonkinkinny]

i freakin loved it :D

I am moving to Texas :D

Awesome girl, make more.

[robomex55555]

this IS different from what u normally write. but a good kind of different. :)

[Destar2009]

I love it!!! OMG!! Nick is so bad!

[smileymileyjyrus]

This is amazing Nishi :)

I want Nick to be my bad ass in the 1930's

I can imagine him with a cigarette in the side of his mouth XD

Haha simply amazing

[jesusrulesmyworld]

cool

[xoNelenaFanatic]

fanatastic! :)

[pandinha66]

It's cool and different. I loved it. READ MY SERIES PLEASE

[SelenaSnuggle35]

What did you do now nick?!

lol it was awsome!!

Wen r u posting the next one??

[myworldpeace]

OMG! GIRL THIS IS AMAZING!

the theme is SOO original! u should be soo proud of yourself.

can't wait for the rest!

[peacelovejonas2235]

wow. not what i expected, but really good!!(:

[lipstick4kisses]

luuv it :D cant wait for next

[danideangulo]

Love it!!!

Great!!! EPPI!!!

[TeamNelena2]

awesome :)

i loved it gurl

[girlypie101]

Awesome

[trianagirl12]

i luv it good job!

[BritinieMartinie]

Fabulous! :)

[jbwithme445]

=D wow looks good!!

[xxkncgurrlxx]

ah-mazing dahling!

soo original!

[kitkatkirsty]

amazing! love all the description <3

[123lolaLOLAlola123]

that was awesome :))) i like the 1930's thing, it sounds and is amazing :)))))) 5/5

[cookiemuffinx3]

haha xD

awsomee:)

iloveit<3

[DemiHeartJoe]

:o oh!

more please!!!:D

I like this style of writing. I always wondered how would it be.

I wonder how Nick would look in a cowboy outfit .. xD so goofy! but hot(;

[MapleStoryGrl]

thanks!

[UltimateLuvStories]

Love it Hunnie

[LOL123BFF]

awesome :D