omg! loved it expect i dont like how u say a few sentences then months later or minutes just talk bout it more and also if u put it up in the video u can write more and also if u write it ontop of the persons face it will help :)
yeah, i would make it longer, but its a one-shot and im trying to fit it all in....i didnt realize it when i first started writing it that it was more like a movie type of story....
omg! loved it expect i dont like how u say a few sentences then months later or minutes just talk bout it more and also if u put it up in the video u can write more and also if u write it ontop of the persons face it will help :)
but AMAZING
tinkerbelllover04 2 years ago
yeah, i would make it longer, but its a one-shot and im trying to fit it all in....i didnt realize it when i first started writing it that it was more like a movie type of story....
joebrosrock100 2 years ago
omg if she dies, that will be soooo depressing!
nileyobsesser 2 years ago
loved it great job
dancerbabe234 2 years ago
wow that is so sad cant wait fo rnext one
tennischick564 2 years ago
Poor niley
she has to survive
free1heart 2 years ago