As He Slept - Original Poem

[YaYaJuke]

my grandpa had a dream of heaven and he said it seemed long but yet i know it was maybe a second or so. and then he said... maybe we are God's dream... for a day is like a year and year is like a day... kind of like my dream.

[Aslanspal]

Comfort in Melancholy

Three cheers well done! hooray! hooray! hooray!

Baz Lurman(Moulin Rouge) look to the vid and images

the voice was really professional

music good as well

a very well rounded piece

[hartnell114]

oh i didnt mean to sound melancholy, it was just a poem :)

glad you liked it :)

[PinkEarth88]

Thats awesome! :-)

a few weeks ago i thought of doing one of my poems in video format, like a short movie with a voiceover, but i dont have the guts to show off my poems, im such a wimp! haha

5/5 :-) xx

[hartnell114]

nooooonono, please do! :D

id literally love to see it! :D

x

[PinkEarth88]

haha maybe...

and itll have to wait until i get a handycam :-p

x

[hartnell114]

now!

[PinkEarth88]

hahaha i cant do it now! its not like i can just get an extension lead and carry my monitor and tower and webcam to the park to film it! :-p

[hartnell114]

sure you can haha,if not,im sure you can find park video haha

[PinkEarth88]

hahahaha

id rather wait till i have a handycam! :-p

[hartnell114]

handycams are poo, youd be much better off getting a bad mobile to film it :p

[MeThacha]

This made me cry, so beautiful.

[hartnell114]

eek,sorry! :)

glad you liked it!:)

[JadeyChi]

Nice poem, Rob. <3

[hartnell114]

thankyou jade :)

[nsgmusic]

nice.... love a bit of chopin

[hartnell114]

:) who doesnt :D

thanks for watching nutyas :)

great happy shiny face btw!

[hartnell114]

: this was so fullscreen when it was first uploaded, theres always soemthing! damn you youtube! lol

[hartnell114]

:D thanks!!

i just subscribed too haha,lucky devils!

[crazybilby]

whoa! :O that guy has an awesome voice for voice overs! so u wrote that eh? pretty nice

[hartnell114]

yes i wrote it!

only peoms i have read was tyger, something about somedude possibly going outside and stabbing someone, i dno,ended in 'i though your arm' so go figure lol,and urm, something from a book published in 1928 called ,the winged horse :)

its huge,i'll never read it all lol.

if you like,maybe you could do one with me? :)

[ozzybhoii07]

Great Poem!

[hartnell114]

Cheers...Osmaan ;) hehe, is that getting old already? because i am laughing like a monkey peeing into his own mout...bad analogy lmao

[FantasticBabblings]

Thanks Robb. It looks great, and of course I love it since I am in love with the sound of my own voice ;)

[hartnell114]

who the hell isnt!? :D

i hope you didnt mind me putting this up here again! :)

hope to see you soon!

[HoneyDripSuperSweet]

Well, it's about time lol

but seriously, this was awesome

FantasticBabblings always has a great narrative voice

Very well written! =)

[hartnell114]

:) thanks alex!

i always wanted to do something a bit better with this! haha, now its better than what id done before :p

he is a brilliant aurator! :)

thanking you!

[RogCBrand]

That was a great poem Rob! And he really does have the perfect narrator's voice that works so well on stuff like this!

[hartnell114]

i know, im the first to his videos when i see them haha, infact, if the sky turned black in mid day the clouds merged to blood red and men on horseback were coming from lightening from the sky, id be watching his new video! haha:D

[DTtwinsangry]

Horray!!! New video!!!! This is great!!! It's beautiful!!!!!!!! The musci and all the photos are really good chosen!!! And the poem is really great, whose voice is it? Sooo romantic:D Great video!

Love

Twincerely

[hartnell114]

its the voice of my good buddy Phil!

he is here on youtube called fantasticbabblings, one of the smartest most kind and simply wonderful people i know!

[BarryAldridge]

Great Poem. Great seeing you on youtube again Rob

[hartnell114]

thanks barry :)

hopefully more to come soon, when i have snuck out of my shell!

[TheThomasShow]

Cool viod man loved it 5* as always

[hartnell114]

:D Thanks Thomas!!!

cant wait to see ya again myself!

[utunderground]

OMG man, what can I say.  This poem brought tears to my eyes, you did a fantastic job with the video clips to acomp. it. there is not enough stars to give you. 5/5

[hartnell114]

:D

thats the first time i have heard you use those words! :)

thankyou so much for your support nick!

haha,ego boost right there :D

[TheBorzoi]

I really am jealous of your poem writing skills.

I can't think of anything to write for a poem, or even a song.

[hartnell114]

it wasa little old this one :)

but really isnt hard at all! i can help you if you like, perhaps you could even borrow one of mine,i could make one for you if you like? :)

[TheBorzoi]

It won't have the same effect if a poem for someone, from me, was not written by me.

Getting help writing one is different though.

[hartnell114]

i could help :)

[TheBorzoi]

I might hold you to that some time.

[FroGhandi]

woo, hes back, sorta xD

[hartnell114]

haha i am :D

even more soon, theres my naked vlog with chuck norris (really) and my 5 facts thing, meh lol :D

thanks for watching!

[moomay11649]

Thought-provoking poem Robb. Love F.B. voice.

[hartnell114]

Glad you like it!! :D

he has an amazing voice!

[hartnell114]

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ThankYou :)